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JIDHNYASA

@Jidnyasa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Awww..

That was so cute of Swara..

Swara confession..

👏👏👏👏

Loved it

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

A BIG Thank u to all u wonderful ppl for ur lovely comments! 🤗 Will reply individually tomorrow. 😳 Till thn thank u again for reading and liking it. 🤗

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Hiya! This was so cute- their chemistry and overall adorable connection came through so well. Very nice! 👏

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Swathy

@SwathyS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Agar aise ache ache swasan scence hame serial mein dekhne ko mil jaye ...

Was g8 dear

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dundumol96

@dundumol96

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

How nice

its very pleasure to read such a simple and light hearted story

keep writing more

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: CutiePie..
Its soo cute

Thank u ! 😃

Originally posted by: JazzyM
You have made life beautiful for the young couple...
The posting was full of laughter and new blossoming ...

Aww thank u for such a lovely comment! 🤗

Originally posted by: SONAL30
Beautifully written nik👏
Loved his frustration n her chilled out attitude
His one n only enemy was none other than her stupid suitcase 🤣
Do write more😃

Thnk u dearie! 🤗 N yeah I love my Swara! I used to watch this show earlier only for her before all crying drama started...🥱 She is such a delightful character. 😃 Currently her life is a terrible mess, but I'm sure once it's all sorted she will be back to her element! 😳

N oh yeah, I really hv a dbt he hates that suitcase! That is one of my fav Swasan scenes btw! 😆

Originally posted by: maaneetfan
This is sooo amazingly cute and sooo much like i really want it to be in the show...im just reading it over n over again and imagining my darling sansku doing all those awesome things. Muuuaaahhh dil jeet liya todey os ne!

Aww thnk u dear! 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: anu91
Beautiful and lovely os...
No words...

Thank u so much!! 😃

Originally posted by: Asha122
Beautifully written Niki...👏
Sanskaar biggest enemy is Suitcase...🤣
Swara attitude was superb... Loved the way she talked seeing Sanskaar photo...❤️
Do write more...😊

Thank u dear!! 😳😳

Originally posted by: ros_aavir
Aw this is soo cute!

I loved how bindaas Swara was and how intense Sanky was.

Really nicely written! 👏

Thank u ! 😃 And yup Bindaas Swara is my fav too! 😃

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Wow Niki...This OS was like my favorite hut cup of masala chai. Warm, aromatic, delicious and filled with goodness! 😊 I just felt so pleased and fuzzy and satisfied after I read it!

Loved the deft humorous touches you put in-- the maa--baba jaap! 😆 Yes, Sansku the dude will have to put up with a lot of that. Hopefully Swara realizes hubbies need attention too, and typically don't like it if they are deprived of focus for too long! 😉

As to the characterization of Sansku as a brilliant "criminal" mastermind 😆 cum intense loverboy cum silly little kid-- 🤣 That man contains multitudes, I tell you!

Thanks for the PM. I really liked reading this.

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: medhasarkar
Nik right?
It was something we all wish would happen on the show...and probably will...but you wrote it so well and kept in tandem with what we see on screen.

lovely.

I really liked your way of writing...Its soft and smooth and yet its decisive.

love---
medha.

Thank u for such kind words dear... I'm really glad u liked the way it's written.😳 I think the only way I can successfully complete a piece of work is if I write it in a screenplay format, keeping it in tandem with the actual show's styling. I mean I have tried writing AU's but somehow it always ends up incomplete because either my laziness catches up with me or I hit a block... So recently I have decided to stick to this style until I'm really committed to complete the other style of works I start! Coz I already have enough people hunting me for my incomplete works elsewhere! 😆

And it's Niki dear... But Nik is kool too! 😃

Originally posted by: Smilelicious
Niki 🤗
This is such a beautiful and cute OS
Kash kuch eesa serial mein bhi dekhne ko mil jaye ❤️
Amazingly written 👏
And loved the title ❤️😳

Thank u preet! 🤗 And I'm glad u liked the title! I actually wanted to name it something lame like 'Black suitcase - my mortal enemy ' or something!! 😆😆 But then when I wrote the last line, I remembered my fav song and kept that as the title! 😳

Originally posted by: Anbhigya
Awwwieee dis is so cuteee... Sanskuuu... I so wish dat he feels dis immense care from swara very soon... Awsum...

Thank u dear!! 😃😃

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa
Awww..
That was so cute of Swara..

Swara confession..
👏

Loved it

Thank u!! 😳😳

Edited by Lifez_Beautiful - 9 years ago

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Hiya! This was so cute- their chemistry and overall adorable connection came through so well. Very nice! 👏

Thank u so much dear! 😃😃

Originally posted by: swa291
Agar aise ache ache swasan scence hame serial mein dekhne ko mil jaye ...

Was g8 dear

I know right?! I too would love to see Helly and Varun in this scene, they will nail it! But then again I think CVs have something more awesome in store for our Swasan!! I'm hoping for the best!! 😃

And thanks a lot for commenting dear! 😃

Originally posted by: Miss-swasan
THAT IS SO CUTE

Thank u !! 😳😳

Originally posted by: dundumol96
How nice

its very pleasure to read such a simple and light hearted story

keep writing more

Aww thank u yar! Glad u liked it! 😃

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Wow Niki...This OS was like my favorite hut cup of masala chai. Warm, aromatic, delicious and filled with goodness! 😊 I just felt so pleased and fuzzy and satisfied after I read it!

Loved the deft humorous touches you put in-- the maa--baba jaap! 😆 Yes, Sansku the dude will have to put up with a lot of that. Hopefully Swara realizes hubbies need attention too, and typically don't like it if they are deprived of focus for too long! 😉

As to the characterization of Sansku as a brilliant "criminal" mastermind 😆 cum intense loverboy cum silly little kid-- 🤣 That man contains multitudes, I tell you!

Thanks for the PM. I really liked reading this.

Hehe Viji, I'm glad u enjoyed my version of ur fav masala chai dear!! 🤗 And yup was in a buoyant mood yesterday, thought will write something light coz my lazy mind was trying to postpone writing some emo stuff I'm supposed to be writing in the meanwhile! 😳

And yeah I'm waiting to hear him taunt her later in the show (no hurries CVs!) to see him tease her about her 'maa baba' jaap... 😆 Seriously I'm really liking the pace of this show and I must say Sanz too believes in slow and steady wins the race coz see swalak was like instant coffee... tasty but not lasting... Swasan is going to be that slow filter coffee whose taste will linger for a much longer time, so much so that u will always return for more!! 😳 (Opps sry looks like u chai analogy got me on my train for my coffeeland! 😆 I need my coffee nw! ugh 🥱😆)

PS : @brown : Errr did I spam u by mistake dear?😕 Coz I haven't sent any PMs regarding this to anybody... 😕

Edited by Lifez_Beautiful - 9 years ago