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IMO,
just Yuvraj and Suhani are enough to shoulder this show - you can show incidences with others- sometimes with dadi, sometimes with rags-menaka, at times with saurabh-anuj...some other characters in their lives too and su and yuv solving chota-chota stuff in a "kabhi haan kabhi naa" kind-a cute and fun romance.
Instead the whole Serial is derailed by excessive focus on by now anything but friend SOMU and anything but DADI-DADI! what the hell!
I'm off this super-crap track!
Reasons below -
Attention SSEL CVs!!
#1
Dadi and the support from all quarters she seems to get is not palatable and highly unlikely.
That people even dim-wits like Menaka would constantly shelve their lives put their reputation at stake and indulge in cheap antics...Now even that 'Rags upset with Suhani theme' is also not buyable; especially since she is an attention-seeker and Dadi is paying attention only to Somu
(this point is in itself quite unrealistic)
As per the track if all dadi wants is a fair girl, she will find dozens. All said and done, Somu looks like shit despite being fair and all.
#2
A married woman who actually until recently lived with her husband is being pushed into the face of her own grandson even before her divorce is through. This same dadi talks of 'khandaan ki izzat'!! Is this a joke?
#3
Now that Yuvraj already knows what Somu is all about first-hand, that he is not catching on despite all this 'friendship-hogwash' is also not buyable. If he is paying attention to SOMU, it means only one thing at this point, that he plans to get rid of Suhani.
So, best is to get Yuv and somu get together and throw Suhani out asap if that's what you want cvs, instead of harassing the audience :)
But we all know that - that's not what you want to show...it's quite obvious from the title that you want Suhani to be Yuvrajs heroine. Then why are you dragging this crap? you can show different small incidences and overcoming them in a fun, light-weight rom-com situations. But I blieve you are banking on TRPs by breaking the audience' heart and creating some serious bad and crap scenes and causing prolonged anxiety and irritation. Quickly close this Somu chapter (get her off the show...she's the most useless thing that happened to the show after the intial intro and necessary episodes got over. At best you can show her in few guest scenes on par with bhavna-di or even-less later on)
If after all this- Yuvraj has not caught on to the somu crap, anything you show later on will be unbelievable. Just show that he gets to know that Suhani is deliberately led to the swamp by none other than Somu-through Ramesh and also about all the hanky-panky done to leave Suhani(her best friend)out of her own picnic with her own husband!
You guys are meaninglessly piling on too many incidences 1by1 of bad nature-that it will be a little difficult for the audience to relate later when you claim that Yuvraj loves Suhani. If he did care for her as a wife leave alone love her - he would find out how Suhani landed in the swamp, go talk to somu's mom about it all and make her take back somu and hopefully leave to some other country.
or
make somu go off to krishna and let him find a job in some other place...if you must you can show somu in the 1000th episode later...(i doubt if it's going to reach 300, if you continue on the current uber-crap, btw)
#4
OTOH if you want Somu to be the heroine-ssel is anyway likely to end soon in that case-
Get Suhani the hell outta that snake pit and be done with it. Enough already...
I hope you realize that now the way you are showing all of the birlas are quite snaky.
In the long run suhani is better off and I'm sure she will get a job to do and find an educated man to marry. COPING ENDLESSLY AND FRUITLESSLY IN HOPELESS SITUATIONS CAN HARDLY BE FUN FOR THE HERIONE. Trust me it is not fun for the audience either!
Be done with dadi-somu love fest puhleez!!!
just Yuvraj and Suhani are enough to shoulder this show - you can show incidences with others- sometimes with dadi, sometimes with rags-menaka, at times with saurabh-anuj...some other characters in their lives too and su and yuv solving chota-chota stuff in a "kabhi haan kabhi naa" kind-a cute and fun romance.
Instead the whole Serial is derailed by excessive focus on by now anything but friend SOMU and anything but DADI-DADI! what the hell!
I'm off this super-crap track!
Reasons below -
Attention SSEL CVs!!
#1
Dadi and the support from all quarters she seems to get is not palatable and highly unlikely.
That people even dim-wits like Menaka would constantly shelve their lives put their reputation at stake and indulge in cheap antics...Now even that 'Rags upset with Suhani theme' is also not buyable; especially since she is an attention-seeker and Dadi is paying attention only to Somu
(this point is in itself quite unrealistic)
As per the track if all dadi wants is a fair girl, she will find dozens. All said and done, Somu looks like shit despite being fair and all.
#2
A married woman who actually until recently lived with her husband is being pushed into the face of her own grandson even before her divorce is through. This same dadi talks of 'khandaan ki izzat'!! Is this a joke?
#3
Now that Yuvraj already knows what Somu is all about first-hand, that he is not catching on despite all this 'friendship-hogwash' is also not buyable. If he is paying attention to SOMU, it means only one thing at this point, that he plans to get rid of Suhani.
So, best is to get Yuv and somu get together and throw Suhani out asap if that's what you want cvs, instead of harassing the audience :)
But we all know that - that's not what you want to show...it's quite obvious from the title that you want Suhani to be Yuvrajs heroine. Then why are you dragging this crap? you can show different small incidences and overcoming them in a fun, light-weight rom-com situations. But I blieve you are banking on TRPs by breaking the audience' heart and creating some serious bad and crap scenes and causing prolonged anxiety and irritation. Quickly close this Somu chapter (get her off the show...she's the most useless thing that happened to the show after the intial intro and necessary episodes got over. At best you can show her in few guest scenes on par with bhavna-di or even-less later on)
If after all this- Yuvraj has not caught on to the somu crap, anything you show later on will be unbelievable. Just show that he gets to know that Suhani is deliberately led to the swamp by none other than Somu-through Ramesh and also about all the hanky-panky done to leave Suhani(her best friend)out of her own picnic with her own husband!
You guys are meaninglessly piling on too many incidences 1by1 of bad nature-that it will be a little difficult for the audience to relate later when you claim that Yuvraj loves Suhani. If he did care for her as a wife leave alone love her - he would find out how Suhani landed in the swamp, go talk to somu's mom about it all and make her take back somu and hopefully leave to some other country.
or
make somu go off to krishna and let him find a job in some other place...if you must you can show somu in the 1000th episode later...(i doubt if it's going to reach 300, if you continue on the current uber-crap, btw)
#4
OTOH if you want Somu to be the heroine-ssel is anyway likely to end soon in that case-
Get Suhani the hell outta that snake pit and be done with it. Enough already...
I hope you realize that now the way you are showing all of the birlas are quite snaky.
In the long run suhani is better off and I'm sure she will get a job to do and find an educated man to marry. COPING ENDLESSLY AND FRUITLESSLY IN HOPELESS SITUATIONS CAN HARDLY BE FUN FOR THE HERIONE. Trust me it is not fun for the audience either!
Be done with dadi-somu love fest puhleez!!!
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