SwaSan SS: I am there for you. (teaser for ch2-pg-5, ch2-pg6)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue:

''Sorry,Sanskar beta.. Hum usse bacha nahi paye...''
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG kise nai bacha paye?😲

continue soon plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nhi bacha paaye...par kisey
swara ya kavita😲
ya ragini
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ch1.

''Sorry Sanskar beta.. Hum usse bacha nahi paaye..''

''Kisse bacha nahi paaye,Uncle?? Swara aur mera baccha thik toh hai na? Dono ko kuch hua toh nahi na? Boliye na?'' Sanskar pleaded.

Ram took Sanskar aside. DP came asked Dr. Shekhawat about the condition. Annapurna,Parineeta,Uttara and Sujata were praying for Swara and the baby,while,Laksh was consoling Sharmishtha,Dida and the Gadodia family.

''Dekho Durga Prasad.. Swara ke khaane mein itna zyada zeher hone ke wajah se aur uske reaction ke baad chakkar khake girne ki wajah se yeh sab hua.. Aur..''

''Aur kya,Shekhawat? Bolo??''

''Jiske wajah Swara ka miscarriage hogaya.. I am sorry,Sanskar beta.. Hum tumhare bacche ko bacha nahi paaye...''

Everyone present there were stunned after hearing about Swara's miscarriage. They couldn't believe their ears. Sharmishtha slumped down while Sanskar went to Dr.Shekhawat,still not believing what he heard.

''Uncle,aisa mat kahiye.. Aap toh mere aur Swara ke pita samaan hai... Aap aise kaise bol sakte hai? Kehdijiye ki yeh jhoot hai,kahiye ki yeh jhoot hai?'' Sanskar roared in pain.

''Main sach bolraha hu,beta. Main jhoot nahi bolraha hu. Apne aapko sambhalo. Abhi bhi Swara ko pata nahi hai yeh baat ke baare mein. Tumhe batana parega usse.. Himmat rakkho..'' Dr.Shekhawat consoled.

Sanskar slumped down in pain after Dr.Shekhawat confirmed. He couldn't believe that his and Swara's symbol of love died just few moments back.Tears trickled down his cheeks.

''Nahiii...'' Sanskar roared in pain..

''Ro mat,mhara chora. Tu atthe rote rehvega toh Swara bindni ko kaun sambhalego? Woh bechari toh sabse zyada sehvegi.. Ro mat,chora..'' Ram consoled Sanskar.

''Kaise papa? Apne aap ko kaise sambhalu? Maine aur Swara ne milke kitne sapne dekhe thhe humare aanewale bacche keliye.. Mere aur Swara ke saath hi kyun hua aisa? Kya bigara tha Swara ne Bhagwanji ka?'' Sanskar cried holding his Papa's hand.

Laksh came forward infront of Sanskar to console him.

''Bhai... Aap please mat roiye.. Warna Swara ko..''

Thud... A loud sound echoed through the halls of the hospital.
Laksh felt his cheeks burn as Sanskar slapped him really hard.

''Swara ka naam bhi mat lena apni gandi zabaan se... Lauta payega mujhe humare bacche ko? Lauta payega Swara ko uske ajanme bacche ko? Bol payega Swara ko ki uska baccha aane se pehle hi Bhagwan ke paas chala gaya hai? Bol??'' Sanskar furiously asked Laksh.

''Meri baat suniye,Bhai...'' Laksh pleaded.

''Nahi... Yeh sab teri aur teri uss Ragini ke wajah se hua hai. Tumdono ne apna ghatiyapanti dikha hi di. Itna nafrat thha toh uska nishana mera baccha kyun thha? Tune aur Ragini ne humare bacche ko mara hai. Tum dono katil ho.. Aur,main yeh sabit karke rahunga..'' Sanskar replied,angrily.

Dida went to Sanskar and consoled him,while he hugged her tightly and cried,while,Sharmishtha went to Sujata and asked her to calm down.

Shekhar stood there and saw everything. He felt really bad seeing his daughter suffer. He was about to go to meet Swara,but,Sanskar stopped him and asked him not to enter the ICU.

''Mishti,woh meri beti hai...'' Shekhar replied.

''Tumhari beti thhi,ab nahi hai woh... Chale jao yahaan se,Shekhar.'' Sharmishtha replied.

Precap: Swara to know about her miscarriage.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😭😭😭 poor swara and sanskaar 😭😭😭
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb Start...👏
Poor SwaSan...😭
Eager to see hw ll Sanskaar console Swara...
Continue soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I thought it was Kavita...

Can't express what m feeling..

Do cont soon...

May Rags rot in hell...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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emotional and heartbreaking 😭
do continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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💔

Sanky's pain. 🥺 Can't even think of Swara's condition..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Gr8 start plz do continue :) loving it so far

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