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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update. loved uv's fight sequence... n thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awessome..! ! !

Sorry .. I was lil inactive so was unable to comment...
Bt really wat an update...

And thankks a lot. . For thinking over that stupid sa suggestion...

And u were wrong yaar .. U r too good in hindi...! ! ! Cont. Soon..!
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Posted: 13 years ago
c'mon bhavna itz mor than 52 now PLZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
eagerly waitin 4 d updat !!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
bhavnaaa !!!!!!!!! i realy cant beleeve dat itz ur 1st tim !!!! i think u shud b a writer !!! lol🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: janhavirox

bhavnaaa !!!!!!!!! i realy cant beleeve dat itz ur 1st tim !!!! i think u shud b a writer !!! lol🤣


Well I guess I should say Fnx zen 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
bhavna, congo 4 d 54th page !! wen wil u updat ???😕
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: janhavirox

bhavna, congo 4 d 54th page !! wen wil u updat ???😕


Hey have written half... Will try to update later 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
first sorry for updating late. well hope the chapter is gud enuf
the football match wud be in the next chappie hopefully😉
do give ur feedbacks😉
and no proof reading


Part 22

I was startled by his question.

"seriously how many kids I want?"

I went out of his arms and looked at his face trying to see if he was making fun of me, but his face didn't show any sign of mischievousness, I lowered my eyes from his face, I entwined my hands in my lap, my cheeks deceived me again by having that red color shade again, I felt his gaze, wen he leaned towards my ears and whispered softly

"bolo na love! How many kids do u want?"

"yuvi! Plz"

"plz wat! I asked u a simple question! Answer should be simple!"

"if I tell u! u won't make fun of me na?"

"no! zat's between us I need to know na!"

Wen I felt the seriousness in his voice I knew that I can trust him and tell him my answer, I gathered my courage and said in a small voice

"I want twins!"

Immediately I began to blush wen I said my answer, I looked at him, he had a cute smile on his lips.

"twins! Nice choice! Not one child but 2 amazing love! So 2 boys or 2 girls?"

"yuvraj!"

"kya kya yuvraj! I need to know tomato!"

"hmm! I want a boy and a girl!"

"oho mast hai zen! Acha abhi se family planning karle! I don't have any problems if u say yes!"

"yuvraj! Tum bhi na shut up! Family planning really! Hume nahin pata hai ki hamare future mein kya hoga aur tum family planning ke bare mein baat kar rahe ho!"

"love I see my future wiz u! waise bhi college ke baad I'll find a job, a house and then settle down wiz a nice and sweet girl jo mujhse bahoot pyaar karegi aur haan mujhe twins bhi degi! Take a guess who's she?"

I knew that he pointing at me, I couldn't help but smile widely,

"Aww he wants to spend his future wiz me."

"oh, na I don't know any girl like ur description! U tell me!"

He chuckled and slowly he brought his hand up and cupped my cheeks, he cleared his throat and began to speak softly

"love I really wanna answer u now but u'll have to wait ok! I want to have a deal with u!"

"deal! Wat type of deal?"

"as I told u if I win the match it will be a gr8 achievement for me! I promise u if I win I'll take u on a date, wer it'll be just u and me, we'll talk, romance and talk about our future! Wat say?"

I was overwhelmed by wat he was saying, I immediately hug him tight, and said softly

"thank u yuvraj! Now for my sake u'll have to win z match! Make me and urself proud! N yes I accept the deal for both happiness."

He at his turn hugged me back

"thank u love! I'll promise I'll win the match for both of us! I love u suvi thnx for being with me and being my strength."

"I love u too budhu! And u thanks me confident and strong! Now I shall take a leave, I'll meet u 2morow for the match."

"hmm bye! I won't pick u up tomorrow sorry! But can u come & meet me before the match?"

"yes I'll try! Now bye."

I took my bag and was about to go wen he caught my wrist, he pulled me towards him, I immediately sat on his lap, he smirk and said

"how can u leave me like zis! Aise bye kehte hai kya? Lemme give u a pappi!"

"yuvraj behave!"

"kya yaar! U now u must write a book on 100 ways to stop ur boyfriend to be romatic wiz his g.f! trust me it'll be a hit!"

I glared at him, he began to laugh wen suddenly he touched his jaw, I immediately felt concerned

"kya hua? Is it hurting too much?"

"naa! Am ok! Well wer was I.. hmm yea ur book! Let it be for now, now I want my kiss missy!"

"no yuvi ur jaw is hurt!"

"my jaw is hurt not my lips! Now zip it!"

I was about to protest wen I felt his lips on mine, I felt chills at my spine, I put my arms around his neck to pull him towards me, by that time he deepened the kiss. I felt on cloud 9. After the kiss he pressed his forehead on mine, and whispered softly

"dekha! Nothing happen am not hurt! And u enjoyed it as much I enjoyed it!"

I blushed, he took his thumb and began to caress my left cheek

"do u really need to go?"

I nodded, he sighed and let me go, I smiled softly at him and went out.

OUTSIDE

Wen I went out I spotted Jeh, he came towards me, I saw that he had a bruise on his forehead and on his jaw, I remembered how he has hurt yuvraj, and wat he said about me, I gave him a cold stare and went away, while going, he caught my wrist and said

"suvreen am sorry! I shouldn't have reacted this way wiz yuvraj! But I couldn't help! Suvreen he's not a gud guy leave him dear!"

"listen I know my yuvraj! Wat happens between him & me is none of ur business! Stay out!"

"no I won't! ur gonna spoil ur life wiz him suvreen, believe me!"

"shut up Jeh! Stay out! It's my life! No need for u to interfere!"
"I will interfere bekuz I don't want u to spend ur life wiz a loser!"

"yuvraj is not a loser! Y can't u leave me alone! Wat difference does it make to u!"

"farak parta bekuz I love u damn it!"

"really! Now u listen I don't love u! I only love yuvraj,I never saw u more zan a friend ok! Now leave me!"

"ok! Ok! Am sorry I just got carried away! Let's us be friends ok! I won't misbehave I promise! I'll stay in my limit! Plz don't walk away!"

I only stared at him and went towards his car, we went back home, none of us spoke, and neither I was in a mood to speak to him!.

NEXT DAY

I woke up early, I put on my sport outfit, I mentally prayed for God to make me win this match, I put on my shoes and went out, all my friends cheered me and wished me luck, I only smiled I only wanted to meet one person before playing my match!


hope u liked the update, it was not crappy 😊
do like and comment 😃

to unlock next update, it should reach till page 58 😛
see ya 😛
Edited by bhavnah - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww...(doing this seems a bit girly...can't help it!!!)...loved the part where she says twins 😳

and a boy and a girl haan ??...not a bad choice for sure 😉😉

awesome chapter...loved it..till when will u keep this Jeh character by the way ???😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: akshayR

Awww...(doing this seems a bit girly...can't help it!!!)...loved the part where she says twins 😳


and a boy and a girl haan ??...not a bad choice for sure 😉😉

awesome chapter...loved it..till when will u keep this Jeh character by the way ???😛


Well Fnx 4 z comment😃
I know aww is girly 😆 Couldn't help

Jeh! I dn't til know till wen he'll be here 😛 Let's see
Edited by bhavnah - 13 years ago

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