yuvreen FF :Teri Meri Kahaani last upd pg 73 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Savi_S

Awesome bhavna. Thanx for pm.


thnx 4 z comment 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 5


I was in a really happy mood that I was gonna pick her up. I just wanted to sing as loud as I could to express my happiness, all along the road wen I was driving to her place I was only thinking about our moments that we shared then I thought

"we never had a nice meeting wenever we met we were always fighting with each other".

I was still lost in my thoughts wen I thought about the ragging incident .

"oh sh*t! while doing the ragging I really tortured her. First by making her apply that black colur on her face wen she just promised her dad zat she'll never be sad! Next wen princi got to know zat we were ragging the juniors I badly behaved wiz her! I yelled at her just to make her confess that she did it! N wat not!"

Still thinking to myself I was still thinking about the incidents that happen between us but gradually I also remembered the good moments zat I shared wiz her. I had a flashback wen I met her for the first time that also in a school for children with disabilities. Well for the first time in my life a girl made me smile. I still remembered how I felt wen I saw her at that time I immediately felt a tug in my heart, my foots went in their own accord towards her.

"man! How I couldn't think zat I was attracted to her at zat time! Oh well better late than never!"

I reached at her place I was willing to honk the horn but I stopped my self I remembered wat she said to me

"don't u know zat u should leave a girl 2 lanes before her house! If someone saw me wiza boy they will make a hungama!"

I waited patiently she came out 5 minutes late! Wen she climbed on the passenger seat she looked at me and had zat cute smile on her face and she said

"gudmorning! How are u?"

I stared at her I was lost looking at her wen she held my hand trying to gain my attention .

"huh! Oh ya gudmorning suvreen! Am fine n u?".

I gave her my one million dollar smile and didn't let her take her hand back I held it tightly.

She looked at me surprised.

"yuvraj is zer something wrong? Y did u call me suvreen and not topper?"

I looked at her and gave her one of my killer looks and said

"all my life I can't call u topper na! it doesn't look gud! Actually u have a beautiful name y spoil it with 'topper'!"

she looked at me and nodded. I then asked

"shall we go to college now?".

she again nodded.

While driving I was occasionally looking at her watching her hairs flying in the wind and she had a cute smile on her face "man she looks so beautiful!" slowly a small smile crept at my lips.

COLLEGE

We arrived, she went out of my jeep she came at my side and said

"thank you".

she was about to go wen I grabbed her hand,

"not so fast missy! Wer do u think ur going! I'm not finished wiz u!"

and with that I held her hand more tightly and took her to the kissing corner. She looked shocked with out wasting time I gently held her face between my palms, she slowly closed her eyes and began to breathe heavily I inched my lips towards her lips.

SUVREEN POV

I was happy that he came to pick me up. I felt his gaze on me while he was driving. And now he took me to the kissing corner. Wen he held my face between his palms I immediately lost all my senses. Slowly I felt his breath on my lips. I thought zat he was going to kiss me and I anticipated for that kiss but something else happened instead of kissing me on my lips me, he kissed me on my both cheeks. I immediately opened my eyes he looked at me lovingly and he said

"suvreen am sorry for everthing that I have done! Forgive me I didn't mean to do all these things to u! it was Rhea she brainwashed my mind and I behaved badly wiz u!plz forgive me and"

he again brought his face close to mine I again felt his breath on my face

" I wanted to erase all the things that I have done and hurt u, I thought that kissing ur cheeks will compensate! Well remember wat I told u last night I may certainly like u a lot! Well it's true I way like u a lot suvreen!"

With that he gave me a loving peck on my forehead, looked into my eyes and went away.


well guys hope u like the chapter as much as i enjoyed writing😳. well give me ur opinion by a like and a comment. thnx 😃



Edited by bhavnah - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
"My Suvreen" oh !! really cute. Bt it was a very chotu update...u need to write more. Hope u'll do it next time...do continue.. :)
Edited by NancyB - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
"My Suvreen" oh !! really cute. Bt it was a very chotu update...u need to write more. Hope u'll do it next time...do continue.. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
wow so sweet
u realy make me to lost in this story
really good work and i'm really appreciate it
ALL THE BEST FOR NEXT PART
Edited by kaveriw2008 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
The 5th part...OMG...loved the kissing corner wala concept...awesome update..
bhavnah thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

wow so sweet

u realy nake me to lost in this story
really good work and i'm really appreciate it
ALL THE BEST FOR NEXT PART


aww thnx a lot for the comment 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: NancyB

The 5th part...OMG...loved the kissing corner wala concept...awesome update..


fnx for the comment dear 😊
shahz thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Very cute dear loved it...plz update soon.😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
he said my suvreen..omg that is just soo cute...pm me wen u update next..well written though

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