SwaSan Drabble - Mehndi Tera naam ki

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Swara sitting on couch & looking at her mehndi.
Just then she found Sanskaar's name imprinted on her hand wid mehndi. ( Ragini just to pinch Swara hz written ' SANSKAAR ' instead of 'S' )

Flashback -
In SwaSan's room
Ragini just informed them she kidnapped Shomi & if dey want Shomi back safely dey shld nt harm her Laksh ji & shld marry eachother wid proper rituals
Ragini leaves

Swara cries & grabs Sanskaar's collar - Sanskaar ye sab tumhari wajh se ho raha hai...Bahut khush hoge na tum aaj ki jo tum chahate wo hi hone wala hai.
Sanskaar - main kya chahata tha Swara?
*intense eyelock*
Swara - Mujhe...Mujhe chahate the na tum?
Sanskaar - chahata tha nahi chahata hoon..aur humesha tumhe hi chahata rahunga...
Swara - Mera matlb hai ki tum mujhe paana chahate the na ? Kyunki tum mujhse pya...
Sanskaar - Pyaar karta hoon..? Haan main tumhe pyaar karta hoon aur humesha karta rahunga lekin iska matlab ye nahi ki main tumhe paane k liye ye sab karu
Swara - Haan toh tumne kyun kiya Laksh ko kidnap? Na tum Laksh ko kidnap karte naa Ragini maa ko kidnap karti aur naa aaj humari shadi ho rahi hoti
*intense eyelock*
Sanskaar - Haan kiya maine Laksh ko kidnap out of way jake lekin ye baad tumhe bhi pata hai ki mere intentions wrong nahi the..main sirf itna chahata tha ki Ragini apne gunah confess karle aur phir tumhe inn saare dukho se aazaadi mil jaye... Aur jahaan tak baat rahi humari shadi ki toh don't worry humare paas aaj raat tak ka waqt hai..hum kuch na kuch zarur kar lenge... Ye shadi nahi hogi..
Swara - par mehndi
Sanskaar - mehndi pe mera naam mat likhwana aur agar koi bole toh 'S' likhwa Lena..
*awkward eyelock*
Sanskaar - aise Kya dekh rahi ho?
'S' for Swara
'S' for Sanskaar nahi

Flashback ends..

As Swara wz stairing her mehndi & looking at Sanskaar's name.. She hz tears in her eyes...
She didn't realized when Sanskaar came there & he too saw his name on her hands... He noticed her tears & thought she isn't happy..he wz hurt bt avoided his own feelings... Her smile matters most to him..
Sanskaar forwarded his hanky to her..
Swara showed her mehndi to him signing him she can't wipe off her tears ...
Her hands r nt free..
Sanskaar - oh sorry.. He makes puppy face & keeps his hanky inside his pocket..
Sanskaar - main mom ko bulata hoon wo aansuon poch degi tumhare
Swara - sssa
B4 she could stop him from calling.
Sanskaar called Sujata...
Sujata comes - kya hua chore...
Ye kya mahri bahu ko rulaya tune?
Swara - mom nahi wo...
Sanskaar - mom Swara k haatho mein mehndi lagi toh aap pls uske aansuon poch dijiye..takes out hanky & gives to Sujata..
Sujata - bawla hogya hai kya chore
Tune maahre ko iss kaam k liye athe bulaya? 😲
Tu khud apni bindhni k aansuon poch..
Sanskaar - main kaise... Okay fine Mera hanky wapas do mom..
Sujata - Arey thaare rumaal se toh maine ghee wale haath saaf karliye..wo roti bana rahi thi na aur tune maahre ko bula liya πŸ˜ƒ
Apni bindhni k aansuon pochne k liye rumaal ki kay zarurat thare ko? Chal apne haatho se apni bindhni k aansuon poch 😑
Sanskaar - mom

Swara wz still crying remembering Shomi ...she wz lost in her thoughts...
Suddenly she felt current inside her body..
Sanskaar was rubbing her fingers over her face & wz wipping her tears..
*Ishq wala passionate eyelock*

Sujata clicks their pic... Mahare chore Sur bahu ki jodi ko kisi k nazar naa lage 😳 & leaves..

Sanskaar - Swara ek baat bolu?
Swara - Kya?
Sanskaar - Mera naam mitta do
*intense eyelock*
Swara - nahi mitta sakti
Sanskaar - par kyun?
Swara - ab mittane ka fayda nahi kyunki mehndi racch chuki hai...mitta bhi diya toh tumhara naam nahi mitega mera haatho se kyunki mehndi ka rang chadh chuka hai..
Dida kehti thi jab mehndi ka rang gehra racchta hai toh pati Bahut pyaar karta hai... ( she suddenly realized what she said )
*awkward eyelock*
Swara breaks awkwardness & coughs...
Sanskaar rushes to get water for her..
He brings glass of water for her.
Swara shows her hands
Sanskaar - oh sorry.. He makes her drink water...
Swara - Sanskaar maa ko kuch nahi hoga na? Ragini maa k sath kuch galat nahi karegi na? She cries again
Sanskaar - hum maa k sath kuch galat nahi hone denge.. He wipes off her tears using his fingers...
She again felt kuch kuch...*intense eyelock*

sorry aur kuch title samjh nahi aa raha tha πŸ˜”πŸ€”

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tootiefrootie11 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely! I so wish we get such intensity in the show and also keeping that deep down understanding they have despite Swara's current anger.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it! Wish this comes out to be d actual scene in the show.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Jo bhi samajh mein aaya it was very very nicely written
I love the stories more when I can picture the words

I could clearly see the scene happening in front of my eyes

+++++
Swara you are a girl and you don;t know ki bleach se mehendi nikal jaati hai

Rach bhi gayi toh you can use Fem or any other bleach on anskaar and make Sanskaar to S but haan that is if you really wanna
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Lovely! I so wish we get such intensity in the show and also keeping that deep down understanding they have despite Swara's current anger.

haha show mein toh opposite hi milta hai πŸ˜”
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely...hope we do get something along the lines and even amongst the anger and frustration on part of swara, the makers retain the innate understanding between them...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Luv_Ishveer

Loved it! Wish this comes out to be d actual scene in the show.

thanku 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chahanya

Jo bhi samajh mein aaya it was very very nicely written

I love the stories more when I can picture the words

I could clearly see the scene happening in front of my eyes

+++++
Swara you are a girl and you don;t know ki bleach se mehendi nikal jaati hai

Rach bhi gayi toh you can use Fem or any other bleach on anskaar and make Sanskaar to S but haan that is if you really wanna

girl hai isilye toh mehndi mein Se name nahi rub karna chahati πŸ˜›
she too feels fr him lekin accept nahi karti
uska naam mehndi se bhale hi mitta le lekin phir Dil Se uska naam kaise mittayegi? πŸ˜‰

Thanku 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Swasan ☺️❀️
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Loved it

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