OS for Yuvani Continues with Chapter 6 updated...

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So here is the next chapter...
Thanks for your response friends...

CHAPTER 3

Scene 1 :- Yuvani Room

Yuvaraj holding Suhaani's hand and not letting her go...

Pratima knocks the door... Yuvaraj goes to open it asking Suhaani to sit quietly...

Pratima ask Suhaani about her health... Suhaani says "Im fyn Ma... But I need to go ma!!!"
Pratima ask "Where Suhaani???"

But Suhaani doesn't answer it... Yuvaraj says "NO!!! U can't go!!!!"
She says "Ma!!I need to..."

Yuvaraj Says "Ma!! She should not go anywhere.. Thats it!!!!" and leaves...


Scene 2 :- Dinning Table

Everyone is gathered for Breakfast... Sowmya is waiting for Yuvaraj...

Yuvaraj comes and searches for Suhaani... Sowmya serves him with smiling face...
But he leaves to his room...

After sometime he comes holding Suhaani's hand... He pulls her towards dinning table and makes her to sit NEAR HIM...

He holds her hand and serves food to her... But she doesn't eat... She sits idle...
Yuvaraj gets angry...
So... YUVARAJ FEEDS SUHAANI...

Everyone looks stunned seeing this including Suhaani... Yuvaraj makes Suhaani to have her breakfast and starts to have his breakfast...

Suhaani leaves the place quite shocked... Sowmya's face turns red... Pratima and Sharad are feeling very happy...


Scene 3 :- Yuvani Room

Suhaani is sitting in her bed and thinking...

She remembers Yuvaraj holding her hand and saying not to leave home...
Then she remember Yuvaraj saying "He didnt love Sowmya now and she is her past and crying"... (Wow!!! Suhaani heard it... :) )
She remeber Yuvaraj serving food and feeding her...

And she SMILES...

Suhani says "Yuvaraj I always Believe You... I wont go leaving you..."

She says "I know that u dont love Sowmya... You started to care for ur wife... Really im so happy... But i wont talk with you... Becos this is the punishment for ur mistake... :) "

Yuvaraj enters and Suhaani hides her smile... Yuvaraj gives tablet to Suhaani... She doesnt talk with him but she haves the tablets..

Yuvaraj leaves room with a sad face... He really missses Suhaani's talk a lot... And so do Suhaani...

They both remember about the good tyms spend together...


Scene 4 :- Dadi's Room

Dadi, Rags , Menaka and Sowmya discuss about Yuvaraj being so caring with Suhaani...

Sowmya says "I can't able to see Yuvaraj caring Suhaani..."

Menaka says "Jiji... Hope so Yuvaraj started to like Suhaani..."

Everyone gives her a cold face

Sowmya says "NO!!!! I wont let this happen...They cant be together..."


Scene 5 :- In Garden

Yuvaraj notices Suhaani alone in the garden and its too cold...

He walks to her and finds tears in Suhaani's eye...

Suhaani is thinking about her lovely moments with Yuvaraj and cries...

But Yuvaraj thinks that she is crying as everyone betrayed her including him... He wipes his tears and sits by her side..

Suhaani is feeling cold so he removes is jacket and places it in Suhaani's shoulder...

Suhaani says "Its okay... Im fyn... No need"

But Yuvaraj insist her to wear it...

They both are sitting simply not talking with eachother...

They both looks at the moon and thinks "We want our life back!!!!!!"

Sowmya seeing the both in garden thinks "I won't let both of you to come closer!!!!!!!"


Next update of Chapter 4 will be continued sooonnn... :)


Comment your views friends... Thanks for the responses for my updates... :)
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Parm. thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update. You may want to edit your other post and add this onto it so that all chapters are on the same post! Thanks for the quick update!
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Very nice continue in the same thread deary. Post your next update in post reply option and edit the topic writing new pg nd update number
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So suhani heard his confession and made this whole issue their personal one, where wife is angry on husband and husband is trying gain her forgiveness..
Loving this angle. ⭐️

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So here is the next chapter...
Thanks for your response friends...

CHAPTER 4

Scene 1 :- Sowmya's Room

Sowmya , Rags and Menaka are discussing to separate Yuvaraj and Suhaani forever...

Rags says an idea to Sowmya and Evil smile is found in the face of Sowmya...

Rags says "Sowmya first make sure that Suhaani trust you... Then our plan will be super hit..."

Sowmya says "Ya!!!!! I will ruin their life... Yuvaraj will be mine forever... Bye Suhaani!!!!!!"


Scene 2 :- Suhaani Room

Suhaani is in her own world dreaming about Yuvaraj...

Just then Sowmya enters the room...

Sowmya calls "Suhaani!!!!Suhaani!!! Are you okay???"
Sowmya touches her... Suhaani feels it and turns to her

Sowmya ask "What happened Suhaani?? Any prob???"

Suhaani says "No!!!No!!! Im fyn..."

Sowmya says "Suhaani...Im so sorry... I shouldn't have spoken like that to you... Pardon me... "

Suhaani says "Oh!!!Its okay Sowmo...Do you still love Yuvaraj??"

Sowmya says "Yes Suhaani... I love him a lot... I know that he loves me... But until your here he wont understand my feelings..."

Suhaani says "Your asking me too leave this house Sowmo???"

Sowmya says "Not like that Suhaani... There is no use in loving someone when that person doesnt love you... I hope you understand it..."

Suhaani says "Yes Sowmo!!!!Jus now understood about all the members of my life... Your right Sowmo..."

Jus then Yuvaraj enters the room... Sowmya leaves the room...

Yuvaraj and Suhaani look at eachother... Then Suhaani leaves...

Yuvaraj thinks "What did Sowmya say to Suhaani!!!! I need to find it out..."


Scene 3 :- In Kitchen

Suhaani is busy in kitchen... Yuvaraj comes there...

Yuvaraj says "Suhaani!!! I said to take rest... Why are you working here??? Go to our room and take rest..."

Suhaani doesnt respond... She continues her work...

Yuvaraj says "Im saying this to you Suhaani!!!!! Cant you hear it!!!!!!"

Suhaani looks at Yuvaraj and says "I need to take rest!!!! Wow!!! Great!!!!!! Y so?? After getting well you all need to break my heart again!!!!"
Yuvaraj is stunned hearing those words...

Suhaani says "Yuvaraj!!! U don't love me... So you cant order me... Ma asked me to stay here... So im here...I will leave within a week... Dont worry..."
"After I leave the home You enjoy ur life with the person whom u love... I wont trouble you!!!"
"So stop ordering me!!!I know wat to do???Okay"

Suhaani leaves... Yuvaraj is heartbroken hearing these words from Suhaani... So he leaves the place silently...

These were noticed by Sowmya ,Rags and Menaka... All have a Evil smile in their face...


Scene 4 :- Sowmya Room

Rags says "See Sowmya... Our plan started to work... Suhaani started to hate Yuvaraj"

Sowmya says "Yes bhabhi... Suhaani will hurt Yuvaraj and will leave the house by her own... And Yuvaraj will be mine forever..."

All the three laugh...


Just then Sharad and Suhaani are seen at the back of the door...

They show thumbsup...

Back to scene 1... Suhaani and Sharad notice the plan of Sowmya & Co...


And so Suhaani and Sharad thinks a plan to get rid of Sowmya from Yuvaraj's life and as a result Yuvaraj will confess his love to Suhaani...


To be continued... In Next Chapter...


Next update of Chapter 5 will be continued sooonnn... :)


Comment your views friends... Thanks for the responses for my updates... :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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What a twist! Bro and Sis have hatched a plan to take down the pathetic foursome!

Awesome, I definitely wasn't expecting that!👏
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Edit your 3rd chapter post and change the title that u have added chapter 4. I thought of reading chapter 3 again, since i liked it a lot and got suprised that u have added one more amazing update..
So now sharad and suhani again evil trio and b****. WOW!!!⭐️👏👏

Poor yuvraj. Dont know how he is going to suffer in the hands of this bro-sis pair
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Love Sharad and Suhani...in ur OS I do feel sorry for Yuvraj...but he needs a shock to open up his feelings... hope he gets one soon. Nice update.
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Aww thanks for the awesome update I loved chapter 5
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So here is the next chapter...
Thanks for your response friends...

CHAPTER 5

Scene 1 :- Yuvani Room

Yuvaraj is thinking about Suhaani's harsh words... He is heartbroken...

Yuvaraj says "Suhaani!!!!! How can she speak like that??? Its not possible..."

He says "Suhaani never speak like this.. She wont hurt anyone by words.. But now????"

He thinks about the past where he used to be cold towards Suhaani... Dadi used to hurt her... All these things run in Yuvaraj mind...

He says "Oh no!!!! She must be hurt like this always... But never she shows out... Always a smile in her face... How can she!!!!"

He says "Sorry Suhaani..!!! I know how much your hurt... But i want MY SUHAANI back... Girl with smile always in her face... Sweet person.. Please Suhaani Dont change..."

Saying this he starts to cry... This is all noted by Suhaani... She leaves with sad face...



Scene 2 :- In Garden

Sharad sees Suhaani sitting alone... He goes to her...

Sharad says "Suhaani Bhabhi... What happened?? Did anyone say anything???"

Suhanni says "Bhaiyya!!!! Yuvaraj..."

He says "Guru... What happened?? Did Guru say anything to you???"

She says "No Bhaiyya... He didnt... He is feeling a lot Bhaiyya... I cant see Yuvaraj like that Bhaiyya!!!!"

He says "I too cant see him like that... But we have to do it Bhabbhi.. For the sake of Guru's life..."

She says "But Bhaiyya... I cant hurt him anymore... I cant do it... How can i hurt him bhaiyya???? He is my life... I cant anymore Bhaiyya..."

He says "Bhabbi.. Try to understand the situation... Leave it Bhabbi Guru will be fine..."

They both leave the place



Scene 3 :- Dadi Room

Dadi plans about Engagement of Sowmya and Yuvaraj...

Sowmya is feeling very very happy... Rags and Menaka says So atlast We Won...

Dadi takes the divorce papers of Suhaani and Yuvaraj and says Today is the last day for that girl in this Birla house...

She says "From today your going to be his wife..."

Sowmya hugs Dadi and says "I was waiting for this day in my life Dadi.. Thank you so much..."

So the four leaves to hall to create a big scene...



Scene 4 :- In hall


Dadi calls out "Hey Ladki... Where are you???"

Everyone gather... Suhaani and Yuvaraj also comes there...

Dadi says "Hey ladki... So your ready right???"

Suhaani looks puzzled... She says "What Dadi... I dont understand..."

Dadi says "You said right... You want to leave Birla house... So r u ready??? "

Suhaani is shocked... So does Yuvaraj , Pratima and Sharad...

Suhaani says "YYYeeesss Daaadddiii..."

Dadi calls Ramesh and says "bring her luggage..."

Yuvaraj doesnt know what to do... Sharad and Suhaani see him but are disappointed as he still didnt open his mouth...

Suhaani picks her bag with teary eye...

Dadi says "Hey ladki... Wait... Before going sign these papers..."

Suhaani ask "Whats that Dadi???" and she replies "Divorce papers"

Suhaani , yuvaraj , Pratima and Sharad are shocked... Pratima says "Maajiii.." Dadi stops her...

Dadi says "Hey ladki.. sign these papers..." Suhaani walks slowly towards it thinking Yuvaraj please speak up... Dont let me go...

She opens the pen cap and bends to sign... She hears a voice saying "Wait!!!"

Its Sowmya... All see her...

Sowmya says "Before signing these papers you have to do something..." Suhaani ask "What Sowmo??"

Sowmya says "First remove your Engagement ring..."

This shocks everyone... The trio smirks...

Suhaani slowly removes it... Tears fall from her eyes... She thinks "Yuvaraj!!!! Please speak up!!!!" Yuvaraj is shocked to see Suhaani removing it...

Suhaani places the ring in the table... And then Sowmya says "Wait Suhaaani.. There is another thing also!!" Suhaani ask "Whats that??"

Sowmya says "Your MANGALSUTRA..."

Suhaani is taken aback... All are dumbstruck hearing Sowya... Suhaani holds her mangalsutra tight... She nodds NOOO...

Somya says "Suhaani!!! You have remove it... Just throw away Yuvarajj.. He is not yours... He is mine... "
She says "You are not fit to be in this house anymore... Its going to be mine... Yuvaraj is mine... Look at you!! You bahu of birla house... Nonsense!!!"
She says "You cant be.. None loves a girl like you...Jus go away from this house and from Yuvaraj life... Get Lost!!!"

Yuvaraj is getting angry hearing these words... Suhaani is dumbstruck... She is crying hard to hear these words from her Best friend...

Sowmya continues with her talking ill about Suhaani...

Unable to hear it Yuvaraj shouts "Shut Up!!!! Shut up Sowmya... "


To be continued... In Next Chapter...


Next update of Chapter 6 will be continued sooonnn... :)


Comment your views friends... Thanks for the responses for my updates... :)

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