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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: akshayR


abhi toh 12th hain!!..when u go in colg..u will realize 12th kitni acchi thi 😆..
really??? tv m to clg lyf bdi achi lgti h!!!!!!!!
god...save me from this book dragon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey..update it now..
its been a long tym..
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Posted: 12 years ago
hola fellas..so an update after a long long time..i hope i can continue with some updates at least till the january 7..so this is sort of a short update...but i hope u like it...it may be crappy coz i have written it after a long time though..

PART 10 (to read the previous part)

PART 11


Yuvi realized that he just said something that only he knew...so he tried to turn the thing around...😛

Matlab...topper ki party jeeti thi..toh ye mujhe kyn congratulate kar rahe hain ??? 😕

Rathi: Voh bhai...gyanesh ne uss din suvreen ke saath jo kiya...uske baad humko uss incident ke clues mile...and humne voh sabko dikha diye..isliye Election Coordinator ne gyanesh ko disqualify kar diya..and aapki...i mean hamari team jeet gayi :) 😃

Mannu : Haan...mai aur Naroji bhi jeet gaye 😛 😆

Yuvi now suddenly started remembering what all happened that night...at first he was angry.😡 ..but on the other hand..when he remembered the moments between her and suvi..a smile came onto his face..😳😳

As he came back onto his senses..he realized suvi was sad...because she wasn't able to spend time with her cheetah.😭.so just by eyes..he asked her to leave for home as it was getting late...on the other hand

Yuvi : Yaar mai zara washroom ho kar aata hoon... 😉

and he went away...after he went...suvi decided to execute on the plan..and

Suvi: Chalo friends...mai ghar ke liye nikalti hoon...and she bid farewell to everyone..😊

Then suvi came out of canteen...and came out of the colg building...when she felt someone holding her hands from behind.😳..at first she screamed..but yuvi turned around..and put his hand on her mouth immediately...and both got lost eventually into their own world...a world that existed only for them..where they can look into each other's eyes for endless time.🤗..but then suvi started pointing to his hands thru her eyes...so that she can breathe...😆

Yuvi: kitna chillati hai tu topper...😛

suvi : tum aise aaoge toh chillaungi nahi toh aur kya karungi...😊

Yuvi : Haan nahi toh fir se chillayegi..pehle toh itni mushkil se jo bachke aaye hai...firse aa jaate sab ke sab...and mai tere saath time bhi spend na kar paata...❤️

waise sorry abhi meri haalat nahi hai ki mai laila se tere ko ghar drop kardoon...but at least tere ko colg gate tak toh chodd hi sakta hoon..

Suvi slowly nodded in a yes..and they started going towards the colg gate with their hands intervined with each other..

Suvi : tumko kya lagta hai...mannu rathi ko pata chal gaya hamare baare mein..

Yuvi : pata nahi topper...ho sakta hai..par ye dono bohot tez hain...😆😆

suvi: aaj mai tumhare saath time spend karna chahti thi...par kissi ne humko karne hi nahi diya...

Yuvi : koi baat nahi...abhi waise bhi weekend aa raha hai..toh mere paas ek mast jagah ghumne ka ek mast plan hai...bas tu aur mai...

Suvi: sacchi ???...and she lovingly hugged yuvi...

although yuvi still had some pain in his chest due to bruises..but the love of suvi was so intense..that...he actually forgot about whether he had been hurt or not..

slowly..and gradually..the colg gate came...and it was time to say goodbye..but none was them wanted to leave each other..with their hands still in each other's ..on the other side mannu, rathi and gang thought why yuvi was taking so much time to go to washroom..

Suvi :yuvi..mujhe ab jana hoga..tum rest karo acche se...then kal mere ko apni jeep mein ghar drop kar dena..okay ??

Yuvi : hmm..i will miss u topper...

suvi : Mai bhi..

Yuvi : i love u topper..
Suvi (starts blushing...) : just starts smiling..and turns the other side...

as suvi was about to board the bus...yuvi's right hand came out to say bye to with a wide grin on his face..and she went in the bus..he still kept moving his hands for saying bye to suvi...
When mannu rathi came they saw yuvi moving his hands to bye..to no one...so they went behind him and started looking as to wat he was looking at...but they found nothing

Rathi (clearing his throat) : Bhai!!!!!

Yuvi : Kya ???..kya...kya hua topper ko ???

Mannu : bhai suvreen toh theek hai...but aapko kya ho gaya hai ??? Kisko bye bye kar rahe the ??

Yuvi: voh...voh mai...

Rathi nd mannu : kya..kya ???

Yuvi : chidiya ko bye bye kar raha tha..kitni pyaari birds hai yahan delhi mein...

and he immediately left...

Rathi: Haan haan..pata hai kaunsi chidiya ko bye kar rahe the..

Mannu : apni bulbul ko...

and they give a hi5 to each other and went back inside the college gate..

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Next update: yuvi brings flight tickets for everyone..as the superb six gang decide to go for a picnic

so that's it for this update part 11..i hope u like it...likes, comments and suggestions are most welcome 😆
Edited by akshayR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow bhaiyaji...amazing update...bahot fun tha😉
wen I read chidiya ko bye kar raha tha den I laughed loud n mamma said why are u laughing
ur update was lyk hehehehahahah...hohoho...n v.romantic too😳
gud update bhaiya ji...loved it❤️
wow I am da first one to cmmnt...bale bale
Edited by sahashrabdidash - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sahashrabdidash

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wow bhaiyaji...amazing update...bahot fun tha😉
wen I read chidiya ko bye kar raha tha den I laughed loud n mamma said why are u laughing
ur update was lyk hehehehahahah...hohoho...n v.romantic too😳
gud update bhaiya ji...loved it❤️
wow I am da first one to cmmnt...bale bale

ab tum reserve karke gayi thi jagah...toh first commenter toh tumko hi hona tha 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update akki!!!
Its been a really looong time!!
But ya, sabr ka fruit meetha hota hai n v got a sweet chapter!!!
Thank u!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: akshayR

ab tum reserve karke gayi thi jagah...toh first commenter toh tumko hi hona tha 😆

woh toh thi lekin main edit karne ke baad bhi koi cmmnt nahi kiya tha😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shasha4ever

Awesome update akki!!!
Its been a really looong time!!
But ya, sabr ka fruit meetha hota hai n v got a sweet chapter!!!
Thank u!!!


thanx shasha...m glad u liked it! 😊...and i finally updated 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
jst lv yuvreen... do cntinue soon..
ye cheeteh ki bulbul..
aww..sooo cute.
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME UPDaTE!!
And u say that ur not a romantic writer...
All the yuvreen scenes were awesome!!
And I laughed Sooo much in the bird scene...
Again- loved ur use of monkey expressions!!
Please!!! Update!!! Soon!!!

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