SwaSan Drabble : Confrontation - Reh bhi na paaye yaar.. - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
awesome yaar.. wish like this something will happen in the show.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: MusicMyLife.

Hi guys 😊
Waz getting serious wala bore so thought of writing this one just for my sake 😛

so dis one z after Swara proves Sanskaar innocent & then in private she ignores Sanskaar 😉



Sanskaar - Thankyou Swara mujhe support karne k liye aur mujhe bacchane k liye.

Swara showing cold shoulder to him & ignoring him.

She goes to take shower without replying.

Swara comes out after taking shower.

Swara drying her wet hairs...Sanskaar admiring her...
Sanskaar - Swara agar tum nahi hoti toh shayd...he notices she looks not interested as she was not giving him bhaav...

Sanskaar gets irritated with her ignorance..

Sanskaar - Swara tum mujhe ignore kar rahi ho?

No reply from Swara...

Swara getting ready... And as she opens Sindoor dibbi to fill her maang... She gets flashes of Sanskaar filling her maang & confessing his love...

Enough is enough saying this she grabs Swara from her shoulder & make her face him...
Intense eyelock..
Sanskaar - You can't ignore me like this...Hua Kya hai?

Swara - Tum mujhse Pyaar karte ho Sanskaar?

Sanskaar gets flashes of his confession okay so now it clicked his mind why she is ignoring him...

Sanskaar - accha toh tum mujhe iss liye ignore kar rahi ho?

Swara looks down...

Sanskaar - Bolo Swara...

Swara - Tumne meri maang isilye bhari Kyunki tum mujhse pyaar karte ho?
Tum itnne selfish kaise ho sakte ho Sanskaar?

Sanskaar - main tumhe kitni baar bol chuka hoon ki tumhari maang maine isilye bhari Kyunki uss waqt mere paas aur koi option nahi tha...

Swara - Toh Tum mujhse pyaar nahi karte?

Sanskaar temaino silent

Swara - koi jawab nahi hai na Sanskaar?

Sanskaar - Haan karta hoon main tumse pyaar 😳 maine pehle bhi kaha hai aur ab bhi kahunga...nahi janta mujhe tumse hi pyaar kyun hua aur kab hua... Bas itna jaanta hoon ki I LOVE YOU aur iss baat k liye main bilkul SORRY nahi hoon..

Intense eyelock... ❤️

Sanskaar continues... Lekin mera pyaar itnaa bhi selfish nahi hai ki just bcz main tumse pyaar karta hoon isilye tumhari maang bhar doon...

Swara - Tum iss Sindoor ki ehmiyaat ko samjhte ho Sanskaar? Ye khel nahi hai 😡

Sanskaar - enough Swara jaanta hoon tumhari life mein iss sindoor ki kya importance hai... Lekin tum mujhe nahi samjh paa rahi ho.. Aur jab tumhe mujhpe bharosa hi nahi toh kyun bachaya mujhe? Jaane deti mujhe jail...khatam ho jati humari kahani...
Pain wala eyelock 💔 Bolo kyun bachaya mujhe?

Swara - Kyunki tum innocent the aur maine sacch ka sath diya bas...

Sanskaar - oh toh tumne mera sath isilye diya Kyunki main innocent tha... Main toh kuch aur hi soch raha tha...
Kya tumne sacch mein mujhe isilye bachaya Kyunki tumhari nazro mein main innocent tha bas isilye? Aur kisi rishtey se nahi?

Swara - haan bas isilye Kyunki main jaanti thi Ragini jhoot bol rahi hai aur tum innocent ho.. Aur kis rishtey ki baat kar rahe ho tum?

Sanskaar fakes smiles & says nothing kisi rishtey ki nahi.. Anyways thanku Swara ...

Swara - yahi haan yahi attitude na tumhara mujhe bilkul pasand nahi 😵

Sanskaar - accha toh agar main apna ye attitude change kardunga toh kya tum mujhe pasand karne lagogi? 😳

Swara gives blank expression & Sanskaar without saying anything leaves from there...

Swara keeps on stairing him until & unless he leaves the room...

Reh bhi na paayein yaar
Seh bhi na paayein yaar
Behti hi jaaye dastaan


Umr bhar ka intezaar
Ik pal bhi na qaraar
Ungli pe nachaaye dastaan
Ho apne roothe, paraaye roothe
Yaar roothe naa...
Khwaab toote, waade toote
Dil yeh toote naa..
Roothe to khuda bhi roothe
Saath chhoote naa
Roothe to khuda bhi roothe
Saath chhoote naa
O Allah wariyan
O main toh haariyan
O tooti yaariyan mila de oye!


I knw it wz hell bad 🤢
Maahre upar macchi mat phekhna pls 😲😆


SwaSan Drabble : Confrontation - Reh bhi na paaye yaar..

Superb SwaSan fanfic, Misha.👏 ⭐️ ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Loved this one...this song is one of my favs...awesome work dear...do write more..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Superbly written...her direct questions and him not knowing how to manage it until he has to blurt out, admitting his love...now her turn..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
I sooo loved this! I so wish we get a mega intense confrontation like this and your ignoring part is already true so am off to pray 😆
⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Mishu Tu mast likhti hai yaar 👏
mazaa aa gaya bygod
moi loved it ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Mishu jhappi pa🤗
What a cute lovely drabble😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Mishu Its really nice. Pls continue yaar
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
I keep writing kuch na kuch & then I forget ki kuch likh k post bhi kiya tha..so absent minded 😔

Sorry guyz can't reply all... but Thanku so much fr reading it & liking it 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Arrey this one also I missed😭
So supeb one...
Written so well...

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