AN UNSPOKEN PROMISE & A HEARTFELT THANK U -SwaSan SS Ch2 Pg3 12/10

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: meghaashvikian
Beautiful story 😳
love to read further
Waiting for the next part
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Thank u! 😃

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Smilelicious
Niki 😳🤗
A new and different story 👏
Sorry i just saw this, so couldn't comment on the first part before. The first part was amazing, especially i loved when Sanskar gifted her the sari
The updates are very interesting😆😳
Update soon ⭐️

Preet!! Thanks a lot sweety! 🤗🤗 I'm glad u r liking this dear.😳

@red: 😆 There is lot more to come dearie, hang on! 😆 I'm writing my own version of Inception here! 😆

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Hey Niki...😊

Great Start. I caught up with both chapters just today. Have liked the post you mentioned about PMs, so send me one when you update! 😊

Really liked this line from the 1st chapter "Sanskaar was perfect even in his frailties as he was in his strengths". 😉 Snippets like that stick with me long after I finish reading, this one was so deftly done I loved it.

Loved the Tagore poem you had inserted, very evocative. And the 2nd chapter had this whole divorce drama portrayed in a palatable way: that Swara, for once, is thinking of Sanskaar's feelings also in this, she doesn't want to give him flase hopes.

Waiting to see the next chap, how they transition from that phase to the very blissful one they are in now.

BTW I am going to be chasing you for your update on Confessions! Come on yaar, ab tho confession kara do!

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Hey Niki...😊

Great Start. I caught up with both chapters just today. Have liked the post you mentioned about PMs, so send me one when you update! 😊

Really liked this line from the 1st chapter "Sanskaar was perfect even in his frailties as he was in his strengths". 😉 Snippets like that stick with me long after I finish reading, this one was so deftly done I loved it.

Loved the Tagore poem you had inserted, very evocative. And the 2nd chapter had this whole divorce drama portrayed in a palatable way: that Swara, for once, is thinking of Sanskaar's feelings also in this, she doesn't want to give him flase hopes.

Waiting to see the next chap, how they transition from that phase to the very blissful one they are in now.

BTW I am going to be chasing you for your update on Confessions! Come on yaar, ab tho confession kara do!

Viji 🤗 I'm glad u r liking this so far dear. And yea will surely PM u. 😃

@Red: Thank u dear. 😳 That line was inspired by the thought that sometimes even though we know some emotions are bad, we kind of like them evoked in others because of us... In this case possessiveness... Just the right amount and it can create wonders. 😉

@green: 😆😆 After this huny, after this... 😆