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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Read both parts in one go!
Superb and well penned
Excited for surprise
Please do update soon 😊

PS: you are Mishkat's Fan? 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: -AvRajholic-

Read both parts in one go!

Superb and well penned
Excited for surprise
Please do update soon 😊

PS: you are Mishkat's Fan? 😳

yep i love him
Mishu is so cute😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Please update the next part
I'm can't wait for it 🥱
love your TS 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Very nice. Waiting for your next update 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks frds for these beautiful replies😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66

DO YOU LOVE ME

Part 3

(swara ran towards the window)

Swara-where is he

Diya-there...see behind parineeta bhabhi

Swara-where

Diya-arey in golden sherwani yaar

Swara(with a disappointed look)-duffer...he is laksh

Diya(with a confusing look)-toh tujhe kisey dekhna tha i mean laksh is ur would be hubby na

Swara-but u said sanskaar was there

Diya-sanskaar...boss chakkar kya hai

Swara-kuch nhi wo bas

(uttara n parineeta entered)

Uttara-bhabhi

Swara-hii uttara...namastey bhabhi...aap kaisey ho

Uttara-hum sab thik hain par aapka dulha

(pari n uttara giggled)

Swara-kya

Pari-nothing devrani ji...sab yahin puch lengi...hum aapko lene aye hain...chaliye

Swara(she was feeling restless)-ji(monologue)main sanskaar ke saamne kaise laksh ko ring pehna paungi

(downstairs)

Shomi-a gyi swara

(swasan were looking at each other)

Swara(monologue)-blue...my fav...kyun sanskaar kyun mere liye sab kuch aur mushkil kar rahe ho

Sanskaar(monologue)-kaash main tumse keh pata ki aaj tum is duniya ki sabse khoobsurat ladki lag rhi ho

(swara goes to the elders n took their blessings)

DP-toh pandit ji sagayi ki vidhi shuru karte hain

Panditji-ji jajmaan

Sanskaar-bade papa main ata hoon shayad maine car lock nhi ki

Lucky-but car main toh automatic lock hai

DP-yeah lucky is right...arey sanskaar stay na tumhari best frd swara ki engagement hai woh bhi uss insaan se jissey woh sabsey jada pyaar karti hai

Panditji-var ko aagey bulaiye

Sanskaar-hmm bulao

DP-haan laksh go beta

Laksh-mujhe nhi karni shaadi

Swasan(together)-kyaaa

Swara-sorry woh main(she felt embarrassed)

Laksh-haan i don't love her

Sanskaar-tu pagal ho gya hai(he grabbed his collar)lucky ye kya majaak hai

Lucky-bhai m serious...mujhe yeh pasand nhi hai

Sanskaar-kyu...she is pretty , intelligent , well educated , well mannered...then what's the prob

Laksh-i don't know...she is so stubborn...aur tum iski itni side kyun le rahe ho

Sanskaar-dekhiye na bade papa yeh kya bakwass kar rha hai...yeh swara ke bare mein kya kya bol rha hai...bade papa swara bohot acchi hai main jaanta hoon

DP-how do u know ki wo bohot acchi hai

Sanskaar-kyunki main usey jaanta hoon

DP-yeh kya bakwass hai laksh

Lucky-bakwass nhi sach hai...aur iss jaise ladki se koi pyar nhi kar sakta

Sansaar-kar sakta hain in fact karta hai...main karta hoon issey pyar...i love her(suddenly he realised what he said)

Swara-kya kaha aapne

Adarsh-dida...mission accomplished

Dida-sab bohot accha acting kiya

Swasan(with a confused look)-acting

Dida-haan tumko kya laga shonu hum tumhara marzi ke bina tumhari shaadi honey dega...bilkul nhi...humne kal hi DPji se baat kiya aur unko sab bataya

Sujata-haan aur phir humne plan banaya ki hum yeh thare sanskaar se na sab ugalwayenge...lo ji ho gya

Lucky-n bhai m so angry yaar...u didn't even tell me that u love her...i mean tumhe kya laga main tum dono se tumhara pyar chin loonga...itna selfish dikhta hoon kya...u kmow guys ek galti ki sazaa ab tak bhugat rha hoon ab ek aur nhi karni chahta

Sanskaar-mere gharwaley kitney bade nautanki hai...n bade papa u too

DP-ji beta ji me too...after all i love u all

Pandit ji-arey sagaayi ka muhurat nikal rha hai

Uttara-yeah bhai bhabhi...ring to pehnao

(swasan were still in shock)

Sanskaar-ji

(swasan exchanged the rings)

Laksh-bhai(sanskaar n laksh hugged each other)blue sherwani bhai

Sanskaar-tu na

Laksh-congratss swara...hey m not ging to call u bhabhi...itna toh chalta hai

Swara-sure

(after half n hour)

Diya-sanskaar jiju...mujhe aapse baat karni hai

Sanskaar-haan bolo

Diya-actually na swara is waiting for u

Sanskaar-where

Diya-yeah plzz go to the terrace na

Sanskaar-okkk m going

(he goes to the terrace...n he saw her)

Sanskaar-bulaya

Swara-u r so mean

Sanskaar-r u mad...kya bol rahi ho

Swara(she came to him)-main pagal hoon haan...main pagal hoon...tum kitne bade duffer ho...meri shadi apne bhai se kara rahe theey bol nhi sakte theey that u love me

Sanskaar-oye tum bhi toh bol sakti thi

Swara-main bolti...u dhakkan main ladki hoon

Sanskaar-waah yeh toh mujhe aaj hi pta chala...waise tell me something who told u

Swara-what

Sanskaar-that u r a girl...kis angle se ladki lagti ho...jab dekho ladne ko taiyaar...jhansi ki rani lagti ho...waise toh badi bold ho...but propose ladka hi karey...how typical

Swara-tum na...ruko

(she picked up a cushion n throws it on sanskaar)

Sankaar-pagal ho gyi ho kya

(she starts throwing things on him)

Sanskaar-yaar shaadi se pehle hi marogi kya...pati ko shaadi ke baad peet tey hai pehle nhi

Swara-accha chodungi nhi(she picked up a flower vase)

Sanskaar-swara wo lagega mujhe

Swara-accha issey chodo...tumharey liye toh mere haath hi kaafi hain

Sanskaar(monologue)-beta kuch kar...idea

(sanskaar goes to her n hugged her...swara was still beating him with her hands...sanskaar held her from her waist,the touch of sanskaar's hand against her bare skin sent electric jolts through her entire body,he pulled her towards himself,he pulled her closer,only an inch's difference left between their lips and finally sanskaar's lips met hers and he kissed her,lovingly,passiontely,wildly...sanskarr's hand roaming on her back,swara tightened her hug,she was reciprocating the kiss with equal passion,love and care.

they broke the kiss and sanskaar said to her in a very passionate voice

Sanskaar-so miss swara gadodia do you love me

(Swara nodded her head in a yes n smiled shyly...sanskaar hugged her again)

Edited by SONAL30 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Sonal it was awesome , mind blowing ..
haha Maheshwari's should win dramebaaz award 😆

Best part .. Swara beating Sanskaar 🤣
nok jhoks thn ☺️

loved it 😳
Edited by Vishi- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
How romantic 😳 Loved it 😆 Lol the family did a good acting 😉 I just love what you write Sona 😳
Edited by Preet_12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Vishi-

Sonal it was awesome , mind blowing ..
haha Maheshwari's should win dramebaaz award 😆

Best part .. Swara beating Sanskaar 🤣
nok jhoks thn ☺️

loved it 😳

thanks vishi😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Preet_12

How romantic 😳 Loved it 😆 Lol the family did a good acting 😉 I just love what you write Sona 😳

thanks preet😃

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