Swalak ff: DIL KA dHAKHAN

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The ff

: A demoI am starting the ff of Swalak and Sangini that I told you I would start...

FORGIVE ME FOR MISTAKES

Durga prasad:Lakshya Sanskaar beta niche ajaao

Lakshya and Sanskaar came downstairs and said yes at the same time and then laughed at each other... They were one of the best brothers.

Durga P: Beta maine deicide kar diya hain ki tumhari rishta Ragini aur Swara ke saath hoge.

Lakshya:papa matlab..

Durga p: Matlab ki Lakshya tumhari shaadi Ragini ke saath hogi. Aur Sanskaar tum shaadi Swara ke saath khush?

Lakshya and Sanskaar said yes happily as they didn't want to hurt his feelings. But inside they knew they never loved them..

At baadi:Swara:Tum ne soona ki hamari shaadi...

Ragini; Haan... main bahot khush hoon

Swara smiled at her and didn't say that she wasn't happy because she didn't want her sister to be sad for her...

Ragini went to her room.Mujhe ye becheni kyun ho rahi hain..she thinked to herself

Mujhe to Khush hona chaye tha.. kyunki main to Lakshya se pyaar karti hoon.

At night:Sankaar called Swara:

Sanskaar:Tum ne suna

HaanTum Khush ho?

Swara said yes because she didnt want to hurt Sanskaar's feelings because she thought that Sanskaar loved her.

Lakshya called Ragini:

Rag:Hello Lakshya apne suna hamari

Lakshya interupted her and said haan haan..hamari shaadi ke bare mein right?

Ragini:Haan aap khush hain?

Lakshya:Haan

Lakshya didn't want to hurt her

Precap:Engagement:Sankaar puts ring in Swara finger and later on in the day it falls and Lakshya picks it up and puts it in Swara's finger. Same thing happen with Ragini and Sanskaar.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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FF:Part 2:

In the morning: Lakshya and Sanksaar is getting ready for engagement..

On the other side swara wear a beautiful pink sparkly sari...

Ragini wears a beautiful purple and pink salwaar kameez...

Mishti:Shona ragu jaldi karo beta late ho rahi hain..

Swara:Maa hum dono taayar hain chalen?

Sharmishta: Lakta hain ki tum bahot jaldi mein ho tumhari sagai ke leye..she teased her

Swara let out a fake laugh and sighed...

They went out and went.

Maheshwari house..

.Lakshya got dazzled by Swaras beauty and Sankaar the same by Raginis beauty

Lakshya:You look ek dum princess ke tara

Ragini: Thank you

Lakshya was saying it to Swara but then remembered he was getting to RAGINI not SWARA

They went downstairs...

Dadi:Beta Swara ring penado

Swara:Ji Dadi

Swara put the finger in Sanskaar's fingers and Sanskaar did the same to Swara

Lakshya looked away for Swasan's engagement because he couldn't bear to see Swara engaged to someone else

The same happened with Ragini

Lakshya put the ring in Ragini's finger and Ragini did the same..

The same happened with Sanskar and Swara

Later on in the day:Lakshya:Bolo Swara tumne mujhe kyun bulaya yahan aur kyun tumne kahan ki Ragini ko mat batadoSwara: iss liya kyunki kal Ragini ka birthday hain aur tumari aur mere aur Sankaar ka Haldi hain..Lakshya:Matlab?Swara:Matlab hamari haldi ke baad night me kyun hum ek suprise Ragini ke caatir kare?Haan vaise good idea Sho..Then Lakshya realise that he probably didn;'t have the right to call her shona anymoreThere was and awkward silence when suddenly Swara's engagment ring. It broke the silence.Lakshya picked it up and put it to Swara himself.Swara:Bye

Lakshya:Bye

Swara was about to go and realised that Lakshya holded her hand tightly

Lakshya mere haath..

Oh sorry

Then they went their opposite way..

Precap: Ragini's suprise party: Ragini asks Lakshya didn't Sanskar come? Lakshya says no... Ragini is dancing with Lakshya and Swara walks away and cries..Lakshya sees this and thinks does Swara love me aswell?

How was it/?


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Posted: 10 years ago
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chejal the update was good dear :) (thumbs up) next part soon!! waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great start😛
Please write more😃

Waiting for the 3rd part😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3:

Night time where we left off:

Swara was on the terrace crying thinking abut her moments with Lakshya... The moment when Lakshya had put her ring in her finger. When Lakshya called her Shona... When she first hugged Lakshya after the kidnapping!

Maheshwari house:Lakshya was thinking about how much he loved Swara and can't see her with someone else...

(I will skip haldi)

Next day's party(Ragini's birthday)Lakshya came to her house to surprise Ragini for Swara's sake. Swara brought Ragini to her room with candles,roses and cake... blindfolded... She unblindfolded her and Swara and Lakshya shouted Surprise. Ragini was very shocked and happy because Swara pretended to forget her birthday.

Ragini did not see Sanskaar and was sad...

Sanskar kahan hain?

Lakshya:Wo kehri ti ki woh busy hain

Oh tik hain

Swara:Cake kat de

They cut the cake and feeded it to each other...After that roses fell on Ragini. There was a person looking from a distance and it was Sanskar crying because he thought Ragini was in love with Lakshya madly.

Ragini:Acha to issi karan tumhne meri janamdin bulne ka natak ki...

she said while holding Swara's ears.Swara chuckled and hugged her.

Suro se saji hai swara

Rago se rachi hai ragini

Swaragini swaragini

Swaragini swaragini

Swaragini swaragini

After that Swara put up some music... Lakshya started dancing with Ragini... Ragini felt uncomfortable and so did Lakshya. Swara saw this and let out a fake smile whenever Ragini or Lakshya looked at her. Swara suddenly felt a bullet in her heart when Lakshya holded Ragini waist to do a slow dance... She went out quickly and started crying..

Lakshya saw her crying while going out. He felt really sad because he could never see Swara sad. He was lost in Swara but didn't realise he was dancing with Ragini. He then wondered to himself " Is it possible that Swara is jealous" "Is it possible that she loves me aswell"

Lakshya: Main aati hoon..koi mujhe phone kar raha hain (He was lying just to make sure Swara's okay)

Ragini:Tik hain

After he left,Ragini cried and thought of Sanskaar...

Lakshya saw Swara and was about to ask her what was wrong when suddenly Swara said to herself Durga Maa mujhe shakti dena pleasee...

Lakshya was confused.

Swara:yeh kaisa life hai pehli apna maa baba ko miladiya aur aub apna pyaar ka sacrfice dena kar rahi hoon

Lakshya was shocked.

Precap:Sangeet and Mehendi: Mehendi designer say to Swara who will I write.. Swara's friend asks Swara who is her bestest friend and Swara says Lakshya and the mehendi designer misunderstands and writes Lakshya...🥳


I AM SORRY FOR MY FF TO BE ALL OVER THE PLACE ON THIS SITE..IT IS JUST BECAUSE I AM NEW SO I AM GETTING CONFUSES


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Posted: 10 years ago
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JUST A LITTLE PROMO: FOR THE FF

Lakshya gets hurt throwing a vase on the terrace..

Swara enters and attends to his wound.

Lakshya: Swara main kar sakti hoon

Swara: Nahi main kar rahi hoon na

Lakshya:Nahin!

Swara: Haan

Lakshya:Swara main kahan na..vaise kyun itna caring hain mare liye

Swara:Because I love you damn it!

KYA LAKSHYA KEHDEGI APNI DIL KI BAAT?

kYA SWARA APNA LEGI LAKSHYA KA PYAAR YA SACRIFE DUNGA APNE BEHEN KE KATIR!?

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Posted: 10 years ago
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ITS AWESOME DEAR DO CONTINUE SOON...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@chejal nice update yaar!! next part pls!! waiting 😉

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