SwaSan OS: TOGETHER. FUNNY OS

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is a departure from my usual writing style...but i did my best with it. Hope everyone likes it.😊

Sanskaar happens to have forgotten the confession he made in front of the entire family in drunken state. He remembers exactly what he said about the proofs and stuff...but he was nearly dead on his feet by the time he made the confession...so that part is a buzz. He is in love with her, yes, but he is afraid that Swara may need some recovery time before he can do anything about it.

Ragini's truth is out in front of the entire family...after swara gathered proofs against her...which even MM people with half brains could not refute.

Laksh has apologized to swara and Shekhar has to shomi. (I cant go there anymore. Shekhar and shomi will have to figure out whatever between them themselves). Both know ki inn do Bose females ko wapas pana is like waiting for snow in May.

So now.

Swara : sanskaar I'm packing.

Sanskaar: Packing? You are leaving?

Swara: umm yeah. Nothing much left here to do. Wanna go back home.

Sanskaar: uhhh...today? I mean wait kar lo na thoda sa. Raat ho gayi hai...kal subah chali jana.

Swara: raat ho gayi hai? Its 6 o' clock in the evening. Waise bhi my parents are waiting. So unless you have a good reason for me to stay...

Swara smirks teasingly.

Sa: yeah well, I wanted to thank you for being with me when, you know, ragini accused me of ...ummm

Sw: same here. Thank you for being with me through everything. So thank you's cross midway...and BAM!!! They demolish each other. Dumbo. Remember you told me no sorry and no thank you?

Sa: yes, I guess I do.(with a slight smile)

Sw: Khud hi lecture deke khud hi bhool jao? Koi baat nahi mai hu na tuhe tumhare lectures yaad dilane ke liye...she grins.

Sa: yeah OK. Ye sarey dialogues ka copyright mera hai. Don't do copyright infringement.

Sw: yeah, well I don't wanna be accused of thieving either...so here are your handkerchiefs back. The striped one, the white one and the blue one.

Sa : L(rolls his eyes) hmmm.

Swara starts to leave...and Sanskaar is staring at her back with his puppy dog look...wondering when he can actually confess to her. He has forgotten that his drunken stupor has already beaten his sober self to it.

Swara is mentally jiggling her feet, like come on come on say it, you big lug. Stop me.

Sujata comes in. " Jaa rahi hai bangalan? Le, Prasad khati jaa." ( she has been suitably impressed by her bahu...there is no objection to swara anymore in her mind...but Sujata's Bengali fear is still on)

Swara takes the Prasad and is nearly at the doorway. She cannot take it any more. Turns around and goes for it.

Sw: okay enough!!(very loudly)

Sanskaar nearly drops the Prasad his mother gave him. Sujata nearly drops the whole thali.

Sa: Kya? Kya enough?(bewildered)

Sw: I am leaving Sanskaar Maheshwari.

Sa: i can see that.(tentatively)

Sw: you married me

Su: nakli tha.

Sw: You said you love me.

Sa: (wondering when he got so lucky) I did??

Su: Ya asli tha.(decisively assures her son)

Sa: Swara I don't know what I said that day while I was drunk...and I think you really need some time away from all this, before you can come to a proper decision about whether you want me at all or not...so..I certainly don't want to push you.

Sw: kitna bolte ho. My god!! Kitna accha bol lete ho. English ki degree Oxford ki hai?

Sa: nahi MBA kiya tha Cambridge sey.

SU: ha, mara chora aisa waisa na hai.

Sw: Mujhe toh laga that Polar bears Alaska ke aas paas kahi rehte hai. Sure its not University of Alaska?

Sa: nahi, Cambridge. Aur Polar bears Canada mei bhi rehte hai...found in Norway as well...but why?

Su: hadd hai bangalan...bhaloo palegi? Jo tujhe macchi pakad ke de aur tu khaye?

Sw: Mom, jo banda AC 16 degree karke soye woh polar bear hi hai na?

Su: Phir iss chore ne...Sanskaar...sardi lag jati hai...phir bhi karta hai...pagal kar de mare ko ab.

Sa: Mom serious discussion chal raha hai..please? do you mind? (Rolls his eyes)

Sw: anyway.(taking a deep breath before making a noise like an angry cat)

Sanskaar flinches at her wildcat look...and Sujata tries to hide behind him.

Su: Ya kya tha chori? Chheek toh na rahi hai tu? Jaa rahi hai...yatra apabitra kahe kar rahi hai?

Sw: Mom, aap hi bataye...iss goddamn polar bear ke saath itne din rehne ke baad...ek shaadi, jaise bhi hui ho, par shaadi karne ke baad, iske love confession karne ke baad...voh mere sunne ke baad...hum dono ka eksaath itney din se itne saari cheesey ek saath karne ke baad...ye pata lagne ke baad ke ye mere liye kya kya kar sakta hai...aur mai iske liye kya kya kar sakti hu...pata lagne ke baad...mujhe ye shaadi na maan kar phirse wait karna padega ki kab ye Bandar mujhe wapas propose kare? Kaun sey rishtey mei jhagre hote hai...gussa hota hai...hasssi hoti hai...saath hota hai..rona hota hai..vade hote hai...aur pyaar hota hai? Eksaath Mom?

Su: Sacchi ke shaadi ke rishtey mei. baat mai dam hai chori.

Sa: (smiling slightly, ummeed ki kiran )toh you want to stay married to me? iss polar bear ya Bandar, decide karlo pehle...but still you wanna be with me?

Sw: I have decided.

1. To stay with you. Forever.

2. To never let you burn down stuff...and never let you near my gas stoves.

3. Never to let you get drunk again

4. To call you Polu.

Sa: arre yaar...I don't drink, thats why itna chad gaya tha mujhe. And mujhe pata tha ki chulhe pe phoonk maar ke use jalate hai..not on gas stove, I just wanted to make u laugh. And Polu? WTH is Polu?

Sw: Short form of Polar Bear. You are too good looking for a monkey. I love you.

Sa: I love you too. And I promise I'll never hurt you...always make you happy...and be with you. Forever swara.

Sw: Vice versa sanskaar.

Su : (smiling slightly in a satisfied way, but with slightly watery eyes) Toh mai rishta pakka samjhu? Bangali bahu hi milegi mare ko toh isse behtar na mil sake hai. Bhagwan bhala kare tum dono ka.

All three hug.

Edited by medhasankar - 9 years ago


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Annei123 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
So cute Os !!! 😳
Do write more
RadhaKrishan thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
It's really beautiful. Loved the confession and Polu 😆 Naam toh suit karta hai
Smilelicious thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So cute Medha 😳
And POLU aww ❤️
Such a beautiful OS this is 👏
Please do write more dear 😳
Princess_Mansi thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awe it was so cute
Polu and Shona khup bhalo jodi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey yhat was really cute...polu omg...throughout I was kind of laughing and must say you gave some really howlarious dialogues to sujata. ..ufff I literally died laughing. ..

Plz keep writing more. ...
Anu0517 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sooo cuteee...😳
I died laughing while i was reading...😃
Polu...
Do write more yar...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww..
that funny and cute..

polu wahat a name🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Smilelicious

So cute Medha 😳
And POLU aww ❤️
Such a beautiful OS this is 👏
Please do write more dear 😳


thank you preet...and u don't have to tell me...stop me from writing and boring people if u can.😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Swara and her Polu ...

ha, mara chora aisa waisa na
hai. 😆 Sujata in between serious situations 🤣
A light hearted funny OS, really nice. 😊 👏

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