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Hi guys... Why the forum is so dead... I tried something on Yuvani with theme on one of my favourite song Bin tere... I hope you like it...
Pls comment...
It was his birthday today but unlike usual, his Suhani wasn't the first to wish him. In fact, no one wished him. He doubted whether they even remembered the date. It was times like this that he wished his Suhani had been there but alas, you couldn't get all that you wished for. Every birthday since she left, he had a habit of reminiscing exactly three memories and writing it down. This was the third year he was doing this and for one, he found it very calming.


"Suhani, let's go on the rollercoaster. Even I want to see what's so special about it that the hoardings are filled with its pictures," I told her, enjoying the look of terror on her face. Though she wasn't always scared, the rollercoaster looked like a torturing machine for people.

"Yuvraj, are you sure about this? This doesn't look the slightest bit safe. There was a mishap recently too," she asked me, hoping I would say no but I was determined not to give in to her.

"Chal na Suhani," I told her, dragging her along with me onto the rollercoaster. Since it was fairly empty, we got in to the front seats of the ride and buckled our seat belts. My hand which was in hers was getting squeezed like there was no other day and just when I thought we should leave for her sake, the rollercoaster started.

I can't recollect the ride since my eyes were closed out of fear. All I know was the grip on my hand was loosened and Suhani was screaming out of joy while I was shivering.

"Yuvraj, that was so much fun. Want to go again?" she asked me, laughing so I glared at her and took her away from there.



Suhani for the hundredth time, watching Rockstar' over and over again won't make Ranbir come to Birla house and propose to you," I told, frustrated that she ranted on and on about some guy she hasn't even met. What was so special about him and what does he have that I don't? I was tall, smart and handsome. What more does she want? And why do I want her to want me?

"Don't break my fantasy Yuvraj You have yours, I have mine. Now shut up and watch the movie," she told me, her eyes still fixated on the screen.

She usually kept the remote in between us since I never did anything but it's become an overdose for me now. I picked up the remote and switched the TV off. In a split second, she was glaring at me and trying to reach for the remote but I started running and almost reached the door of her room when she tackled me, making me fall down and she landed on top of me.


"Come on Suhani, you can do this," I told her as I was teaching her basketball. Though she managed to score when she was near the basket, her penalty shots were never close.

"Finally," she said after she had managed to basket one. She reached for the bottle of cold water nearby and poured it on her face. "Argh Yuvraj, this is so cold. Couldn't you have warned me?" she asked me, drying her face with the towel.

There was still water trickling down her neck and my eyes unknowingly followed it.

"Yuvraj, shall we play?" she asked me, snapping me out of my reverie.

That day, something sparked inside me. That something was more than friendship. It was love.



He looked at the photo with the garland around it and kissed the photo. It had been more than 3 years since she had passed away and their kids were in boarding school.

The only thing that kept him going was the memories

Lusty lonely cause you're the only
One that knows me and I can't be without you
Lusty lonely cause you're the only
One that knows me and I can't be without you

Hai kya yeh jo tere mere darmiyaan hai
Andekhi ansuni koi dastaan hai
Hai kya yeh jo tere mere darmiyaan hai
Andekhi ansuni koi dastaan hai

Lagne lagi, ab zindagi khaali
Hai meri lagne lagi har saans bhi khaali (lusty lonely)

Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere
Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere

Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere
Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere

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Guys sorry I forgot to mention. ...
After the first pic are the 3 memories written by yuvraj
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Awww written so well but so heartbreaking!
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Heart touching post. Loved it. Rollercoaster ride and basketball memory was really nice. Aww finally Yuvraaj's three kids. I'm waiting for that day. The ending was sooo sad. Suhani is no more!!! :(
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Awww, Ash, it's terrific. I love it. Beautifully done.
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awww this was so beautiful I loved it. I am glad u killed her lol
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Originally posted by: sandiab

awww this was so beautiful I loved it. I am glad u killed her lol


O !! Sandi ab who will be the maid of BH house...lol
Thanks...
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Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Awww written so well but so heartbreaking!


Thanks dear... I like sad love stories more...
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Originally posted by: sandiab

awww this was so beautiful I loved it. I am glad u killed her lol


"I am glad u killed her".
Sandi, you kill ME. 🤣 🤣
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Originally posted by: LovelyLopa

Heart touching post. Loved it. Rollercoaster ride and basketball memory was really nice. Aww finally Yuvraaj's three kids. I'm waiting for that day. The ending was sooo sad. Shania is no more!!! :(


Oh thanks lopa... Glad you liked it... I am waiting for that day too when Yuvraj will be having his three child... Lol...
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