SSEL Written Update 22nd January 2015

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Sorry worked off an old version of the word pad so didnt have a spell check and I was running late so didnt have time to read thru it and correct my mistakes

Dadi is telling Menka, If Suhani thinks she looks nice let her live with this lie. The foursome smile while the others get upset. Pratima tells Suhani, dont look sad you look really good in the sari. Dadi tells Pratima, yeah she would nice to you because just like her you like trash too and what would you know about Birla status and respect. (Dadi ji, I think you should set up classes because no one really understand your backward ways.). Sharad announces that Yuvraj has come shall we start. Yuvraj hugs Pratima. Pratima tells Rags and Saurabh to come and start with the bhog (Meri Jaan, where were you? I missed you so much! Dont leave me like that ever again. One by one, each couple gives do the bhog. Pratima tells Suhani to give everyone the ladoo. Yuvraj and Sharad look at each other laughing. Suhani gets worried. Suhani goes to grab the tray. She first offers to Yuvraj, Yuvraj tells Sharad to have it first. Sharad tells you are the husband, you should take it first. Yuvraj says ok and takes one. Yuvraj takes a bite and hurts his teeth, he screams. Sharad asks ohh did it break? Yuvraj says no, you take a bite and throws it to Sharad. Sharad ducks and it hits Dadi in the face. (HAHAHAHA!!! just perfect. Sharad my hero) Everyone is shocked. Dadi removes her hand and her eye is black. Suhani screams out and everyone looks at her. It was her imagination. (Damn!!!) Yuvraj is chewing on the ladoo looking at her. Everyone looks at her confused. She tells Yuvraj if their are so bad dont eat it, Soumya smiles. Yuvraj tells her its tasty. Suhani says really? Yuvraj says really! Suhani gets happy and asks really! Their smile. Suhani says in front of everyone, you taught me so nicely, it was bound to be good. Yuvraj looks uncomfortable.Everyone smiles. Yuvraj says hurry up and given it to everyone before you finish it. Pratima says why wouldnt she, it her right and is about to feed one to Suhani. Dadi says dont praise her too much, its just sesame seed ladoo, you could get betters one in the store. Forget the laddo we have to fly the kite. Saurabh (FYI, calling him Jaan from now) says exactly, lets go. Anuj tells him to forget it because instead of flying you try and cut other people kites. Sharad says and our noses, the neighbor flies a kite better then you.(Sharad dont talk about my jaan that way) Everyone laughs. My Jaan asks Suhani to give him ladoo. The confidence he lost he will regain by eating her ladoo and win. Suhani gives him one. He tells her that what will one do and Saurabh begins to take more. Anuj says dont eat everything leave some for us. My jaan tells him, you are dieting dont you need to make a body. Anuj tells him, I made my body, you and Sharad need to go on a diet. Sharad is shocked. Anuj pulls my jaan away. He tells him to save some for later. Everyone leaves. Soumya is upset. Sharad ask Suhani to give him the tray. He takes it to Soumya and says take one you must be hungry. Soumya gets upset. Sharad tells her that dont get upset at the offering, dont worry i will get you water later. Soumya walks away upset. Sharad calls from behind her to take one. Yuvraj tells him to come and have the rest of the ladoo, I am going to my room, I will not fly any kite. Suhani goes after Yuvraj, you wont fly a kite, do you know how much fun it is. I was a champion back, no one was brave enough to cut my kite and and when i did i use to say "yeh khati." Sharad and Suhani given each other a high five. Yuvraj looks upset at both. Both get silent. Suhani says i was recalling my old days but i tell you.. Yuvraj asks if she is done. Suhani leaves. Sharad holds Yuvraj and tells him I spoke to my agent and she will get a room for me soon and you wont have to worry about Soumya.

Suhani and Menka look at Rags eating her ladoo. Rags compliments Suhani about the ladoo. She offers some to Menka. Menka asks Suhani what is wrong with her, did my jaan ghost enter her body. She hasnt stopped eating. Suhani looks sad. She sees Ramesh and tells him to clean the hall quickly, she need to go upstairs and fly the kites. Rags tells her the ladoo are really good, you are a all rounder. is there anything you cant do? Suhani tells her there is one think and that is to answer your question anyways today is a holiday, i dont want to argue. Rags stops Suhani and asks her what is with the attitude, i was just saying anyways tell me if you brought a special kite for Yuvraj? Suhani asks special kite? Rags says did no one tell you? for the first one, in the Birla house, every wife buys they husband a special kite. Me and Menka did the same. Menka looks confused. Rags tells her with the kite i brought my jaan, he won. Suhani looks sad. Rags asks what happen, you didnt get one? Dadi will get mad at you again. Suhani says is enough time to get one from the store. Menka tells her to make one at home. Rags says there isnt enough time to make one at home. Suhani says there is enough time to make one. just dont tell anyone. Menka scares her about Dadi and Rags tells Menka dont scare her she knows about Dadi. She has gotten scold so many times. Suhani leave. Rags throws the ladoo that was in her hand. She says Suhani you will be busy making your kite her while Yuvraj and Soumya will fly their love kite upstairs. Both smile.

Everyone is on the roof flying kites. My jaan says here comes the real Birla Yuvraj, he will just sit there and drink juice while we fly kites. Sharad tells him, his job is to sit and relax, you and me are here to do his job. Both laugh. Sharad says i am flying a kite on his behalf i wont leave anyone behind. He screams "le Khati", Anuj says, My jaan made the comment, why did you cut my kite, you could of let me stay 5 mins. Sharad says this is not your gym, its my sky, first learn and then come into the ring. My jaan says and before you were talking about me losing. Both continue to fly their kites. Soumya comes and sits next to Yuvraj and looks at him. Both Yuvraj and Pratima look disgusted. DaRagMen watch them, smiling. Yuvraj gets up and sits somewhere else. Soumya gets upset and gets up to sit with the DaRagMen. Pratima asks Ramesh where is Suhani. He tells her he doesnt know he will look for her. Rags tells her to leave her inside, its sunny outside, she will get more tanned. Menka says poor Suhani she is probably getting over the Khabaddi match tan. Soumya says in that case, my skin is good, i dont get tan so easliy (Really! Come let me cook you in a tanning booth, come come). Pratima looks upset at Soumya. Menka says when do you come into the sun, you always run away. Yuvraj hears their conversation and says the one willl natural beauty is my mom, nothing matters to her she is always glowing. Pratima tells him to stop buttering me up and go and get Suhani. My jaan tells her, what is the point of calling her, he wont fly a kite. He will sit on the side or hide behind your pallu. Yuvraj tells him are you done. Soumya tells my jaan she doesnt see the purpose of this game. you tie a paper to a piece of string and fly it in the air. What is the fun in this. its so down market. She tells DaRagMen that Suhani loves to fly kites. No one behaviors like an animal the way she does. (what a witch. ughhh feel like grabbing her and throwing her off the roof so a huge truck could come and flatten her and then ill make a kite out of her and fly it. Bari aayi Yuvraj and Pratima look upset.

My Jaan tells Anuj lets stop for now. Anuj says you get tired to easy, you keep cutting my kite and consider yourself a hero. My jaan says i am a hero. (right you are, mera hero). Soumya offers Yuvraj lime juice since its hot. He tells her no he is ok and if i need anything i will ask Ramesh, you dont need to worry. Yuvraj walks away leaving her upset. Sharad comes and asks my jaan, what is this, you got scared so you like the ring. My jaan tells Sharad, you were the one who ran scared. I am leaving after cleaning up the place. Suhani come and shows the kite she made with Amitabh pic on it and says the beginning of the line dialouge. Suhani confront my jaan. My jaan tells her think about it, friendship isnt going to work here. Suhani tells him who want to do friendship. Everyone laugh. Anuj comes and says if that is the case come into the rings. Sharad says so you will also play now. Anuj says i lost to jaan. I could beat Suhani. Menka comes and tells him, if you win along with a kiss you will gets hug. Everyone laughs. Suhani and my jaan look at each other and walk away. Dadi complains there is a limit to besharmi. my jaan asks rags to hold the roll of wire (sorry dont know what you call it. oye Jaan you could have told me i would have strapped on a kite and flew to you.). Rags says she just got a manicure. Ramesh says he will hold it. Menka says she will holds Anuj since i am his wife. Anuj asks Sharad to hold it. Suhani calls Yuvraj and asks him to hold her. Yuvraj tells her no. She tells him he wont get tired. He tells her it wont happen. She gets sad. Pratima asks him to hold it. He says Ma. Soumya gets upset and come to sit next to Yuvraj. Yuvraj gets up and says fine since you ask me to. Suhani thanks Yuvraj and asks him to watch the wire, it can cut you. Yuvraj asks her to watch out for my jaan, he is a bomb. Suhani tell him not to worry. Everyone begins to fly their kite. Suhani cuts Anuj kite and everyone teases him. Sharad says I cant even beat Suhani, she full force. Yuvraj asks Suhani to show my jaan up. Suhani tells him your wish is my command. Sharad come to Soumya and tells her to start packing her bags. Dadi sees them and walks over to them. Dadi asks him what did he says. Sharad says he meant to pack your winter clothes, he looks over to Yuvraj and Suhani, he continues the season is changing, the cold weather is leaving and the warm weather is coming, that is all. Soumya says his mouth has gotten worse. Dadi says to forget him, if you sit hand in hand, you will never be able to cut her kite. Soumya says what can i do, i dont know how to fly a kite. Dadi says stupid, you dont need to cut a kite with a kite, cut the wire and the kite will come flying down. Both look at the reel of wire. Soumya stands up and looks at Yuvraj and Suhani, upset.

PRE-CAP: The reel of wire lays on the table while both Yuvraj and Suhani are flying the kite. Soumya grabs the wire attempting to break it.

Edited by naam-ada-likhna - 10 years ago

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