That little gesture...

Banjaaran25 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I want to be with you.
It is as simple as that & as complicated as that.

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When she walked into his life... or rather forced into his life as he saw it that time.. all he wanted to do is push her away.
He tried.
and tried.
and tried some more.

And then he couldn't.
Despite himself she became a part of his life.
His friend.
His sunshine.
His shield.
And then she became a part of him.

And when someone tore her away from him... he found himself being torn into two.
As if she is not being taken away from him.. he is being taken away from himself.

All he wanted to do is be with her. and yet he knows he can't.
He has his own private hell and she is too pure a soul to be dragged in and get singed in the fire of that hell.

Yet... All he wanted to do... is be with her.
And so he wept.
For the beginning for their journey.
For the end that will never be.
Heart breaking.

But that little gesture... of him touching the ground.. where she was right there, her imprint, her scent, just her.. him touching that ground with trembling fingers, with unfathomable emotions, with heart rendering poignancy... just to feel her... The most heart breaking gesture of all.
More than his monologues,
more than his tears,
more than his words... what was most heart breaking was.. that little gesture. Because sometimes a little gesture says it all...

How much she means to him.
How much he needs her.
How truly he wants her in his life. with him.
How much he cares for her.
How broken he will be without her.
How much she means to him.

...That little gesture.


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Agni_Jytsona thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautifully written
It perfectly describe karan s emotions 👏🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow.. How beautifully u have described that heart breaking scene and what Karan was going through that time..
That scene.. Him touching the ground where she was sitting few minutes back.. gave away what she means to him as u said. And Samridh.. Man.. What an actor..! .. Beautifully portrayed.


N I am fan of ur writing..

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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is so so beautiful!! The scene was poignantly heartbreaking beautiful and your words just add more beauty to it. That one little gesture of his conveyed all his feelings. He ran his hand over where she sat, felt her presence and somehow that gave him a little strength to think that maybe, just maybe, he can stop her? So he got up, went to the door and then stopped. Because he realised that he couldn't. He shouldn't. And so let her be draaged away. 💔

Again, what a fabulous post!! 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow wonderfully written 👏 that scene was soo heartbreaking 😭
Beautiful post ⭐️
Edited by mythili2 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Nimmi
Good to see you here dear 🤗
And ofcourse brilliant writing as usual...nothing new abt that 👏👏
Totally apt for NaiRan at the moment
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Posted: 8 years ago
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beautifully written. Sometimes, one realizes the value of something only when one loses it. Karan grudgingly accepted the presence of Naina in his room and life. And now she is gone.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: adhyakumarijha

Beautifully written

It perfectly describe karan s emotions 👏🤗



Thank you so much Adhya.
🤗
Banjaaran25 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: JennyD

Wow.. How beautifully u have described that heart breaking scene and what Karan was going through that time..

That scene.. Him touching the ground where she was sitting few minutes back.. gave away what she means to him as u said. And Samridh.. Man.. What an actor..! .. Beautifully portrayed.


N I am fan of ur writing..



Thank you so much Jenny😳.
Samridh is a wonderful actor.
The vulnerability of Karan shines through Samridh's acting prowess. He truly lives Karan.

Banjaaran25 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Sona.

This is so so beautiful!! The scene was poignantly heartbreaking beautiful and your words just add more beauty to it. That one little gesture of his conveyed all his feelings. He ran his hand over where she sat, felt her presence and somehow that gave him a little strength to think that maybe, just maybe, he can stop her? So he got up, went to the door and then stopped. Because he realised that he couldn't. He shouldn't. And so let her be draaged away. 💔

Again, what a fabulous post!! 👏



this is SO beautifully written Sona.
LOVE the way you write.❤️.

thank you so much for liking my post and bigger thank you for your beautiful description of Karan's emotions.
poignantly beautiful.


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