SwaSan TS: The feeling of Love

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello all

Most of u must be wondering who this alien is, well am vaishnavi nd am new to swaragini forum.But I followed SwaSan since starting nd ireally love varun kapoor! As watching yesterdays epi,this thought just entered my mind thought of penning it down.

This is my fourth writing work in IF, but first one on SwaSan, hope You all like it 😳

SwaSan TS: The feeling of Love

Prologue

Swara's POV

I felt my hand being gripped as tears rolled out of eyes.I looked aside into my dads reassuring eyes. I felt as if my life's ultimate dream has now been fulfilled. Me entering my home with both of my parents catching hands. That happiness could never be expressed in words.My mom gave a reassuring smile,a smile for which I have been longing since ages. Finally, I did it, I finally united my parents.

As I entered home dida engulfed me in her warm hug and made me cry even more with happiness.There was Dadi standing at a corner with a remorse feeling of sadness on her face, sure I knew the reason. The smile was erased from my face as raginis face flashed in front of my eyes.I closed my assuring myself not to spoil my bubble of happiness.

*****

Finally, I entered my room, varied memories refreshed my mind. The time I Spent with MY SiSTER Ragini.It felt sick of me to compare my sister and this new ragini. Never knew people can change colors this drastically.

As I was approaching towards the cupboard, I stopped in my tracks as my reflection mirror stopped me. There was this different Swara in there. But what caught my eyes was that mangalsutra and Sindoor. As I touched the sindoor, Sanskars face flashed in front off my eyes!

"I love you Swara"

His words were ringing in my ears. I immediately removed my hand from my maang!

Suddenly I felt I was losing something, something precious, something inseparable from me. I felt as if I was incomplete.

"what kind of a feeling is this" I questioned myself.

*******

I hope you all liked.

Please Do Like and comment.I assure you all the First part soon!

ā¤ļø Vaishnavi


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Mallika-E-Zain thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Interesting...
Pls write more on this..
Wanna read more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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WOW AWESOME TS,LOVED IT A LOTšŸ˜›šŸ‘šŸ‘,PLS CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting start
continue and update chapter soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Wow...
Nice concept...
Loved it...
Continue soon...
Please pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
Loved the prologue!! would love to read it! pm me if possible!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start so she has feelings for him. But she s nt want to accept. Nice pls continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A beautiful start! Loved the start and it has made me very eager to know what happens next. Will Swara go back to MM or will she call Sanskaar? Update soon please. Can't wait to read more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Story starts in swara pov...nice...
Loved it...
Do cont. ...
Pm me while updating further. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow awsm..
Loved it..
Will be waiting for ur next update..
Try to update asap !!
N if possible do pm..
Tc

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