NEW SWASAN MARRIED OS:TRUE LOVE P15 UPDT ON 22/2 - Page 19

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey Rithika. ...hope your Diwali went very well.

The update was very nice. Loved the Pari and Swara convo where Swara explains how she fell in love with Sanskaar. Ragini is conniving and Lakshya as dumb as usual 🤢

Was great to see Shomi standing up to Shekar and David and warning them clearly from interfering in Swara's life or in maligning her further.

And likewise, was very good to see DP supporting Swara's decision to complete her studies, and Sanskaar supporting her so well in that.

The end was fabulous, Sanskaar taking their marriage certificate to shut Lakshya's mouth once and for all. That guy is incorrigible! !!

Regarding your plot, I feel you should continue the way you have planned it. No need to shorten or cut it.

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Rithika this was a lovely update 😳
The initial scene with Swara & Sanskar going to the ice-cream parlour along with Pari & Adarsh was cute.
Pari has started believing Swara and she has some doubts on Ragini, that's good 😆
Oh i loved Shomi! Shekhar truly deserved that reply from her. Ugh Dadi won't ever change, humesha aag mein ghee dalne ka kaam karti hai 🤢
The last part was fab 👏 Sanskar showing the marriage certificate to Laksh, well done boy! That was kind of a tight slap on his face 😉 I hope he won't doubt about their marriage from now 😆
And i think you should continue the way you've decided👍🏼

PART-9:

Swasan room:

Swara and sanskaar were sitting on the couch with swara leaning her head in his shoulder. Just then sujata enters the room and sees them. Listening to her sound swara and sanksaar gets up and stands straight.

Suj: see swara I will ask u straightly is this certificate and marriage a real one??

Sanskaar now really gets irritated with the same question again and again. But he controls his anger and says "yes mom. We are really married and that is real certificate. I know u will not like swara as she is a Bengali but please u need to accept her and there is no chance to u as we are truly married and will be together forever".

Sujata looks shocked at both of them for a minute and goes and hugs swara and breaks the hug and says "im really so happy that u both are together. I always liked u from the day u proved my son innocent from that ragini's accusations. I have clearly seen how much struggle u had to face in doing that. I always wanted u as my son's wife after that but never said as I felt u were not really married and I did not know whether u liked my son or not moreover I never said it to others as feared about ragini. u know how she is."

Swara and sanskaar are really happy listening to it. Finally sanskaar's wish of his mother accepting swara was fulfilled and he hugs his mom and thank her. sujata extends her arm for swara indicating her to join the hug and swara joins for a group hug.

San: mom swara is a Bengali even then she is ok to u na..

Suj: she is not a Bengali completely na. she is half marwadi too.. so its ok for me. But ha swara I will not eat any fish or meat or even egg also which is included in vegetarian list now a days.

All the three smile.Then sanskaar gets a call from the office and he leaves. As he leaves

Suj: swara I know its really embarrassing to ask u all this. but since u said u both are really married that means have u taken this relationship seriously or just giving a chance?? I mean have u both moved ahead in this relation?? I hope u understand what I meant.

Swara blushes at her question and nods with a smile and blush. Sujata feels happy that her son is finally settled now and hugs swara and says "now im truly happy. My son is finally settled and im now just waiting for my grand children". Swara will be shocked at the mention of children but doesn't say anything and simply smiles.

Laksh office:

Laksh will be irritated at the office. How much he tries to work he will not be able to do it. Swara and sanskaar's marriage certificate was running in his mind. He was unable to digest that swara moved on so easily in her life. he felt disgusted as she cheated him and now staying with sanskaar so happily. Till today he was somewhere happy that she still loved him and was in the house to get back to him but today that dream of him broke with that certificate and he was out of his delusion that swara loves him. he was unable to digest that now he had a place neither in her heart nor in her life. this really caused pain to him as he was still not completely over her.

after sometime remembering his converstaions with ragini he still felt that swara and sanskaar were still trying to fake their relation and were just pretending to be happy but they are not as ragini always says that she finds swara and sanskaar keeps fighting when they are alone and this what made him convince that swara has not moved on. (ragini says so as she wants to gain sympathy of laksh by pretending a fake concern for swara so that laksh will be impressed by her kindness and innocence and also to show that swara was after their relation and is stooping low by staying with a stranger out of wedlock to get what she wants).

After a week :

It was Sunday morning and the arrangements were made for kuldevi puja in the house and for havan in the temple. Swara and sanskaar performed the kuldevi puja in the house and both the newly wedded couples together performed havan in the temple. (It was the same temple which is on the bank of the river in which ragini pushed swara). Even the gadodia's and dida were invited for the Havan and puja.

After the havan was performed all were leaving for the house. Ragini, laksh, dadi and dada were in the temple talking something. Dp ,Ap and sujata and RP left. Sanskaar and swara were walking along with shomi and dida. Shekhar was just back of swara and sanskaar.

When they were walking a lady with a basket came to swara and asks " how are u??" and points at sanskaar and asks "is he ur husband??"

Swara in a confusion nods yes and says "im fine but im sorry im unable to recognize u??

Lady turns towards sanskaar and says "so that is why u were so tensed that day. She is ur love.."

All look puzzled at eachother and stares at the lady. The lady then says to sanskaar "don't u remember me few days ago u came here in search of her and I said u that we have joined her in a nearby hospital after finding her on a river bank who came flowing in water"

Sanskaar then recognizes that she was same lady who rescued swara and also helped him on the day when ragini tried to kill swara. Sanskaar replies "I got it know. U are the one who helped her and said about her to me."

Saying it he turns towards the three ladies and says "ma, dida, shona she is the lady who found u on the river bank and admitted u in hospital and when I came here in search of u she said me about u. that's how I found u that day".

Swa: thank u so much. If u were not there I would have died by now.

Shomi and dida too thank her and sanskaar gives her some money as way to thank her and his visiting card and assures her that he will help her and her family when they are in need.

lady takes it happily and says to swara "u are really lucky ur husband loves u a lot and that day I can see his concern for u in his eyes and today I can clearly how much happy u are with him in ur eyes. u are truly lucky. Always be happy" saying this she goes.

Shekhar who is at the back of all the four will witness it and then falls in confusion. After few minuites everyone will leave to their houses.

Baadi:

Shekhar will be sitting out on the terrace thinking about the afternoon incident. He will be in shock remembering the words of the lady and sanskaar. He thinks "the lady says she found swara on a river bank who came there flowing in water. That means on her marriage day she did not runaway but she fell in the river. And was flown away by river. That means what swara said about ragini trying to kill her pushing into the river is true?? Wait no it cant be my daughter ragini can never do that. She tried to kill herself when everyone pointed out at her how can she kill her sister?? And ragini said she did not go with swara to temple then how can she kill swara?? Swara is lieing definitely.. but that lady?? The lady saw swara in river but not ragini so that means swara might have fallen in river by accident or someone else might have pushed her and she thought that person as ragini. yes that might be true. But I guess I need to find out by going to hospital once and clarify it with the doctor their. But now im happy to an extent that swara did not want to run away that day but met with an accident and could not reach on time. That means she is not wrong." Then he remembers the video of swara and gets confused whether swara really ran away or fell into river.. He had many questions running in his brain and he wanted to clear them asap.

The very next day shekhar goes to the same temple searches for the lady questions her and finds about all the things that happened on the marriage day and then goes to the hospital she mentions. He checks the registrar but he will not be able to meet the doctor as he was on a medical camp so he just confirms from register that swara was indeed admitted that day. He immediately goes back to his house and was lost his thoughts. He was happy that swara did not run away from the house and met with accident. But he couldnot believe that ragini tried to kill her. so without expressing any doubts he wanted to wait till the doctor returns.

Next few days:

Swara was busy with her education. She was totally engrossed in her daily college routine and the rest of the time she spents with her hubby and her saas - sasur, pari and adarsh. She has become really a good friend to pari and adarsh adored her as his own sister..Rp and sujata were quiet happy with their son and bahu's happy and settled life. sujata took much care of swara as she was managing both her married life and education. She even tried to protect her from ragini's scheming and taunts. Rp too was very much happy with the relation between his wife and bahu. He was really happy to find his son living and laughing happily without any pain in his eyes and heart. Almost the entire family of the maheshwari's now were on the side of swara and sanskaar and believed them but the main person of the house DP and AP were not completely on their side.

Though they liked and accepted swara as the bahu of the house still they couldnot believe her or love her openly as they always remembered what she did with laksh on the marriage day. Though DP was neutral AP clearly was partial to ragini. she always stood by ragini's side whenever there was a tamasha between ragini and swara and made her judgement based on her hatred for swara for hurting her son. Since she was the lady of the house none of them spoke against her. even DP never said a word against her after she gives her final verdict on the issue and the verdict was always in favour of ragini making swara the culprit.

Along with this hatred she is even jealous that swara and sanskaar were living happily in their life while her son and bahu were still struggling to set their married life. though she never had any hatred for sanskaar she was angry at him that he gave much importance to swara in his life than anyone else.

Sanskaar offered to merge his business with the maheshwari group but DP denied the offer as it was sanskaar's hard work which made the karma group to stand at such great heights within less time and suggest that he need to run his firm on his own and make it more bigger so that more people and many more families will be benefited with it rather than merging it and making it one group. Sanskaar though was not completely happy with his bade papa's decision but believed in it and vowed to make his firm more bigger one.

Swasan room:

it was almost 11:40pm and sanskaar was working on his lappy preparing for the next day's presentation and swara was completing her assignments. Swara completed her work and came and sat beside sanskaar and caught his left arm and leaned her head on his shoulder and asked him whether he was done.

San: almost shona. But u go and sleep I need more 10-15 min time. Just need to recheck this one.

Swa: but u know I cant sleep alone. I need u by my side.

Sanskaar looks at her and smiles.

San: just 10 more minutes. I will come. U go and set the bed.

Swara gets up nodding her head and goes to drink water and takes the jug in her hand and says "baby Im gonna get some water these will not be sufficient for us." Sanskar nods in yes without shifting his view from the screen and swara goes into kitchen. Sanskaar was done with his work and closed the lappy and looked for swara. It was almost 15 minutes swara went to get water from the kitchen but she did not return still. He was worried for her and goes in search of her. but he was unable to find her any where in the kitchen or in the hall. Even the main door was locked from inside and he was really worried for her now. He could hear some voice from the upstairs and he ran up. But could not find any one. He searched back in his room and found a note there on the bed. "come into the balcony". He fastly runs into the balcony where he could find swara standing infront of him with a broad smile. She signaled to look at the floor and his face lit up seeing it.

There was a big heart made of rose petals and there she was standing in middle of it and a small pastry was placed on a small stool just before her. she raised her right hand asking him to join her and as soon as he came beside her she looked at her watch and after few seconds as the clock struck 12 she hugged him and wished "happy one month anniversary my hubby". Sanskaar will be surprised as it was already one month of their real marriage and 2 months of their togetherness (fake marriage). Yes it was October 3 and sanskaar had forgotten that it was their one month anniversary. he couldnot believe that it has been 2 months there are together and 1month of their real marriage. He felt as if they were married just a week ago. The freshness and love in their relation made him feel so.

He slowly broke the hug and kissed her forehead and cheek and wished her back "happy one month anniversary wifey". Saying it he again hugged her. they both then kneeled down infront of the stool which had a pastry on it.

San: shona chocolate pastry. U could have brought a complete cake na.

Swa: I can but I don't want anyone to witness or be a part of this celebration. It should be just us. So I bought this pastry without anyone noticing it and placed it in freezer. If it was a cake someone would have seen it and my plan would have been spoiled. And moreover we will cut cake on our 1 year anniversary and what will be the difference between that and this so I decided that we will cut pastries for monthly anniversaries and cake for our yearly one.

Sansakaar smiles at her crazy ideas and will be amused at her thought of celebrating their marriage day every month. He just leans in pecks on her lips and says "I just love u sooo much shona".

Swara smiles at it and hands him a knife to cut the pastry. Finally both cut the pastry and feed each other. They then move back to their room to welcum the next morning by their own way of expressing their love to each other.

After few days swara attends a seminar in her college which is regarding the health care system and its problems in the rural areas of the west Bengal state. The seminar was presided over by Dr. Ajay Dutt (sanskaar's friend) and Mr. Prashanth Banerjee (district collector). They were here to ask support and collect funds from the students for an NGO aided project which is named as "Development of Health System for Rural [DHSR]". Its aim is to construct primary health care centers in the rural areas. The project was approved by govt of WB and Mr. Banerjee was appointed as the head and Dr. Ajay as the assistant head. After attending the seminar swara was really moved with the problems faced by the rural area inhabitants. She wanted to help them and wanted to discuss about it with sanskaar.

Later that evening:

Swara and sanskaar were having tea and swara explained him everything regarding the seminar and project DHSR and tells him that she wants to help them.

San: its ok shona. How much u want to donate u can. I will give u the cheque tomorrow ok.

Swa: im not talking about fund sanskaar.

San: then??

Swa: why don't we take the responsibility of constructing a primary health care center (PHC) in some village.

Sanskaar looks at her with a puzzled look. "I don't get u shona"

Swa: sanskaar u own a construction company right. And u need to use some percentage of money for some social welfare I means as a part of corporate social responsibility so why don't we take the job constructing one PHC under this DHSR. by this even we will have satisfaction that we could directly do something to the society and will also have an assurance that the funds are not misused. If we take up this even our company's good-will also goes up and we can get more projects especially which are government aided. With this even our business increases and we will be able to give more employment and also we can do more social service. What do u say??

Sanskaar was clearly shocked at her explanation. He never thought that she was so good at business. He thought her only interest was music but he was wrong she is even good at business too. but he can understand that like all her decision even this idea popped out from her heart which was moved seeing the people suffering and her will to help those people. He smiled and said yes. swara feels happy and hugs him and kisses him on his cheek saying thank u.

San: if we want to take this responsibility we need to meet the project heads. Do u have any idea of them??

Swa: ha sanskaar. U friend Dr. Ajay was also there in the seminar. It was announced that the district collector and Dr. Ajay both the heads of this project. So we can approach the collector thru ajay.

San: that's nice. So I will once talk with bade papa and we will meet ajay next and take further action.

Next day sanskaar keeps the proposal of the phc construction infront of DP, RP and Adarsh. And they all approve it and even praise swara for such a good idea. Dp even says that he will also participate in this project on behalf of maheshwari group. But laksh expresses his disbelief regarding the idea and says he doesn't want to be a part of it. When DP try to explain him sanskaar advices that they need not join in this project blindly but can join in it when they believe in it. Saying it he moves to the meet with Ajay to talk regarding the project.

Sanskaar and swara meets ajay and explains him that he want be a part of this project DHSR on the advice of swara. Ajay appreciates both of them and after explaining completely about the project and the terms and conditions and also the budget and planning of the project . When sanskaar approves everything and says he is ready to join in it ajay takes him to the district collector Mr. Prashanth Banerjee. Even he feels happy and appreciates sanskaar and swara for joining them.

Precap:

Shekhar declares that swara is no more a part of his life..

please do like and comment. sorry for the late update i was occupied with my personal stuff so could not update it..