|Yuvreen:SS|Diwali party!(part 5:updated)

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Hello Ji...Sasriyakaal..My name is Pinky...n i jus luv Suvreen Guggal!!! I just love her pairing wid Yuvraaj...well I hve always luvd Gul Khan's shows n after Geet..SG is my 2nd obsession!!OMG YUVREEN!!!😳😳

I wanted to join this forum with a dhamekedaar story+entry..so here it is!

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"Yipeee!!!!..Finally humaare exams hogaye...thanku Gannuji"exclaimed Suvreen.
She was singing and dancing after writing her last exam...
"Haan yaar..exams ke chakkar mei mai aur bhi dubli hogai"said Naaro.
"Kyu chinta karti hai...hum na party karenge..aur party mei tu bhot khaalena"told Annie.
"party?!?!"mummered Suvreen!
then she immediately looked at the Calendar...And she saw that Diwali is coming! Suvreen ki batti jali..and she told Annie and Naaro that they should celebrate Diwali in college!
Annie was very excited with this idea..then she said"But Princi aur seniors ko kaun manayega???"šŸ˜•
Suvreen confidently told them that she would ask for the permission!

Next day...Suvreen was standing outside princi's office..."please gannuji..princi humein Diwali party ki permission dede..plz plz plz!!!!
She went inside."Good morning Ma'am!"
"Good Morning Miss Guggal" said Princi!
"Aap itni subhe..kuch kaam..tha?"
"yes Ma'am.i mean uhhuh"..Suvreen was nervous..as always..whenever she spoke to Savitri Singh(SS)..she would blabber alot...
"Ma'am mujhe aapki permission chahiye"
"kis cheez ki permission?"in her khadoos mood
"Woh ma'am..diwaali aarahi hai..toh mai.nahi nahi hum sab soch rahe the ke kyun na hum diwali party kare..college ke terrace pe"
SS was silent..though she always disliked Suvi..but this time without scolding her..she gave her the permission.."par remember..aap log koi bhi crackers nahi burn karenge..agar kisi ne bhi aisa kya...toh mai seedha aapku aur us insaan ku suspend karungi"
Suvreen was silent as soon as she heard this..but she was happy ke atleast she got the permission.

She came out of the Princi's office...and was looking for Abhimanyu..so that she could inform him about the party!!
She was walking in the corridor and suddenly Yuvi Came..as usual he started teasing her
"oye topper kise dhund rahi hai"
"tumhe isse kya?"
"ab bata bhi de..shayd mai teri madad kardu"
Suvreen paused n then asked for Abhi..
"tumhe pata hai ke Abhimanyu kaha hai?"
"tu usse kyu dhundrahi hai"
"Ab bata rahe ho ya jaoo"Guggal ji was a lil angry..she had soo many things to do but tus UV(ultra violet) was wasting her time
Yuvraaj was very curious to know suddenly why Suvreen Was searching for Abhimanyu..she didnt like any boy with Suvreen..He had developed a soft corner for her..but was not ready to accept it!

"Haan woh cultural room mei hai"informed Yuvi.
but he was very curious..he couldnt control himself..n immediately followed Suvreen..

There. Suvreen entered the cultural room and as usual Abhimanyu was sitting with That Ria..
"Abhimanyu..mjhe tumse kuch baat karni hai" told SG
Ria didnt like anybody talking to him excep her..so she told "tumhe jo bhi baat karni hai sabke saamne karo"
At that moment Yuvraaj and his bhais entered the cultural room..
Suvreen thought"agar mai iss Ria ke samne baat karungi toh yeh meri sabke saamne chopsey kardegi".."pata nahi usne last diwali kab celebrate kiya tha"

Mannu was curious and told kathi"pata nahi ab yeh Guggal aunty ji kya kehne wali hai.. aisa lag raha ke jaise ab Abhimanyu ko propose karegi"joked Mannu.
Yuvraaj was jealous..got really angry and gave a smal fight to mannu(a liht one)..
"bhai aap kyu pareshaan ho rahe ho?" asked Mannu
"mai pareshaan vareshaan nahi hun...bas jana chahta hun ke ab yeh kya karegi"

Suvreen ,Annie and Naaro were discussing something very silently..then Suvreen Gained some confidence n told bhi about the diwali Party...n also about Princi's Permission...

"Bhaiyya idea toh acha..bhai hum toh diwali jaroor manana chahinge" told Gyanesh(GD of DPSC..LOL)

Well Ria didnt like the idea but Abhimanyu liked it..so she was against it.."Are you nuts Suvreen..College mei Diwali...mujhe nahi manani"

"toh aapku aane ke liye kisne kaha"mummered Guggal
"kya kaha tumne?""Kuch nahi"
Suvreen is actually very smart...she got an idea..n told her"theeke hum voting karte hai..agar zyaada votes aaye toh Diwaali party terrace pe hogi...nahi toh apne apne gharon mei hogi"
"Done" told Ria.

Even Yuvraaj liked the idea of diwali party...he was definitely voting for it..
The voting started...everybody voted. and Abhimanyu was counting the votes..
After few minutes..He announced"attention everyone...ek important announcement hai"

Guggal was nervous..and Yuvraaj could see it..He showed his thumb implying that she will win and everything will be ok..she smiled..n for the 1st time was feeling good...some unusual feeling..
Abhi continued"maine votes count kiya hai..n majority chahti hai ke...Diwali party hogi"

Guggal was very very HAPPY..she was excited..she hugged naro and Annie...and was jumping with joy..she looked at Yuvi and smiled...haayee..Yuvi was happy too.!!

Abhimanyu told that Suvreen Guggal is responsible for the decoration of the party and she will assist Yuvraaj ...
This was a dream come true moment for Yuvraaj..andar hi andar he was very happy...!!


-----------------------------------End of PART 1---------------------
Precap: Suvreen is climbing the ladder and she is about to fall..Yuvraaj catches her..eye lock!!!😳








Guys plz tell me how was it..criticism is always welcome..n I hope I am happily welcomed to this forum!
Edited by geetforeverlove - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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First Of All Welcome To This Forum...šŸ¤—
Wat an Entry Dear... This Os is Amazing Yaar .. Was waiting for Os/FF/SS ... Finally...

This chapter Was very nice.. waiting for Diwali Party ... Update Soon

And Pm Me Next Time...
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1st of all welcome!!!!!

ur entry is really dhamakedar
and ur os ws fabulous!!!!!
pls update the 2nd part soon and pm me!!!
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awesome os and welcome to the forum
pls pm me and update soon
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Yippee...Finally a YuvReen OS!!
Awesome First OS...waiting for the next part...PM me too!!!
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atlast an Os on YuvReen, . I'm so happy
update was awesome, update next part and pm me
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Welcome 😃 and totally adorable OS!ā¤ļø plzz continue soon! and i think this is the first os of this forum! totally loved it 😃
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loved it...pls continue and pm me tooo...
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Welcome to the forum.Thanks for the Os.Very good.
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PART 2

Next day Diwaali preparations were going on...Annie giving instructions to Mannu.."Abey...woh light seedha laga warna teri chopsey kardungi!"

Mannu had to follow her instructions..
Yuvraaj and Suvreen planned to make some nice posters for Diwaali and so both of them were painting.
"Yuvraaj hum na isko blue colour karenge"
As usual he would never agree with Guggal so he started fighting with her"Oye topper hum isko green karenge" he said unkowingly..
Suvreen started laughing because he was using green colour for the sky n she even knew that he was simply aruging with her.
Yuvraaj on the other hand couldnt help himself looking at Suvreen..He was jus lost in her world.Suvreen was a lil uncomfortable with his closeness. She got up and went near the ladder."Mai lights laga dungi humaare paas sirf 4 ghante hai"
She climbed 3 steps but suddenly she lost her balance and was about to fall..Yuvraaj saw that and immediately caught Suvreen.Her eyes were closed and she didnt realise that she landed in safe arms..Yuvraaj couldnt help looking at his Topper. He could see how frightened she was..in low voice he said"mai tumhe girne nahi deta kyu k agar tum gir jaati..." At that Suvreen opened her eyes.she was relieved by the fact that she did not fall.She was was about to thank Yuvi, he said" shhh..tumhe kuch kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai..agar tum gir jaati toh duniya waalon ka kya hota!"
"Matlab?"asked Suvreen
"Matlab yeh ke agar tum gir jaati toh duniya mei ek bhot bada earthquake aajata"he laughed.
Guggal was angry.."mujhe neeche utaaro"
"Theeke.."said Yuvraaj
"ab mai tumse baat nahi karungi"she said angrily.

Now Yuvraaj was angry on himself..his days would pass by teasing her and his nights would pass thinking about her..."shayad maine kuch zyaada hi boldiya..lagta hai ab sorry bolna padega"
He didnt say sorry to anybody in his life..it was against his ego...even when he did that race he didnt apologise to the Princi too...But he knew that Guggal was special..and he had to apologise..

But how?..that was the question in his mind.
He was walking behind Suvreen..wanted apologise but that sorry struck in his throat..
Suvrren couldnt bear him and so she arranged everything on time..without his help.

it was 7'oclock..everybody were getting ready
IN SUVREEN"S ROOM:
"Mai toh yeh chudidaar pehnungi"exclaimed Annie as she was really xcited to wear Indian clothes.
"Mai toh yeh blue salwar suit pehungi" said naaro.
"lekin mai kya pehnu..mere saare Indian dresses mamma ke paas hai' said a disappointed Guggal...

But Annie was her best friend and she couldnt see her friend sad. She immediately called someone and told that person "watever Indian dress u get buy it and send it to DPSC..room no.202"
The person said "DONE"..
and Suvreen's problem was solved.

Half an hour later..a parcel came and Suvreen was really excited to wear that dress..
as soon she opened the box she saw a nice beautiful lehenga.
She said.."lekin yeh mai kaise pehn sakti hun..sab toh chudidaar aur salwar suit pehn rahi hai..phir mai lehenga..thoda awkward nahi hoga"

Annie said"kuch nahi hoga...ab dekh humaare paas sirf 15mins hai..phir pooja bhi karni hai.."
"lekin.."guggal was still not convinced"
"Dekh Suvreen meri mummy kehti hai something is better than nothing"told Naaro

"aur waise bhi tu humaare organiser..toh organiser ko achi toh lagna hoga na"told Annie.
Suvreen went to her washroom and was changing.

IN YUVI"S ROOM:
"bhai aaj toh aap bade jajraho ho.."giggled mannu.
"Chup raho" scolded Yuvraaj.
"Aaj toh uss Guggal ko manana hi hoga..warna woh mujhse kabhi baat nahi karegi.."mummered Yuvraaj.

"Aapne kuch kaha bhai" asked Kathi..
"nahi"..chalo ab der horahi hai.."Told Yuvi

IN SUVREEN"S ROOM:
"Suvreen kitni der lagayegi.."asked Annie
"Bas hogaya"
"acha humlog jaarahe..tu baad mei aaja"
"theeke"She even had to comb her hair so she thought she would go a lil later.

Annie and Naaro are on the terrace..Everybody is present..
Yuvraaj enters..he is only looking for guggal...he couldnt control himself and asked Annie"Suvreen kaha hai?"
"Woh abhi ready ho rahi hai..thodi der mei aayegi..waise tum kyu pooch rahe ho..bhot yaad aarahi hai kya uski"..lughed Annie and Naaro

"nahi toh..bas aise hi"

After 10mins..
"yeh kitna time leti hai tyaar hone mei"thought Yuvi

He was not enjoying the party..he was only looking at the entrance door...was eagrly waiting for his topper..He was looking at his fone..suddenly he could sense that Suvreen was coming..
And yes..Suvreen arrived..her hair was straightened and open,she was looking just fabulous..everybody's eyes were on Guggal..She was looking like a princess..
"Aaj toh yeh ek pari lagrahi hai"spoke Yuvi's heart!


-------------------END OF PART 2-------------

Precap: Yuvraaj and Suvreen are standing near the staicase..downstairs..they are alone..Yuvraaj is too close to Suvreen..hisnose touching her cheeks..and light goes..Suvreen hugs Yuvraaj!!😳




PS: Thank You gys for your warm welcome..I hope you like the 2nd part too!
Edited by geetforeverlove - 13 years ago

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