Swasan os -Realisation

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Realisation



Ragini's truth has come out and everybody throws her out of the house.Everybody thanx swara .everybody is happy except one person and that is sanskar
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For him swara will go and will never return .For him again his love will go away from him .It was difficult for him to control his tears any more .He just leaves the place .swara sees him leaving and was going to stop him when her mother calls from behind

Sharmishtha - Chale shona..gar nhi jana

Swara-haan maa chalte hai par use Pele mujhe kuch Janna hai .she leaves .

In the terrace

Sanskar is standing there.Lost in his thoughts .For him the thought that swara will go away from him made him cry and today when she was really going how could he just control his tears.tears were rolling out oh his eyes like a waterfall

Swara from behind calls 'Sanskar'
Sanskar wiping his tears answers 'woh swara meri tabiyat thori theek nhi hai tum chalo mein thori der baat ata hun still turning his back towards swara

Swara-tum kuch ka ho nhi .mein at last jaan rhi hu


Sanskar -nhi ..tum jaona ..ah toh bohot k hush hogi .tum hara mission pura ho gaya ..Ab tumhe meri kya zaroorat

Swara moving close to wards sanskar and and keeps a hand on his shoulder

Swara-aisa nhi hai sanskar.mein samajhti hu...

*sanskar turns irritatinglying and in frustration tells swara*

Aisa hi hai swara..aisa hi hai ..agar aisa nhi ho ta nah toh tum kahi mujhe chorke nhi jati ...tum ais hi mujhe bye karne nhi ati tum samajhti ki ki agar tum chali jagogi toh mera kya hogan mein jete hi Mar ja unga tum samajhti ki mein tumse kit na pyar karte hu ..haan swara I luv you ..I luv you dammit.
But tumhe kya pharak part a hai


*Sanskar pushes her*

Tum kuch nhi samajhti

*Suddenly it starts raining *

Swara is just astonished by sanskar behaviour
She knew that he loved her .but to this extext?

*Background music*

Mujhme safar tu karti rhe ,har ek saas mein ubharti rahe
Shame subha tu mera tere bina kya mera
Do Jism jaan ek hai aur humko y hi hai pata
Teri meri kahani hai bar is hon ka pani
Banke jo ishq barese Teri meri kahani


Swara pulls sanskar to wars her and tells

Sankar mein Mann ti hu ki mein kuch nhi samajhti ..par tum bhi kuch nhi samajhti .
Agar samajhti toh idharma nhi hote.mujhe jane se rokte ..na ki khare khare rote
Agar samajhti to yeh bhi samajhti ki mein kyun tum hare pas u par aye na ki apnea maa baba ke sat chali gyi
Agar samajhte toh yeh bhi samajhti ki I love you...haan sanskar I luv you

Sanskar is shocked and says
Tum toh lucky se ...

Swara - mein laksh se pyar kart
I thi par ab nhi karti .jab se use mera bharosa sa nhi kiya mera bhi use bharosa sa uth gaya ..but u were there for me and eventually I fell for you .
But tum yeh sab thori nah samjhoge. .tum toh chahe ho ki mein chali jaUn nah .
She turns for going when sanskar pulls her from behind and hugs her
I LOVE YOU SWARA
I LUV YOU TOO SANSKAR

Toh mujhe chorke kyun jaan rhi thi

Tumne bhi toh mujhe nhi roka

And they hugged.But he could not hug her tightly as he was holding his heart to.he held her just as close
Feeling the pull and ready to leave .The unspoken stories were felt .He smiled and signed

At last they realized their love and bond for each oder
Two souls were United into one


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How's it plzz bolna I just gave a try I would love if can give your valuable feedbacks



Edited by trisha09 - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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So beautiful dear 👏
Loved how they confessed their feelings
Do write more 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
This was soo beautifully written.
Absolutely loved the confession.
Please do write more. Would love to read 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautifully Written...👏
Loved SwaSan confession...
DO write more...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow i was written beautifully dear do write more dear :-)) swasan
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely shot dear... 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice os Trisha. I loved fluid confession part. Pls do write more 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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it was beautiful dear..
but will cvs give us such a scene

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