SWALAK & SWASAN SS ' MERI ZINDAGI TUM HI HO ❤️ part7,8 upd - Page 14

Created

Last reply

Replies

152

Views

33.9k

Users

25

Likes

277

Frequent Posters

jhanvibella thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: PayalHazra

Awsm update!!! update soon


thank u 😃
jhanvibella thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

thank u 😃
jhanvibella thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Nice update.

So, Ragini has gone to a state where she might commit a murder...but then she tried killing Swara before too...

The moment when Laksya sees Swara in distress, beautifully written.


thank u 😃😳
jhanvibella thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aailah

V good going..plz do update asap..plz


thank u 😃
jhanvibella thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Shanaia

I don't know why I don't get notifications that someone has pmed me😕

I just opened my inbox by chance and got so many pms😲

But they brought best news😃

Like your ss Jhan di😳😳

You,as I always say, are brilliant👏

And seriously, Swalak and Swasan both have a special place in my heart❤️

Lets see where destiny takes Swara😉

Keep rocking di⭐️⭐️

And update soon😳😳


thank u shona 😳😃
jhanvibella thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tayyabasohail

Amazing amazing amazing!!!! 👏 👏
loved it loved it loved it!!!! 😳
The song darmiyan suited their situation perfectly 😳
It was so sweet how lucky ran to save her 😉
update soon 😊


thank u 😃😃
jhanvibella thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Ratzz-

Really loved it amazing job dear


thank u 😃😃
jhanvibella thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bharath91120

Good job continue and do pm me


thank u 😃😃
jhanvibella thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

part 7:

swara was given some medicine by which she regained her consciousness totally. She was totally alright once she was up. She found sanskaar sitting beside her.

Sa: "are u okay, swara?" he had been so much worried abt her.

S: "yup, am alright." he let out a sigh when she said that.

Sa: "what did actually happen there swara? How did u get caught in the fire? Couldn't u be more careful? If anything bad had happened, what ...what would I say to dida and ur mom?" he couldn't say that what he would do if anything untoward had happened to her.

S: "sanskaar calm down. Am okay now. Did u inform maa and dida?"

Sa: "yes and I think they would be on their way now."

S: "it is just a small thing."

Sa: "okay now tell me how did you get yourself trapped in the fire?"

S: "to be honest, I don't know. I went inside to take oil and..." she explained all to sanskaar. She was quizzed abt who would have locked the door from outside or how the hell the fire had started. There was only one option that ragini would have done it as there was no one at home at that time, but she didn't know whether she would try to kill her once again. As of now, she was assured that ragini can do anything.

As she was recollecting what had happened she came to the part where she had opened her eyes to be found in laksh's arms, and the feeling of being protected when he hugged her. but she didn't divulge into these details to sanskaar. She just finished to the part when she fainted.

The door opened at that time. It was maa and dida.

At MM:

Laksh was roaming around like a lost puppy. He couldn't be at ease. He was staring at his phone. He went to his call list to call sanskaar but came out without making a call. he wanted to go to the hospital, but he didn't also at the same time. He was just pacing up and down in the hall way.

Ragini was also equally terrified, coz she was the one who had locked the room from outside. She hadn't known that this kind of mishap would happen. She had locked the room just to escape from swara, but things had taken a worse turn. She couldn't see laksh thinking abt swara. He had hugged her the moment he found her she was alright. it made her cry. It was like whatever she would do, he would never forget swara. from the moment he had come home, he hadn't spoken a word to her. All he did was worry abt swara. This made her hate swara. She couldn't help it. The thought that if swara had never come into her life, may be laksh would have loved her. This made the hatred feeling increase.

She was determined not to lose to swara. She had spoken with her dadi. She told her that she would go to badi to take the SD card. After personally destroying it only, she would feel at peace.

AT THE HOSPITAL:

All the three Bose ladies were embodiment of respect in his point of view. He respected all three of them a lot. Watching them laugh was like a treat for him. Seeing swara, smiling happily like this made him also happy. He decided that he would leave for home. He thought that swara might want to be with her family alone. So he decided that he would go home and come in the morning to discharge her. he bid goodnight to them and left for home.

Laksh finally decided that he would go to hospital in person to check on swara. When he came out, he saw sanskaar arriving in a taxi. He couldn't stop himself from asking him.

Laksh: "how is swara? Is she alright now? Why have you come home? how could you leave her alone?"

Sanskaar was observing laksh. he felt that laksh was still in love with swara and the hug reminded him that.

Sa: "why do you care laksh?"

Laksh was silent to this question. When sanskaar made his way to the stairs, laksh stood in his way.

L: "I demand u an answer to the questions or else am not leaving u" with a stern look.

Sanskaar was somehow enjoying this. According to him, he felt like he saw his old brother back, when laksh spoke to him like that.

Sa: "okay, she is alright now and she is with dida and maa now. Satisfied? Now don't block my way."

Laksh was relieved to hear that she was doing okay and he was even more relieved at that fact that swara was with dida and maa rather than with sanskaar. After hearing Sanskaar's reply only he did think abt anything else. He saw that the store room was badly damaged. He thought that he would decide on that once his parents came home the next morning. Two things were still concerning him,

The first one was the ring which he had seen in swara's hand, he couldn't stop thinking that "is she still in love with me? what if?" and the next one was, when he had rushed to open the door, he had found the store room locked from outside. How was that possible? No one was home other than ragini. who would have done that? With the watchman outside, nobody could enter the house! He was kind of getting confused. Did really ragini could have done that? May be what omi said could have been right? With all these thoughts he went to his room. He couldn't come to a conclusion. He was kind of starting to feel suspicious. Omi's words came to his mind once again.

""sometimes what you see can be deceptive, sometimes what you hear can be deceptive, but the only way which can assure u of truth is only the thorough investigation of the whole matter." This is what I am trying to say. So may be or may not be swara is innocent amidst all this."

He tried to dismiss it but he couldn't.

The thought of doubt had started to trouble him. More than the second thought the first one was troubling him more.


to be continued./.

jhanvibella thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anju10

woww lovely story dear
all parts were awesome very well written
omi helping swasan nice
thanxx for the pms dear
😊


thank u dear 😃😳

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".