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This is so beautiful! đ
Firstly, I love the song and it made so much sense in the situation.I loved how Karan was contemplating. The part about him being able to observe things about people was so beautifully put! As we have seen, Karan is really observant when it comes to things, though he might not say much. It came out so well in your writing. His ramblings about Naina were spot on! He really cannot figure out what to do with her. đThe whole conversation was so poignant. The way they both apologised, wanting to make the other understand. And the roommate part was so delightful! Usually, NaiRan scenes showcase multiple shades in the show ranging from serious to light and breezy and you have captured all of those shades in this piece as well. I loved it!! :)
Aww thank you so much for the lovely comment.the NaiRan scenes have been done really well so far...I hope they continue in this vein. Some tears, some making up and loads of laughter.
