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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Savi_S

wonderful banner bhavnahπŸ‘

update soon...


Hey thnx 😊
I"ll try 2 update soon πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago

Aww thnx a lot Kaveri ⭐️
I love it πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
Eagrly waiting for the update plzzz update soon 😭 missing your cute updates.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
great ff!
read all parts in 1 go..very sweet!
do continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was really gud plz update fast!!! Dying to noe wat happened on deir date and dat sick JAY KHURRANA!! bad man or d 'villan' whose trying to separate YUVREEN jo kitne mushkil se fell 4 each oder!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update...Keep it up πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 12 years ago
⭐️Fantastic yaar..⭐️plz update next chapter soon waiting eagerly.πŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
first of all hi everybody! πŸ˜ƒ hope u still remember me and my story. well because of exams i couldn't update.. but now i am only left wiz 2 papers wen it'll b over i try to update regularly 😊

plz ignore grammatical mistakes haven't got time to edit dem. and plz forgive me if the update is crappy i'm writing after a long time 😳

and the yuvreen's date will be in part 25 hopefully πŸ˜‰

till now enjoy 😊

Part 24
I quickly took a shower, put on my clothes and went out to meet my love. I quickly went in d hallway I saw her sitting on d bench waiting impatiently, waiting for me. I tip toed towards her and shouted

"booo!"

She jumped out of her seat with her hand over her heart, she turned towards me and punched me on my chest.

"tum human ke tarah behave nahin kar sakhte ho kya? U scared d hell out of me!"

"Really now!"

"aur nahin toh kya! Yuvi it's quite late please can u drop me at home!"

"ok madam let's go!"

With that we were walking hands in hands together, she went in the passenger seat and I took mine, before driving I asked her


"I hope dat u remember our deal?"

"haan I remember!"

"good now let's go!"

I took her hand and placed it on the speed gear, then I intertwined my fingers with hers. She looked at me, I gave her a dazzling smile. She shook her head and smiled. We reached at our destination within 30 minutes, suvreen went down and I also. I went towards her and took her hand in mine and I whispered softly

"go home now! I wish that I could drop u but der is a risk dat ur parents sees us! Well for our date.. I.. well I mean I'll text u as mujhe kuch kaam hai in the afternoon!"

"ok! But now kya kaam hai tujhe?"

"uff kya love! U ask too many questions! I said na I'll text u! abhi ke liye bye!"

"kya tum aise bye karoge?!"

I looked at her her cheeks developed a deep red color shade, she was biting her lower lip nervously. I smirked knowing where she was pointing to. I decided to tease her a bit. So I said

"kyun tomato! Kaise bye bye karte hai! Tell me plz!"

With that she was became more fidgety. I went near her ear and whispered softly

"arey meri pyaari si tomato! U look as if someone dipped u in red paint!"

"yuvraj! Stop teasing me! Ok me going bye!"

With that she began to walk away, I held her wrist and pulled me she immediately came crashing on my chest, I wrapped my arms around her while she did d same with me. Then I heard her saying something.

"yuvraj y do u tease me so much!"

"arey if I don't tease u den who will I tease! Haan if u want me to tease other girls I'll happily do so!"

She punched me on my chest and went out of my arms pointing her finger at me

"if u do somefing like dis I swear am gonna remove ur eyes!"

"okii meri Jhansi ki Rani! Do I have d gut to do that no! I'm all yours love!"

"gud! Now bye u must b getting late na!"

"hmm!"

I went towards her and engulfed in a bear hug, I pecked her forehead and went away.


AT NIGHT

After dinner I immediately went in my room as I knew that yuvi will text me, I grabbed my mobile in my hand and was impatiently waiting for his message, after a few seconds my phone vibrated I opened d message

Hey hi love J so u were waiting 4 me na? πŸ˜›
Well yes😳 did have dinner?
Yup jst had 😊 well tomorrow we r going on a date! πŸ˜‰
Really? Wer are we going?
Hmm Nanital 😊
Kya! But how will I be able to! Ek pura din bit jayega isme!πŸ˜•
Well to kya problem hai! We'll go actually I have many surprises 4 u der πŸ˜ƒ
Yuvi puppa aur mumma won't give permission!
Love I don't know u have to come ok!😑 Say that u have to stay at annie's place!
Ok I'll try!
Try nahin! U have to!
Ok baba!
Well tomorrow we'll go straight der ok! 😊
Ok.
Gud now gudni8! Sleep tight, sweet dreams and I love u! c ya 2morow πŸ˜‰
Okii gudni8, love u 2 😊 yea c ya 2morow!

"uff wat a mess! Now I have to convince mumma aur puppa! Hope dat dey let me go! Oh wait did yuvi said suprises! Ohho what suprises! Am eager to know! Hey gannuji let my parent agree! I know am gonna say a lie but plz help kardo!"

I silently prayed gannuji to grant my wish. I pulled my quilt on me and after a few seconds I fell in a deep slumber.

NEXT DAY

Finally it was the day for the most awaited date, I went towards my wardrobe and selected my clothes.


I quickly took a bath, wore my clothes and put on a nice perfume. I put on my watch, took my wallet checked if I had my money and my debit card. I took a small velvety box put in my pocket and grabbed my mobile dialing suvreen's number.

"hello yuvi"

"haan hello! R u ready? Mein tumhe pick karne aa raha hoon!"

"haan am jst abt to get ready! Yuvi mein kya pehnu?"

"kuch casual pehna love! Well did u ask d permission?"

"no yuvi am about to!"

"uff ok! C ya in 20 minutes! Bye."

"bye"

SUVREEN's HOME

"uff! Wat a mess! Hope puppa and mumma says yes!"

I quickly went towards my wardrobe and selected my clothes

After getting ready, I went in d living room, puppa was reading the newspaper, mumma as usual in d kitchen and Jeh was looking at something on his mobile phone. I gathered my courage and spoke

"puppa, mumma! I nid to say something!"

All of them left their current task and fixed their eyes on me. Puppa talked at me first

"haan beta! Wat is it?"

"puppa well annie is organizing a party at her place, she wants me to come and help her! So mein soch rahi thi ki' can I stay at her place today, I'll be home the next afternoon!"

Puppa and mumma exchanged some looks whereas Jeh was looking at me suspiciously. Then puppa answered

"jeh bete kya kehto? Can I let suvi go?"

"le apne parents se permission mang rahi hoon aur puppa uss Jeh se pooch raha hai! Who is he the president of wat!"

Jeh looked at me suspiciously and said

"uncle I don't know ki Annie has a party at her place! Well if suvi wanna go den I fink she should! After all Annie uski best friend hai.!"

I rolled my eyes at him and looked at puppa expectantly

"thik hain beta! Suvi beta u can go! But u must be home in d afternoon ok!"

"ji puppa! Thanks a lot! Love u puppa!"

I was extremely happy dat puppa gave me the permission. I wanted to dance but i restrained myself. I bid them goodbye and went to meet yuvi. He was already der sitting in his jeep and waiting for me.

hope u liked d update... the date will be in the next part... well hopefully 😊
plz like and comment.

c ya at pg 66 :)

little note: i want to tell u guys dat my story is totally different from the show's storyline. don't expect it to be like d show. thnx 😊



Edited by bhavnah - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I think i'm d 1st 2 comment!!
WOW Dis is d 1st word after readng ur update,
ur writing is truly commendable bhavnah!!!
Waitng 4 ur next part!!
Edited by Aliya_31 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice work bhavnah...read it quite late after coming back from colg..and its nice and refreshing..at least something else from the main program πŸ˜ƒ

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