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Posted: 10 years ago
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As Sky filled with scorching beaming rays..

As if wondering about world's cruel plays..
A young brave warrior stood mighty with bow..
As crowd came questioning on his caste so low..
Who are you they asked young man...
How dare you dreamed of being in the clan...
Which caste do you Oh Son belong...
A Charioteer's son... I have done no wrong...
I came here to live my dream along...
Whispers galore soaring high tides...
Kill him ..he has chosen wrongly this time...
When thousands don't even bother trying...
Kill him.. for he has dared to dream...
Where dreams alone are forced to scream...
Kill him.. for he has travelled to other side...
The one where he belonged but had no right to reside...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful Riti. You are a wonderful writer..
Kill him, for he has dared to dream... so true, even today...
Thank you for this
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Another awesome poem from you Ritudi👏
So touching.
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Thank you all for your gracious comments😊🤗
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Riti wonderful poem .. simply loved it .. you always write so well .. keep rocking girl
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Beautiful poem!! 😊 each word shows how much u love karna,and that's the beauty of this poem!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mahiima16

Beautiful poem!! 😊 each word shows how much u love karna,and that's the beauty of this poem!


Thanks for such lovely comment
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SayaneeH.Lecter

Riti wonderful poem .. simply loved it .. you always write so well .. keep rocking girl


I m just too happy to see you here Sayanee. 😊

Thank you for encouraging words ..hopefully we may see some gems from you on him...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Riti
Hugs to you for this

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