NEW SwaSan SS - JAB PYAAR KISI SE HOTA HAIN- Final Part update Pg 52

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

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Posted: 9 years ago

#391

Part-10

Wow dear...

It's awesome and mind blowing update...

Just loved it...

Beautiful...

Finally swasan got married...

Loved there romance...

It so hot...hot...

Continue soon...

Thanks for the pm..

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sonal

@SONAL30

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Posted: 9 years ago

#392

Hey dear

Beautiful n hot update

swasan were☺️

Loved their romance i mean honeymoon

N the prologue was also awrsome

SwSan's kids🤣nautanki no 1

Loved it

Beautiful end yaar

Thanks 4 the pm

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#393

Naina...I just don't know how I missed this SS earlier. 😊 Very nice, hatke take on SwaSan, RagYa and Adarsh---Parineeta.

I liked your story concept--you had kept Sanskaar's desolation and pain at losing Kavita, so very real. And the way Swara loves him at first sight, pines for him.

My favorite part of the SS, was the chapters where they run into each other in Mumbai, and Sanskaar tries so hard to keep away from Swara! But in the end, he just can't resist and the way they come together 😳

Nice work. Look forward to reading more from you.

Thanks--Viji