SwaSan TS: Angry Swara (Epilogue Pg 5 Updated) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved the update... Swara was just awesome... I hope Ragini's intentions are revealed soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was fantastic...
Just loved it...
Plz pm me while updating further...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Awesome!
Loved the way Sanskaar called her Shona. 😳
Loved Swasan.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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super update , waiting for next 😊
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really awesomee conceptt !!!!! 😉👏👏
plz continue soonn 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Hey guys!!!!!!!!!
Here's the last part of the TS

Part 3

Everyone are shocked. Ragini tries to remove her hand when Laksh Catches it..

Laksh: Ragini inlogo ko wrong prove karo

Ragini: Laksh yeh aap kya keh rahe hai??? (tries removing her hand) Laksh, Swara humara haath chodiye.

Swara: Ragini mujhe wrong prove karo.. Nahi kar sakti kyu ki mein sahi hu aur tum galat

Anupurna: Yeh kya hai Swara?? Tum kya Prove karna chahti ho??

Swara: Kuch nahi badi Maa aap bas Ragini se kahiye Kew o mujhe wrong prove kare.

Shekhar: Hume Ragin pe bharosa hai. Tum galat ho. Isme prove kya karna hai??

Swara: Kuch prove nahi karna toh kahiye Ragini se ke who Laksh ki Kasam khae

Dadi: Aee Chori thare ko galat sabit karna hai na toh mari ladoo khae gi Lakshya ki kasam. (to Ragini) Ladoo kha Lakshya ki kasam

Ragini: (crying) Dadimaa aap yeh kya bol rahe hai?? Hum Laksh ji ki kasam khae?? Nahi dadi maa hum yeh nahi kar sakte

Sanskar: Kyu nahi kar sakti??

Ragini: (Shouts) Kyuki Swara galat nahi hai. Hum galat hai..

Swara leaves Ragini's hand and stumbles back when Sanskar catches her and they have an eyelock

Dadi: Ladoo??

Ragini: Dadi Maa Swara ne joh bhi kaha sab sach hai. Humne hi uske khane me drugs milaya tha. Yaad hai who aurat jo aai thi apne pati ke saath who ek Dayan thi usse bhi humne bulaya tha Swara ko marne ke liye..

Dadi: (slaps Ragini) Tu mari Ladoo nahi ho sakti. Mari ladoo kabhi bhi yeh na karegi. (Dadi again tries to slap Ragini but Sharmishta Stops her) Sharmishta chod mara haath.

Sharmishta: Nahi Maa aapko koi haq nahi hai meri beti pe haath uthaane ka

(All are shocked with Sharmishta's behavior)

Anupurna: Aapki beti?? Sharmishta ji issne aapke aur Swara ke saath kitna galat kiya aur aap??

Swara: Phir toh aap sab ko thapad milne chahiye kyuki Ragini akele galat nahi thi.

Durga Prasad: Yeh kya keh rahi ho tum Swara??

Sharmishta: Sahi keh rahi hai Shona Aap sab gunhegar hai Swara ke.. Mujhe yaad hai jab aap rishte ki baat karne aae the tab Anupurna ji ka bartav kaisa tha.. Aapke ghar me sirf Durga Prasad ji, Parineeta, Uttra aur Aadarsh kush the aur koi bhi kush nahi tha. Anupurna ji mein yeh nahi keh rahi ki aapne Ragini ko badava diya. Aapka Swara ko napasand karna usne Ragini ko badava diya..

Laksh: Meri kya galti thi jo issne mujhe itni badi saza di??

Dida: Tumhara galti yahi tha ke tum humar Ragini ko Jhute sapne dikha raha tha. Tumhara Jab man kiya rishta jod diya aur jab man kiya tod diya. Yahi tumhara sabse badi galti thi. (Dida comes to Ragini and puts her arms around her) Humara Natin bahot acha hai par tum logo ki waja se..

Dadi: Shobha yeh kya bol rahi hai??

Swara: Theek hi toh keh rahi hai Dida.

(Swara and Sharmishta goes towards Ragini and puts their around her)

Shekhar: Mishti tum iska saath de rahi ho??

Sharmishta: Mein apni beti ka saath de rahi.

Shekhar: Jis beti ke wajae se hum dono ke beech darar aai

Swara: Nahi Mr. Gadodia Meri Maa humesha sach ka saath deti hai. (to Dadi) Aapne bhi to Ragini ko Badava diya tha aapne hi usse humesha yeh dilasa diya ke Laksh kishadi ussi se hogi aur usne humesha se ussi ko aapna pati mana hai.. (crying) Meri behen hi pagal thi usne mujhe kuch nahi bataya (Cuping Ragini's face) Agar bata deti toh ek Laksh kya hazar Laksh de deti.. Mein toh Laksh se kabhi pyaar hi nahi karti thi wo mera sirf acha dost tha. Pyaar toh Sanskar se sikha hai meine. Pata hai usse milke jaana pyaar kya hota. Ragini mein tumhe sab cheez ke liye maaf kar sakti hu par Sanskar pe jo tumne galat ilzaam lagaya uske liye kabhi nahi. (to Sanskar) Hume ab chalna chahiye..


I will update the Epilogue after 13th October

Hope so you guys like it...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Fantastic
I totally agree with swara that whole family is responsible for ragaini'a obsession
Why after 13 October its to late can't wait for it
Continue soon please
Please pm me ur other works
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Good job!
Loved the part where Swara pointed out the family's role in Ragini's obsession... The root cause...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Awesome update dear please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: rinku95

Fantastic
I totally agree with swara that whole family is responsible for ragaini'a obsession
Why after 13 October its to late can't wait for it
Continue soon please
Please pm me ur other works



I have my Papers till 13 So i will update after that...
But i will try to update in between...

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