yuvreen FF :Teri Meri Kahaani last upd pg 73 - Page 33

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey di...its awesum but maybe readers dunno get tym to reply...so dont be depresssed...luv it n plllz plzz plzz dont stop writing...n god may bless ur aunt to be well soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey,dnt gt demotivated,plzz do cntinuee its vryy goodd,and now uv jealousy tracks soundsss awesomeme!!!!! jeh and uvv,tkkara dats gr888!!!!!! plzz do cntinuee and update soon!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: akshayR

one sec..can anyone please tell me full forms of SS,OF,FF,OS...and whatever abbreviations r there!😆😛

Hey dear
FF: fan fiction
SS: short story
OS: one shot

Hope it helped 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Read both the updates today.It is really good and please don't discontinue.
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Posted: 13 years ago
k so yuvi s totally jealous uh??
its fun to c lyk tat...
awsum update...
tanx 4 d pm...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
bhavna when u started the jealousy part in ur story same time in actual story also jealousy is started 😛
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now i can see the expression of yuvi when someone will come close to suvi 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
Simply awsum
jeh khurana charachter is reli gr8
Now suvi has 2 manage both of them
waitin 4 ur next update
Do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
kindly ignore gramamatical mistakes... no proof reading 😛

Part 20

After that meeting I was sure of only one thing I only wanted to kill that Jeh guy.

"how dare he call my suvreen beautiful! N why the hell didn't suvreen stop him! He was showing me attitude! I'll get rid of it! Surely if I stayed zer for more minutes I would have probably spilt him apart!"

I went in my dorm changed in my sports outfit, when I went out I saw zat Jeh guy still glued to suvreen I went near them and said

"hey suvreen! I need to talk to u now!"

"oh yuvi! I have to show Jeh his class! Can we talk later?"

"No! wen I said now it means now!"

Suddenly that Jeh guy spoke

"listen yuvraj! Suvreen said she'll meet u later so later it is!"

"oh yea! Who r u to stop me from talking to her?"

"her friend!"

"oh yea her friend! Well u just a friend am much more! So listen u MR wen I said she'll talk to me now it's now! U r no one to come and tell me to wat I shall do! Alri8!"

"listen u! whatever relation u have wiz her I don't care! She's busy wiz me! U come later! Now shooo!"

With that he pushed me

I was soo frustrated I wanted to kill him now!

"how dare u push me away! U bloody bas**rd!"

I went near him & grabbed his collar, I raised my hand and fist it in a ball, I was about to punch him on his jaw, wen I felt a hand on my shoulder.

"yuvraj! Wat r u doing! Stop it at once!"

I pushed zat Jeh guy away and faced suvreen, and glared at her


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"oh ok! Wen he pushed me why didn't u intervene? Now wen I was about to punch him u stopped me! Why suvreen? Ur friend is more important than me!"

"yuvr--aj!"

"wat answer me! First u stopped me from picking u up in z morning & now u saved zis guy! Y is he zat important!"

"yuvraj please stop creating a scene!"

"oh yea now am creating a scene! Really! Wen I asked u to come & talk to me! Y didn't u just follow me quietly!"

"yuvraj he's new here I was just introducing him to the surroundings!"

"really now! Is he a small baby suvreen who needs personal guidance! U could have asked anyone to help him! Zer r hundreds of students here!"

"I know still! Yuvi plz understand! Don't be angry plz!"

I was still frustrated, I hardly paid attention to wat suvreen was saying I was glaring at that Jeh,he had a smirk on his face


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I only wanted to murder him, it was because of him am talking rudely wiz suvreen! I glared at him, thinking to deal wiz him later, I looked at suvreen, she had tears in her eyes, I was stunned with the turn up of the events, I took both my hands and cupped her face

"suvreen! Come wiz me plz!"

She looked into my eyes and slowly nodded, I took her hand and took her towards my room, I turned back and gave a deathly glare to Jeh.

ROOM

Suvreen was standing by the window and looking out, I went behind her and hugged her, I kept my chin on her shoulder and whispered in her ear

"am really sorry suvreen! Plz forgive me for my behavior."

She didn't answer me, I removed my chin from her shoulder and turned her around, I cupped her face and said

"suvreen! Plz am sorry yaar! It's just he pushed me I couldn't help but retaliate! Understand love plz!"

She looked up at me and she removed my hand from her cheeks and said

"I understand he provoked u! but wat was z use of talking rudely to me!"

"ok! I admit I talked rudely to u! am sorry am really am love! I'll behave next time! It's just wen am angry I don't think rationally! Plz plz forgive me!"

She hit me in on chest with her fists while saying

"u were really mean! u know I was about to cry! U r so bad I hate you!"

She continued to hit me on my chest while saying

"I hate u!"

To be frank I was amazed to see her like this, I took her fists in my hands and leaned towards her earlobe and whispered

"but I love you!"

With that kissed her earlobe, she trembled, I released her fits and put her hands around my neck and with that I hugged her tightly. After a few seconds she hugged me back tightly. We hugged for at least five minutes, I broke the hug and cupped her left cheek and told her

"I promise I won't be mean or rude to you again! But don't expect me to be sweet to that Jeh! I swear again he does something like that I'll split him apart! Mark my words!"

"ok! Ok baba I understand zat u don't like him! But don't do something that u can get problems!"

"hmm ok! Hey love can I ask u a question?"

"yea go ahead!"

"well wenever we hug! I inhale a good fragrance from ur hairs! I wanted to know wat shampoo u use?"

" r u making fun of me?"

"no love! It's just that this fragrance turn me on zat's all!"

"oh ok! Well I use a fruity shampoo!"

"hmm zat's nice! I like it!"

"thanks!"

"ur welcome! Love can I get a kiss?"

She looked at me with wide eyes, her cheeks began to develop a red color shade, she lowered her eyes and said

"shameless! How can u talk like zis! U r becoming naughty!"

"oho! If I don't get naughty wiz u then wiz whom I will! Well yea coming to u no I have no shame! Now can I get a kiss?"

"no!"

By now her cheeks were fully red, I chuckled, I took my thumb and caressed her left cheek, and whispered

"aww my lovely tomato is blushing! How sweet! Now can I get my kiss please! Oh forget the permission am gonna do it any way!"

With that I cupped her cheeks and leaned my lips towards hers

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I touched my cold lips against her warm ones, I just pecked her lips, she still had her eyes close, I wounded my arms around her waist to pull her close and she wounded her arms around my neck, I again peck her and after some seconds I deepened the kiss. We kissed for at least 10 minutes, we broke it as we had to catch our breaths, I put my forehead on hers and whispered

"love I have to go for my practice! Tomorrow is the tournament! I hope ur coming?

She just nodded

"gud! Now bye for now I'll meet u later! Love you!"

I pecked her forehead and took my bag and was about to go wen she grabbed my hand

"I love you too"

And with that she gave me a peck on my lips and ran away, I chuckled and went outside, but both were unaware of the presence that was behind the door and looked everything

"oh so that's wat he meant by closest dear one! Interesting! But I'll see till wen these 2 would be like zis!"

With that he smiled devilishly.


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Edited by bhavnah - 12 years ago
akshayR thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice storyline yaar...loved the way yuvi patched up wid her in d room..that was so sweet..😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update! 😊
And thanks for the pm

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