SG ff;heart to heart (updated on pg 2)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hii
disclaimer:i do not own any of the characters
warning:might be boring
this is my first ff so plz be kind and leave your feedback😊
heart to heart

Suvreen woke up with a start, the bedside lamp was still on, and the rest of the room was covered in darkness.

It was her phones ringing that had woke her up.

She glared at the phone for a minute, then picking it up, she said irritably,

"What the hell yuvi??!!"

"I need to talk to you"

"Whatever it is,we'l talk about it tomorrow", said suvreen mid-yawn

"it can't wait"

Suvreen now straightened up, she had only now noticed how tense he sounded.

"What's wrong Yuvi?"She asked

"I need to see you right now"

"Now! But Yuvi, its 1 o'clock in the morning!"Suvreen protested.

"I am waiting outside your house, if you don't come in 5 minutes, I will leave." The line disconnected.

Suvreen stared at the phone for a minute,then jumped out of bed. She was wearing a red tank top with her old chequered pajamas. She threw a shall over her shoulders and hurried out,all the while troubling over yuvi's behavior. He had been acting a bit touchy for the last few days abd suvreen was worried about him. She had talked to Rathi about it,he told her that yuvi had met his mother and had been upset ever since. Yuvraj never talked about his family and suvreen did not think it right to push him but it was now starting too scare her.

She made her way out taking care not to make a sound while locking the rusty outer gate.

Yuvraj was waiting in his red jeep,which he lovingly called Laila. As soon as she climbed in ,he drove off.he did not say a word over the way. Suvreen peeked at him,he looked like he was in pain,his jaw firmly set.

The jeep stopped in front of a children's park. The park was deserted and they easily slipped past the dreaming security guard.it was lit dimly lit by far spaced old fashioned incandescent street lights, some of them were out of order. The light of the full moon was spread over the park in a silvery sheet,occasionally interrupted by the silhouettes of the age old trees whose shadows seemed like benevolent elders.

Walking over the dried leaves in the park with yuvraj,amid the chatter of crickets and the occasional hooting of a night owl,the cool breeze sending pleasant shivers down her spine, suvreen couldn't help but be pulled into the serene mood of the night. Unconsciously,she took yuvi's hand into hers,and they had walked a few yards before any of them realized it.

Yuvraj, who had been lost in his own problems, felt the warmth of suvreen's hand and looked at it surprised. The heat of it seemed to warm his frozen heart. He entwined his fingers in hers and held them tight. Suvreeen was looking at him ,though she did not say anything,he could see a million questions in her clear beautiful eyes. He looked away. He started walking again, his eyes on the white lilies blooming in the perfectly manicured hedgerows,but he did not really see them.

so?how'z it?should i continue or leave it?i really hope you like it!!
please leave your comments if you want me to continue..😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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not even 1 like?!!is it that bad?😔
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Wow :) Its just too good..Continue soon
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Gee thnx 😳
i'l post da rest of it soon.
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OMG!! amazinggg start Saima!! Kuddos to u..👏
Keep up the good work honey!! Update super soon..& its ossum dear! 😃 Thanks for the pm..😳
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Loved ur writing style...do continue
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👏👏👏👏👏It was FANTASTIC... plz continue plz plz plz...😊😊😊
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I like your description, very well done 😛

And I'm glad you decided to explore the more serious side of Yuvi and not the happy go lucky side that's normally shown.

I'd love to read a well written, slightly intense ff and I see all those signs in yours 😊

PS: this isn't boring at all 😃

Keep going.
Edited by naarayai - 13 years ago
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thnx all☺️☺️...

i really appreciate all da encouragement😃😃nd if u ol hv any contructive criticism dn dt too is more dn welcome.wl update da nxt prt soon
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here is the rest of it

Yuvraj stopped near a swing, it was in a corner, somewhat separated from the rest of the swings and slides scattered all over the park. He sat on it and started slowly winging. Suvreen stood leaning against the pole at the side of the swing. She waited patiently for him to say what was on his mind.

"I used to come here, as a kid, you know"

Yuvraj remembered how he would sit alone at this very swing and look at all the families enjoying together, with children running around their parents. He remembered the ice cream carts, balloon sellers, popcorn and peanut hawkers, and women selling jasmine garlands. But he had no one to share all those joys with.

Overwhelmed by the memory, he suddenly got up and briskly walked a few paces. He was now standing with his back towards suvreen.

"I met my mom yesterday, at Nanu's place. Expectedly we got into a fight."

He was speaking faster now.

"You know, my parents divorced when I was 11 years old. What followed was the usual custody war that is the outcome of every broken marriage. But here's the twist, they were not fighting for my custody. In fact, each of them was trying to throw the responsibility of my upbringing on the other"

Yuvraj was breathing hard now, trying to fight back the tears that now filled his eyes and blurred his vision.

"My mother, the great Savitri Singh, was not ready to take my responsibility because she had a career to make. She wanted to be a successful woman, an excellent principal, but among all this she forgot that she was also my mom."

He gave a bitter laugh that was choked by his tears.

"And my dad was busy building his own little paradise with a new partner and a new family, and I was just an impediment to his happiness.

At last my Nanu had mercy on them and decided to accept my custody, freeing them of all bonds that tied my parents back. But it left me rootless, and I feel I have been drifting ever since."

His voice trailed away into a painful silence.

Suvreen wished she could say something, anything that would make him feel better. His pain seared at her heart and her eyes burned with his tears.

She walked up to him and raised a hand to place it on his shoulder, when he suddenly turned and stood facing her. He then wrapped his arms around her and hugged her very tight.

Suvreen stopped breathing and her heartbeat halted for a second, a lifetime. She could hear yuvraj's heart beating against her chest. His warmth burned in her soul. He was silently sobbing into her shoulder. Trapped in his arms, Suvreen felt as if was weightless, as if she was flying.

She raised her left hand and placed it on his back, with her right hand she gently stroked his hair.

After some time, Yuvraj straightened up, he was looking into Suvreen's eyes. And his eyes said a lot more than words ever could. But suvreen had a hard time looking into them and to read the message written in them.

"I'll drop you home, it's almost light."Yuvraj said, and started walking towards the jeep, suvreen followed. It was 3 o'clock in the morning.

The jeep stopped outside suvreen's house. they both got out. Yuvraj was standing leaning against the door of the jeep .

"I'll leave you alone now. Sorry I ruined your beauty sleep."he joked smiling, but his eyes were sad.

He turned to go , when suvreen called him from behind,

"Yuvraj!!"

He turned back. She came closer to him, stood on her toes, and placing a hand on his cheek, gently kissed his other cheek.

"Good night", she smiled at him.

"Good morning" He smiled back, pleasantly surprised. Suvreen had got what she was looking for,his smile now reached his eyes.

The jeep pulled away and suvreen walked slowly back home, a beautiful smile playing on her lips.

The first rays of dawn broke on the horizon, and the morning star smiled lazily on the lovers.

The end

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