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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
wow so exciting
waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 7
Until then the terrorists had snatched their phones and totally tore them apart from their outer world. But the reason behind their kidnapping and many other questions were still unanswered……..
Naro(sobbing): Aap logon ne humein yahan kyon rakha…….aap humse chahte kya hain……
Ranvijay: Yeh drama karne ki jarurat nahin hai……………aur tum logon mein se kisi ke sawal ka jawab dena main jaruri nahin samajhata…………. Toh agar zinda rehna hai to chupchaap baithe raho………
Rathi: Kyon agle 15 dinon tak tum aise rakho aur uske baad maar do use achha toh abhi mar jaana hai…..Phir kyon chup rahoon
Suvreen who has sensed the tension held yuvraj hand tightly, pressed it and looked at him…….. Yuvraj understood and jerked rathi and made him quiet…..
Annie: Hum yahan se kab bahr niklenge………….(burst in tears)
Naro: Ya fir kabhi niklenge bhi ya nahin………….
Suvreen ; Nahin nahin aisa nahin ho sakta…………mumma papppa(she breaks down)………..
Yuvraj: Topper…….Topper dekh aise nahin kehte….
Annie and naro were crying endlessly……..manu was trying to calm down naro and rathi was so infuriated that he was hardly present in the world. Yuvraj who was still in his senses, thought that somehow first he has to calm down everybody……and only then something was possible………..
He held suvreen's hand tightly who was still crying, and pushed the lock of her hair which was on her face, held her face in that hand and wiped her tears……suvreen started to cry more fiercely and then she suddenly hugged yuvraj…….her face was just on his chest…….she clutched him more tightly and her lips touched his neck and yuvraj felt an unknown sensation. Just then he hugged her tightly, suddenly suvreen's tears and her crying was just reduced to sobbing and then her heart started to beat fast……………..but none of them moved even an inch…….as it was the most comfortable, most soothing, and valuable in both's life ever. Then yuvraj cupped suvreen face, held it near his face and whispered……
Yuvraj: Suvreen………mujhe pata hai ki tujhme bahut himmat hai……….. dekh phans to hum gaye hi hain ab iss tarah se rone se koi kaam to hone se raha………so humein apne dimag se kaam lena hoga…….. aur humein aise ro peetkar kuch nahin milne wala……..
Suvreen: Par main kya karoon yuvraj………….. mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai….. mujhut yaad aa rahi haihe ghar ki bahut jyada….. main….main mujhe…….
Yuvraj kept his finger on her lips, looked into her eyes and said smoothly………. Suvreen maine tere andar ka dum dekha hai, bas use bhool mat, mujhe tujh par pura bharosa hai…..aur aise rokar bhi hum kya kar lenge…….better hai koshish karna…….humein yahan se nikelne ki koshish karni hogi…….
Suvreen looked deeply in his eyes, mesmerized by him but still she said, "Tumhe lagata hai ki hum yahan se nikal sakte hain………"
Yuvraj looked lost and said………… aasaan to kuch bhi nahin hai topper, par har cheez ke liye koshish karni padti hai…….. aur bina koshish kiye haar manna bewkoofi hoti hai……..hai na
This time suvreen looked up and said………yeah you are right.

Shimolina thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
The ss was a bit short but
Waitin 2 know ki ab humare yuvreen kya karenge 🤔
Update soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
omg...i luved ..but it was a bit hsort..plzz can u update soon...and a very big part..its just gettin more and more interesting..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
I am really sorry that this was really short ...
but i promise that next would not be so...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
😳hmmm we are waiting but stil so goog👍🏼
😛i like it😎
😉nice post😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
nw am waitin to knw wat will yuvreen do TOGETHER?

awsum update tanx 4 dpm...update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
it was very nice...excited to know wat will yuvreen do nw...n thnx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
OMG! tht was scary!! Hope the team gets rescued soon..😉 YuvReen rock! 😳 Thanks for the ossum update Medha..🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80

hmm...gud one...again..

thoda short update tha...but its gud...

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