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Roshini Mathews

@RoshiniManeet

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

oh my...i just came across this...if at all swaragini has an end this must be the greatest way to end it...but I want loads from it before that...

lovely writing...for the very first time I felt sorry for lakhsya...thank u for this wonderful piece of work.

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Aafrah Khan Ahluwalia

@Aafrah-SA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Oh My God guys, it's such a surprise to suddenly see so many more comments on the work!

I am glad that many of you did actually go through the dilemma of figuring out initially if the brother is Sanskar or Lakhsya! I wanted to create that stir!

Glad to know you liked it. I will make an index soon, once my SS is over!

Love you all!

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.FairyDust.

@.FairyDust.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

OMG. 😲

This is one of the best i have read on swasan and laksh.

When i first read it, i thought it was sanskar narating and though i was beyond disgusted and irked, i kept reading.

But then when the kavita part came, i doubled back and realized that Swasan were together and that this was from Laksh's POV.

I was shaken so badly that i had to back track and read the whole thing again. I just loved it 👏

The way you kept the suspense, ⭐️👏👏

Please do write more

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PenguinBaby

@PenguinBaby

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

That was beautiful 😆

The suspense was killing me, who was narrating, and as I'm a total SwaSan fan I'd secretly hoped it was Laksh narrating, and I was granted my wish😉

Thank you so much for giving us such an amazing imagination to dream on, and now I'm going to read it again and again and again 😃😆

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Sneha Ray

@sneharay

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Read it again..
Its so beautiful..loved it 😊
So u love SwaSan most..
Keep writing 😃

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amimus

@amimus

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Wonderful writing. So pure and touching.

Enjoyed reading it

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Zaalima_5

@Zaalima_5

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

wow afrah..👏

loved it..😊 you know while reading i thought sanskaar will die and after that laksh and swara's marrg will happen..😭

thank God aisa kuch bhi ahi hua..😆

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Amazing OS dear Aafrah.👏

You know while reading at first I thought that it was Sanskar whom Swara left and returned to Laksh after Ragini's expose.😭 Bt thank God that it did not happen like that.😳 A happy family at the end.😃 Loved the OS so much!!!👍🏼

Edited by Humnava - 9 years ago

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