OS - Pay the Piper - Page 2

And that reminds me of yours, shamil--that funny, funny one you wrote. How about more?

This is mind-bogglingly brilliant! 👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️
I loved the journey you took us through- traversing through the inner recesses of YuvAni's minds.

This story gave me exactly what I want from SSEL. Wish you were a CV! 👍🏼 Please turn this into a fanfic, you just CAN NOT leave us like this! PLEASE! It's good to pass up.

I wanna see a steely Suhani who is trying to take revenge from Yuvraj. Since SSEL wouldn't give us something like this, I would at least like to read it. 😳

Both Yuvraj and Suhani's characters spoke to me- especially Suhani. I was so glad to see some normal, human emotions from her and not something mahaan. I loved that there was finally 'anger'- an emotion that has been missing on the show. She is human, after all, and her having 'bad' thoughts is very normal. It makes me love her even more. 👍🏼

The degree to which she has been tormented, means that there will obviously be emotions like detachment, bitterness, anger.

Yuvraj too impressed me here- it seemed like he was finally going through what we want him to go through. I loved how he doubted Suhani's sudden agreement to go home, and his discomfiture was very well done. 👏👏

Thank you all so much! This is a nice thing to wake up to 😳

Originally posted by: anita_m

That. Was Great. That is a perfect story. While I'd love more, I think it stops at exactly the right point. This is, to me, even better than your previous 2, which I liked enormously too. Hope you will give us many more. Thank you.

Originally posted by: shamil

I have lost interest in the show.

But how can I resist reading an OS by u, samcek?

It is tuly truly amazing. This is the kind of story I yearned to watch. But unfortunately I just can't stand dumbo at the moment.

I hope u will write next part, won't u?

Originally posted by: clarity

This is mind-bogglingly brilliant! ⭐️
I loved the journey you took us through- traversing through the inner recesses of YuvAni's minds.

This story gave me exactly what I want from SSEL. Wish you were a CV! 👍🏼 Please turn this into a fanfic, you just CAN NOT leave us like this! PLEASE! It's good to pass up.

I wanna see a steely Suhani who is trying to take revenge from Yuvraj. Since SSEL wouldn't give us something like this, I would at least like to read it. 😳

Both Yuvraj and Suhani's characters spoke to me- especially Suhani. I was so glad to see some normal, human emotions from her and not something mahaan. I loved that there was finally 'anger'- an emotion that has been missing on the show. She is human, after all, and her having 'bad' thoughts is very normal. It makes me love her even more. 👍🏼

The degree to which she has been tormented, means that there will obviously be emotions like detachment, bitterness, anger.

Yuvraj too impressed me here- it seemed like he was finally going through what we want him to go through. I loved how he doubted Suhani's sudden agreement to go home, and his discomfiture was very well done. 👏👏

Such an amazing os, would loved it if u continued it, it was simply awesome

Simply awesome...with the current track, you've highlighted Suhani's feelings well so also Yuvraj's commotion...this is what we witnessed yesterday...he pained at seeing Suhani so hurt.

OH sam!