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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: .-Amethyst-.

Amazing OS Riz! Enjoyed it thoroughly. The hug part was handled very well! 😳

Great work with the emotions & pain! I'd said you make a brilliant writer, didn't I? It's so clear here! <3

Please do write more!

Cheers!


Thanks Mahi... so glad u liked it. I will write more don't worry. With such wonderful appreciation from you all, I can't resist not writing anymore.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome OS rizka ⭐️⭐️..loved it❤️
Continue soon😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: mythili2

Awesome OS rizka ⭐️⭐️..loved it❤️

Continue soon😃


Thanks dear, u all have boosted my spirits and the soon mit be tom, have already started something.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: chandmeinchupi


Thanks dear, u all have boosted my spirits and the soon mit be tom, have already started something.

Wow that's wonderful 😃
Wil b waiting fr d update 😛
Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Awesome...every emotion was written so beautifully!
Hatts off rizka
U r a brilliant writer! 👏
Just amazing..
I have no words to describe how beautiful it was! ❤️
Karan missing naina n realizing his love... He counting minutes to see her..
Then that dreadful accident on road.. It was so painful!
Karan imagined him n Naina 😭
Then the hug ❤️
He shouting on her as she didn't ask abt him then seeing that doll n realizing she also missed him...
All the moments were so damn Good!
He asking her to come n then she nodding seeing his condition...
Plz plzz do continue it... Want to read more... Make it as TS
No ek kaam kar SS hi likhde😉
I WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE AND MORE OF THIS STORY 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: ___Neha___

Awesome...every emotion was written so beautifully!

Hatts off rizka
U r a brilliant writer! 👏
Just amazing..
I have no words to describe how beautiful it was! ❤️
Karan missing naina n realizing his love... He counting minutes to see her..
Then that dreadful accident on road.. It was so painful!
Karan imagined him n Naina 😭
Then the hug ❤️
He shouting on her as she didn't ask abt him then seeing that doll n realizing she also missed him...
All the moments were so damn Good!
He asking her to come n then she nodding seeing his condition...
Plz plzz do continue it... Want to read more... Make it as TS
No ek kaam kar SS hi likhde😉
I WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE AND MORE OF THIS STORY 😳


Haha Thanks overwhelmed with all your responses. At school, English was one of my weaker subjects but seeing how you all love my writing shows that I mit not be too bad. I'm glad u enjoyed each and every moment. Don't worry! I'm continuing it. Hehe if I can think of a proper track ahead then I will convert it to an SS.
Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Weak at English? Like seriously?
School time me i was a topper of English but if u compare my writing skills with u.. I m very bad in writing... 😵
Tune progress ki aur me... 😆
Posted: 8 years ago
#19
And yeah I really loved this one 😳
Do continue soonish and i hope tujhe proper TRACK jaldi mil jaye to make it a SS 😉
All d best!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ___Neha___

Weak at English? Like seriously?

School time me i was a topper of English but if u compare my writing skills with u.. I m very bad in writing... 😵
Tune progress ki aur me... 😆


Hehe yeah I think that was my only B subject in O levels.. glad I've made some progress though.

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