Written in Faith: An Raglak and Swasan ff Note Pg 25 - Page 4

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PART 3 Its Morning.. Everyone had gathered at the dining table for breakfast. Everyone was having breakfast when Durga Prasad phone started to ring. He picked up the call. DP:Hello.. His face became serious.RP:Kya hua bhaisa. In SwaSan tent. Swara had opened her eyes & saw Sanskar was sleeping on his hand. Swara thought abut yesterday wat hd happened how Sanskar had put sindoor on her maang. Swa(herself):Watever Sanskar had done is to complete our mission & I shouted at him I should say sry. She started coughing due 2 which Sanskar hd woken up. Sans:Swara. He helped her sat up & gv her water. Sans(himself):I should say her sry. Swa &Sans(together):Sry. They looked at each other. Sans:I m sry Swara mera woh mtlb nehi tha mera paas aur koi option nehi tha Swara I... Swa:Ssshh relax i m sry, kal itna sab kuch hogaya toh mera dimag kaam karna band hogaya tha isiliya maina utna sab kuch bol diya tumna Jo kiya uss tym pe uskai alawa aur koi rasta nehi tha so is ok.Sans:So u r nt angry. Swa:No. Both smiled.A servant came. Servant:Bhaiya bhaisaab is calling. Sans:Swara u gt ready i m cmng. Swara nodded. Sanskar wnt inside d house & here Swara gt ready. Sans:Bade papa u called me. DP tld smethng 2 everyone & dey gt shocked & happy. Ragini ws confused & Sanskar ws smiling. Somewhere else. A girl ws looking at d pic of Sanskar & Lakshya. Girl:I m cmng back 2 clear all d problems in ur lyf. In d tent. Swara filled her maang wth sindoor & thought wat happened yesterday. Sanskar came & went 2 take d suitcase 2 take it outside. Swara saw tat.Swa:Where r u taking d suitcase. Sans:We r leaving d tent. Swara ws shocked. Sans:We r gng 2 live in d house. Swa:Which house. Sans:MM. With tat Sanskar smiled. Swara gt confused. SwaSan enter inside d mansion. Sujata hugged Sanskar. Suj(Sujata):Mahra beta agaya.Ana(Annapurna):lets get back 2 work she wll cme anytime. Everyone left 2 work except SwaSan & RagLak. They glared at each other.
Edited by PayalHazra - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Nice update !!!!
Do give next part soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Nice update...
Left the part at an intresting point...

Plz update a long part next time...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
You hit a spot, writing about Shankar's caring attitude...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Nice update. Pls continue the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very vice update continue soon dear thanks for pm yarc:))))
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update...

Do cont soon..

Chotu update tha...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Awesome updatd
Loved it ..
Plzz continue soon
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PART 4 Its evening. A girl stood infront of MM. Girl:Home Bad Home.. She wnt inside. Inside MM. Everyone hd gathered at hall. Suj:yeh ladki abhi tak nehi ayi.. An:woh ajaygi.. Girl:ajaygi nehi agayi.. Everyone turned towards d entrance. the girl ws standing wth her suitcase. Girl came towards d family. Girl:Bade Papa Badi Ma.. She took blessings of dem & hugged dem. She went towards Adarsh, Parineeta & Uttara & hugged dem. Ada(Adarsh);Meri choti Niharika kaisi hai. It ws none other than Niharika elder daughter of Maheswari family. Niha(Niharika):Apki choti bilkul thik hai.. She looked towards Swasan. Niha:Sanskar.. She went towards him totally ignoring Sujata & hugged him. Niha:Sanskar (pulling back frm hug) where were u, u knw Hw much i missed u; never go anywhere leaving me.. Sans(holding his ears):Sry Di I wll never go anywhere leaving u.. Niharika looked towars Swara & asked Sanskar abut her. Sans:She is Swara my wife.. Swara ws abut take blessings of her when Niharika stopped her. Niha:No dnt do dis if u r mine Sanskar wife so u r also my sister so today onwards call me Di.. Swara nodded. Niharika took out her one bangle frm her hand & made Swara wear it. Niha:I ws nt present at ur wedding so take dis bangle as my blessing.. She hugged her. By seeing all dis Ragini ws feeling jealous. Niharika went towards Raglak & hugged Lakshya. Niha:My lovely Lakshya I missed u.. Laks:I also missed u Di. She pulled back. Ragini took her blessings. Niha:Be blessed U Cn also call me Di.. By saying dis she wnt towards RP taking his blessings totally ignoring Sujata. Lakshya & Sanskar were shocked wth Niharika's behaviour towards Ragini. Sans & Laks(themselves):Y Di behave strangely wth Ragini. DP:Nihu take some rest after tat we wll hv our dinner.. Niharika nodded. Everyone called Niharika as Nihu. After dinner everyone lft 2 their room. ------------------------------------------------ Swasan Room ------------------------------------------------ Swara came into d room after changing & saw Sanskar ws thinking abut smethng. Swa:wat happen Sanskar.. Sans:I ws thinking abut Di's behaviour towards u & Ragini.. Swa:Y wat happen.. Sans:Di always behave everyone as same bt tday she talked 2 u lyk a family member bt Ragini as a stranger tats y i m confused abut her behaviour its vry strange.. Niha:I wll tell y i behaved strangely wth Ragini.. Swasan looked at d door & saw Niharika standing their. Swasan looked at each other. Niharika went towards Swasan closing d door behind. Niha:I behaved wth Ragini strangely due 2 dis. She gv dem some pics. Swasan looked at d pics & were shocked to see d pics.
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Plzz update soon its mind blowing

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