SwaSan OS-- Their moments together...

Anu

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Loved it...

End was awesome...

The way they talked like a teenager was so cute...

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: anu91
Loved it...
End was awesome...
The way they talked like a teenager was so cute...

Thank you for reading and your comment 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Asha122
U r gr8 writer yar...👏
SwaSan were superb...😳
Ragini never changes...
Do write more yar...😃

Thanks very much 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: dpm15
loved it...😛
Come up with more works yaar...

Thank you. I am working on a slightly longer SS now. Shall update, if possible, this weekend else sometime in the coming week.

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Originally posted by: azira07
as I said before ur a brilliant writer and os r as brilliant as u and am extremely impressed by stories keep going in wonderful way and I completely agree with sonu comments 😛

Thank you for all the encouragement. Am working on an SS now and hope to update it soon, maybe over the weekend if I finish it. I prefer to load all the parts at one go 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: kaku17
Lovely. ...the understanding between them is tremendous. ...the a/c war between them is so awww...n ragz is a gone case...keep writing more. .

Thanks very much. 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Shree1005
Nice

Thanks 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

You write so beautifully! (Like I needed to tell you that!).

Keep writing more. 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: ros_aavir
You write so beautifully! (Like I needed to tell you that!).
Keep writing more. 😃

Thanks so much for reading & for your comment. 😊 Well, I have written another SS (It was written in the stars) and another OS (Their Future Together) on Swara--Sanskaar. Working on another SS at the moment. If all goes well, will update over the weekend.

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rafafan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Wonderfully lovely OS! It fitted very well as a midquel to your SS I read yesterday. you are an amazing writer yaar.

this OS made me feel so warm n happy! The cute banter and pretend arguments between sanskaar n swara. Loved the way they were pulling each other's leg about their favorite actors (BTW I like both deepika & siddharth!!) Their "compromise" on the AC was very funny as well. You have a talent for putting in humor in your stories.

sanskaar seems to be already developing feelings for swara here...thinking she is an apsara! Nice touch with the crossword puzzle you brought into the story.

Waiting for more from you!

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