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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: sneharay

Awesome.. Just loved it..😊

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My Only Wish

Part 2

(swasan's room)

(swara came out from bathroom...sanskaar was sleeping peacefully he was in deep sleep...swara looked at him)

Swara(she smiled)-thanks sanskaar thanks mujhe woh dene ke liye jo mujhe hamesha se chahiye tha...thanks ragini mujhe us unchahe rishtey se nikalney ke liya (she goes to sanskaar n admired his sleeping form...she bent down n kissed his forehead)i love u sanskaar...hamesha kiya hai...thanks durga maa for fulfilling my only wish

(she goes to the window n closed her eyes...n remembered the first day she saw him)

Flashback

(at some restaurant)

(swara with her frds...they all were partying)

Swara's frd-chalo frds...lets go inside n order some food...afterall today is my b'day

Frd 2-tu bhukhhad hi rahiyo

Frd 3-she is like this only...she wants food food n food

Swara-guys i have to call mom...tum log jao...m coming

Frd 1-r u sure...hum wait kartey hain na

Swara-no yaar u guys go...m coming na

(they all went inside but swara was standing there...trying her mom's no then she saw a poor kid...who was asking for money)

Swara-shayad isey bhook lagi hogi...aur sab kaisey isey bhaga rahein hain...main help kar deti hoon

(suddenly she again saw that kid...he was talking to a tall guy)

Swara-ab yeh bhi isey suna dega

That guy-bhook lagi hai

Kid-ji bhaiya

That guy-hmm...paisey toh nhi milengey

(swara saw his(kid's) sad face n he was about to go when that guys said)

That guy-but jo khana hai kha saktey ho...i'll pay the bill

Kid(with a broad smile)-sach mein bhaiya

That guy-bilkul...kya khana hai

Kid(he was searching everywhere then he saw a pav bhaji stall)-pav bhaji

That guy-chalo phir(they went to that stall)bhaiya 1 pav bhaji

Kid-2

Guy-okk...2

(the kid was smiling he ate that pav bhaji n thanked him)

Kid-thanks bhaiya(n he went...the guy turned n he was none other than sanskar)

(Swara admired him...n she felt a sudden happiness )

Flashback Ends

(swara opened her eyes)

Swara(monologue)-koi aisa bhi ho sakta hai...itna achha(she looked at the sky n thanked the stars)

Flashback

(at Maheshwari Enterprise)

Watchman-who r u mam

Swara-i m Shekhar Gadodia's daughter...the accountant

Watchman-haan ji but madam ji what r u doing here

Swara-woh na baba lunch bhool gyye theey...toh main lunch laayi hoon...dey aaun

Watchman-ji madam ji jaao

(she goes inside n she was searching her baba suddenly she slipped ...she closed her eyes but she felt two strong arms who caught her...she opened her eyes n saw her only dream...that kind hearted guy...their eyes met)

Guy-excuse me mam...who r u(she came back to reality)

Swara-me...woh main

(shekhar entered)

Shekhar-shona...sanskaar sir aap...sir she is my daughter...swara yeh sanskaar sir hain...DP sir ke betey

sanskaar-hllo...shona

shekhar-nhi swara...shona is her pet name

Sanskaar-ohh...hii swara(n he left from there)

Shekhar-shona what r u doing here

Swara-baba ur lunch

Shekhar-shomi gussa hogi na

Swara-bohot...vaisey baba yeh hain durgaprasad uncle ke betey

Shekhar-haan beta

(she came back home...but from that day she was feeling something new...some unknown feeling that too for an unknown guy)

Flashback Ends

(Swara felt a hand on her shoulder...she turned n found sanskaar)

Sanskaar-i know u r upset...but naa soney se problem solve toh nhi hogi...i mean i know jo hua was so hurtful but still u have to sleep

Swara-nahi...m just tired thats it

Sanskaar-thats why m saying come n sleep...chalein

Swara-hmm(she felt an urge to hug him but she controlled herself)

Sanskaar-chalein

Swara-ji(they both r lying on the bed but still the sleep is far away)

Sanskaar-can i ask u something

Swara-yeah

Sanskaar-do u know about me n

Swara-kavita

Sanskaar-yeah...it means u know...woh i need some

Swara-take ur time sanskaar(n she closed her eyes but sanskaar was admiring her)

Sanskaar(monologue)-koi itna bhi understanding ho sakta hai(n he too closed his eyes)

(in ragya's room...ragini was sleeping but laksh was still awake)

Laksh(monologue)-bhai m sorry...i know u still loves kavita but u married swara...its all my fault

Flashback

(laksh was with Ragini when he received a call from his mother)

Laksh-hey mom

AP-laksh tere papa ne na tere liye ek ladki pasand ki hai

Laksh-maa...what r u saying...i mean aisey kaisey

AP-arey dekh toh ley adarsh ne pic bheji hogi

Laksh-maa par(but she disconnected the call)

Ragini-what happened

Laksh-dad has sended me a pic

Ragini-pic...kiski pic

Laksh-ladki ki pic

Ragini-wait...what do u mean

Laksh-they wants me to get married

Ragini-stop it laksh

(laksh saw a msg...he opened the msg)

Laksh-who is she yaar

Ragini(she saw that pic)-omg swara...phir se nhi

Laksh-u know her

Ragini-she is my sister...i told u na my sis is so cunning...wo sabkuch mujhse chinti ayi hai n all aur ab yeh sab...usey chain nhi hai na

Laksh-look...lemme call my mom...n m going to reject her

(ragini held her hand)

Laksh-what

Ragini-no...i mean don't say no...say yes

Laksh-r u mad or what

Ragini-haan tum haan bol do aur shaadi waaley din usey mana kar dena

Laksh(with an unbelievable look)-do u have any idea ki tum bol kya rhi ho

Ragini-listen...just go n say yes but on the day of wedding we will get married n phir uska dil tut jayega

Laksh-no ragzz...this is so inhuman...i mean using someone...i cant do it

Ragini-do u love me or not

Laksh-of course i love u jaan but this is cheating n fraud

Ragini-log pyar mein kya kya kartey hain aur tum mere liye itna nhi kar saktey(n she starts crying)

Laksh-ragini plz don't cry yaar...jaisa tum bologi waisa hoga

(ragini hugged him n smiled cunningly)

Flashback Ends

Laksh(monologue)-yeh mujhse kya ho gya mainey 2 zindgiyaan barbaad kar di aur ek toh mere bhai ki hai(he starts crying silently...he was feeling so guilty n ashamed)

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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
Awesome update Sona 👏 ⭐️
Ragini is so cunning 😡
Update soon 😳 ⭐️
Edited by Preet_12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Preet_12

Awesome update Sona 👏 ⭐️
Ragini is so cunning 😡
Update soon 😳 ⭐️

thanks preet😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Loved it 😳👏
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Very nice. Different from original story but interesting. Update fast. Waiting for next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Awesome update
Thankgod u converted this TS into SS 😃

Swara ko love at first sight 😉

Ragini 👎🏼

Laksh ab pachtane se kya fayda? 🥱

update soonish 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Aww loved the update! It was really sweet
SwaSan flashback moments were adorable, cnt wait fr more romance between them. Update soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: NabilaIslam

Loved it 😳👏

Cont soon

thanks dear😃
U r nabi or proiti😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: avihothi

Very nice. Different from original story but interesting. Update fast. Waiting for next part...

thanks dear😃

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