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Posted: 9 years ago
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So sweet Swasan😳 running in the living room. Pls continue the next part soonPls pm me also. whenever u r updating
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Awesome
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
aww...
the scene is humorous
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

AP and Sujata sliding with swara...
Just imagining the scene...

Sujata saying "Ha Sanskar ki bhau he..."
omg i was laughing all through while reading..

thank u for such a funny update..
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Than k soo much! M glad u liked it!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
PART 4
After the guru went swara went straight to her room without lookin back! Sanskar entered the room.. he saw her standing near the window! He went and hugged her from behind.
Sanskar- kya hua shona, neeche jo hua usse preshan ho.
Swara- sanskar chodo mughe plzz.
Sanskar- aj to nhi chodunga, arey biwi ho mere, tumse pyar krta hu mein aur vaise bhi aaj to tumne bhi kh diya that u love me!
Swara(getting out of his grip and pusshing him)- nhi krte meij tumse pyar... nhi krti suna tume (weeping)
Sanskar- swara kya hua, tum aise q..tum ro q rhi ho, kya hua hai.
Swara- kuch nhi hua bs dur rho tum mughse...nhi krti mein tumse pyar. Aur vaiae bhi tum mughe pyar kr sakte ho, mein to illegitimate hu, bengali hu, tumhare bhai k ex-girlfriend hu...
Aur mera character...
Sanskar held her by her shoulders, pulled her close and put his finger on ber lips!
Sanskar- shhh... bs
Kya bole ja rhi ho swara. Kya hua tumhe...tum ye sb bakwas q kr rhi ho.
Mughe in sbse koi frk nhi padta swara...i luv u...i luv u more than my life. I luv u shona!
Swara- ( getting out of bhis grip) but i dont...aur tum mughse kaise pyar krte sakte ho hm to ek maksad k liye ek hue the na..to fir...
I mnw what, tum bhi baki admiyo ki tarha ho! All men r same.
Sanakar- swara ye sb kya bol rhi hu ! I luv u and i knw u luv me too. I knw swara pr mein nhi janta k tum q aise kr rhi ho.
Swara- ha ha ha mein krti hu tumse pyar, bohot pyar krti hu tumse...tumhare bina mein apni zinsagi jeene k bare me soch bhi nhi salti...pr mughe dr lagta hai sanskar...(crying)
Sanskar rushed to her wiped her tears and made her sit on the bed! And sat down on his knees in front of her.
Sanskar- dr... kusse swara.
Swara- pyar se... mighe pyar se dr lagta hai sanskar.
Sanskar mein maa baba k pyar dekha hai, aur us pyar k badle mere maa ko drd mile vo bhi dekhe hai! Aur sanskar laksh...
She stopped realising where she was going.. she shut up like she was talkin about her ex lover to her husband
Sanskar- laksh kya swara..., putting his hand on her cheek. U knw u can share it with me haa.
Swara- sanskar mein laksh se bohot pyar krti thi, khud se vhi zada...pr jo hua vo to tumhe pata hai na... sanskar pyar sirf dard deta hai! Aur mughme ab aur dard shne ki himmt nhi hai!
Jb laksh me mere pyar ko dhokha diya to tumne mughe samhala, lr agar tumhare pyar ne mughe dhola diya to mein jee nhi paungi sanskar!
(She was s crying and crying)
Sanskar, again wiping her tears..
Swara, mein tumhar bina nhi je sakta! Tumhar liye mein sari duniya se ld sakta hu... aur mein tumse itna pyar krta hu k mein khud mr jaunga pr tumhe dhokha nhi dunga! Mein kisi bhi takleef ko tumtk nhi pohoche dunga!
With this he kissed boht her hands!
Sanskar- swara tumhari ring!?
Swara- konsi ring sanskar!?
Sanskar- vo jo tumhe lucky ne phnai thi tumhari engagememt pe.
Swara- sanskar vo mera past tha! Mein aaj tk us ring ko phnti thi qki mein kahi na kahi khud ko laksh se connect samaghti thi!
Pr jabse tumne mere mang bhari hai, aur... aur mughe tumse pyae hua hai! Mein apne past ko hmare present aur hmare future k beech nhi aane dena chahti.
Sanskar was moet than happy to hear this! He stud up and swara hugged him!
I luv u sanskar, i luv u more swara!
Just then sujata came to their room!

Sujata- he mhara raam ji, tum dono ka khatam na hua ab tk!!
sanskar- mom aap knock krke aaya ro ab! Bohot hi bure time pe aai ho aap!
Sujata- chup kr, maa hu thari! Beendni aa gye to ma ko bhool gya!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Yes this part is emotional. But loved both their confession. Pls update soon. Pls if possible pm me when u r updating😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
That was very sweet n emotional..
Loved the confession part
N feelings God.. Beautifully portrayed. !!
If possible do pm when ever u update next
Tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Every one loved the confession... But I actually enjoyed the part when Sujata enters n says 'khatam ni hua abi tak tum dono ka'🤣🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
PART 5
Sanskar's birthday
Swara(on phn)-sanskar jaldi ghar aao na plz. I need u! Plz sanskar plz...

Sanskar rushed home! He went to their room to check for swara.

In the room- it was all pitch dark! Sanskar was about to al for swara just then a projector projected his and swara pictures on the wall! In a musical rythm and I LUV U in the end!

Then swara came and hugged him form behind, 'happy birthday jan'!

Yes it was his birthday and he could not spare time for this bcz he was too busy!

Swara ye sb!

Tumaha birthday hai to mein apne husband ko ek gift nhi de sakti!

Sanskar- tumne room ko lavander and orchids se decorate kiya hai u knw ye mere favourait hai!

Swara- ofcourse, mughe kaise nhi pata hoga tum mere husband ho, itna to janna banta hai!

With this sanskar held her hand and brought her forward!

She kept her hands around his neck and sanskar kept his hand around her waist and she wished him birthday with a kiss ob his cheek with each sentence!

I luv u

*kiss*

U r the best husband jaan

*kiss*

U saved me and supported me

*kiss*

And soo on till 12-14 kisses!

swara- sanskar ab mera returngift!? Meine itna acche se sb prepare kiya to ab tum mughe shopping to leke ja hi sakte ho!

sanskar pulled her close and kissed her, a passionate and long kiss!

they parted away.

sanskar- tumhara return gift

swara blushed and turned around to go,sanskar held his hand and hugged her from behind then gentely kissing her neck and he lifted her, bridal style and let her on the bed!

Lying himself over her and kissing her forehead, her cheek her neck and her lips!




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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Too cute 👏
Very nice birthday surprise 😳
Love ur writing
Continue soon

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