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Posted: 16 years ago

Wow '''.wow 'di.👏👏👏

What a nock- jhok update.😃Well'.shaadi ka mahal ho to aisa

Just then Ajay noticed that Boxer and Shotgun had neared him' He immediately tried jumping on to the bed'. But they were fast enough and caught him, pinning him down on the bed'.

Boxer: Ab aaya' (Making Ajay sit back) Pakad me' Maamu'. Fuss mat kar yaar!

Saying he and Shotgun pulled him down to the floor making him sit on the small raised platform'.

Oh god.Ajay ki tauntrams🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Shotgun: (Waving his hand, one hand on a straining Ajay's shoulder) Chalo' Chalo sab line me khade ho jao' Ek baar ke liye ek rupaya!

Hay'..hay.ye kya. Gun uncle.🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Ajay opened his eyes and stunned looked around'. Phew' Everyone were still taking pastes, in one hand.... It was a dream'. Then his eyes fell on the bowl and he saw that the actual nightmare was to begin bechara Ajay

Mrs.Desai: (To Vishal and the other guys) Tum log? Aur achche bachche?!?! Bachche becharon ko isme kyun kheenchte ho! Unki beizzati kar di'.

And finally Girls score ' Three"

Yahoo'..yupiee'. girls go ahead.

Vishal: Chori chupke sangeet dekhna' Hum ladke waalon ka janam sidd adhikar hai aur ise koi nahi cheen sakta!

Baapre😲''' Janam sidd adhikar!!!!!🤪

And'. Elders are now sola saal ka jawaan😍'.. wah wah.

The total part is full of musty'.. lot of things which made me laugh.

Oh'God' di specially' Ajay's haldi part.

Ab bas soch raha hoon,😍 sangeet me when our vishal the great with SS male team will caught by girls, what punishment they will get???❓

So, di. Wanted to see how much I am excited'''.

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Edited by nirmola - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Tooo goood...............ajay waale part mein to mazaaa aa gayaa.....itne dino baad bechare ne koi sharaarat ki hai.....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: AJ_ss

hey di,

sorry i haven't been around for a while, i've had exams and stuff. Ajay and Neha ki shaadi is going totally mast, i love it! The scene with Neha and her mom was really touching, I don't know how you can write so nicely. Aur phir Sandy aur Vishal and their fights are so cute and funny....Vishal the Great is going to lose this battle.😃 And of course Aryan and Deepika are as sweet as always😳
Keep it up! I can't wait to see the sangeet, I know it'll be spectacular.

Thank you so much.... And no worries about late reply... I understand 😳
Let's see who loses and who wins 😉

Originally posted by: sam78

it was awesome.

i loved it.
the mehdi ceremony was great and the dresses was just beautiful.
love all parts with sandy and vishal.
dipika and aryan so sweet and cute.
also love the older couples as well.
hope in sangeet men dresse up as women that would be funny.
sorry for late comment. college started on 20th tuesday so little busy.
thanks for the update.
⭐️

Ji Sam... Missed yaa..... And thanks for commenting 😳
Ha now that's a great idea.... Let's see if I can incorporate it in the FF....

Originally posted by: nirmola


Wow '''.wow 'di.👏👏👏

What a nock- jhok update.😃Well'.shaadi ka mahal ho to aisa

Just then Ajay noticed that Boxer and Shotgun had neared him' He immediately tried jumping on to the bed'. But they were fast enough and caught him, pinning him down on the bed'.

Boxer: Ab aaya' (Making Ajay sit back) Pakad me' Maamu'. Fuss mat kar yaar!

Saying he and Shotgun pulled him down to the floor making him sit on the small raised platform'.

Oh god.Ajay ki tauntrams🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Shotgun: (Waving his hand, one hand on a straining Ajay's shoulder) Chalo' Chalo sab line me khade ho jao' Ek baar ke liye ek rupaya!

Hay'..hay.ye kya. Gun uncle.🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Ajay opened his eyes and stunned looked around'. Phew' Everyone were still taking pastes, in one hand.... It was a dream'. Then his eyes fell on the bowl and he saw that the actual nightmare was to begin bechara Ajay

Mrs.Desai: (To Vishal and the other guys) Tum log? Aur achche bachche?!?! Bachche becharon ko isme kyun kheenchte ho! Unki beizzati kar di'.

And finally Girls score ' Three"

Yahoo'..yupiee'. girls go ahead.

Vishal: Chori chupke sangeet dekhna' Hum ladke waalon ka janam sidd adhikar hai aur ise koi nahi cheen sakta!

Baapre😲''' Janam sidd adhikar!!!!!🤪

And'. Elders are now sola saal ka jawaan😍'.. wah wah.

The total part is full of musty'.. lot of things which made me laugh.

Oh'God' di specially' Ajay's haldi part.

Ab bas soch raha hoon,😍 sangeet me when our vishal the great with SS male team will caught by girls, what punishment they will get???❓

So, di. Wanted to see how much I am excited'''.

🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

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Vove that was a detailed comments... Thank u so much 😛
😆 It's marriage time... So everyone forget their worries and seek only happy moments.... Even elders... So these tiny moments between them too 😳

Originally posted by: aashmi

Tooo goood...............ajay waale part mein to mazaaa aa gayaa.....itne dino baad bechare ne koi sharaarat ki hai.....

Thank you for enjoying aashmi.... I have to especially please you... Marriage of your fav jodi naa 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
ya its my fav jodi......their nok-jhok peps up my mood.....mast hai ajay-neha....

Waise who said u dont know much about north indian shaadis?????????Wow u give such meticulous details about the various rasams..........
But if u want any help we'll be glad to tell u abt sum traditions....sum of them are really heart-warming.....
Btw are u a south indian???

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: aashmi

ya its my fav jodi......their nok-jhok peps up my mood.....mast hai ajay-neha....

Waise who said u dont know much about north indian shaadis?????????Wow u give such meticulous details about the various rasams..........
But if u want any help we'll be glad to tell u abt sum traditions....sum of them are really heart-warming.....
Btw are u a south indian???

Thank you so much.... Well then I think a detailed marriage review would be helpful 😊
Yes I am from Chennai... 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Krithu

it was just so fun reading the whole epi........

oh my! i love it

firstly my soon to be aunty make uncle angry...............his plan got choopat to have a nazar on girls.......Girls are Sharp....three cheers!

then Mummye get all red while aunty teased him about Sweetu....

Blush Blush....marjawan

and daddy heard that all and uncle teased him.............how clute

Missing Sri though........she was really a small shiny star

Then Chachu being in Haldi..............poor boy..............Chachi predictied right and Mamu and Shotgun get a hold on him

All was fun................now boys out and mission to look in is about to start

its pure fun imagining ur imagination....

Great work

cont soon

luv ya

lolz
ana

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_SK

Krithu

it was just so fun reading the whole epi........

oh my! i love it

firstly my soon to be aunty make uncle angry...............his plan got choopat to have a nazar on girls.......Girls are Sharp....three cheers!

Ye Koun?!?! Achcha.... i was confused first..... Sandhya hai 😃 I like your way of indicating characters here... Our SS family 👏

then Mummye get all red while aunty teased him about Sweetu....

Kaise naa sharmaye Ana.... Mummy hain ki aisi!

Blush Blush....marjawan

and daddy heard that all and uncle teased him.............how clute

Daddy ne abhi full suna nahi hai naa 😳

Missing Sri though........she was really a small shiny star

Yeah.... Even I miss her.... Lekin uske liye bhi ek din aayega.... Jab vo ek shaadi me dhoom machayegi! 😉

Then Chachu being in Haldi..............poor boy..............Chachi predictied right and Mamu and Shotgun get a hold on him

If even now Chaachi didn't understand Chaachu.... Then 100! percent lovee would not be right 😊

All was fun................now boys out and mission to look in is about to start

its pure fun imagining ur imagination....
Thank you so much.... I just hope I am able to fulfill your imaginations to like it 😊
Great work

cont soon

luv ya

lolz
ana

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Posted: 16 years ago

After lunch everyone took rest to get rejuvenated for the evening celebration…. And marriage lunch needless to say was sumptuous containing some sweet or the other in every meal! So definitely a nap was required! 🥱

Four O' Clock…

Sandhya and her friends came out of their rooms with the apprehension that they would have to shoo away the boys from down…. But when they came down…. 😲 No one was in sight…. A strange silence hung around the hall! 😈

Rina: (Surprised) Sandhya! Such me ye ladke chale gaye?!?! 🤔

Surprised herself Sandhya shook her head and went out to the window to look out… All the guys and the elders also were lazing out in the lawn listening to music from a music player, playing cards, some strolling…..

None even glanced once towards the house! 😕

Nithu: (Peeping behind Sandhya) Don't tell me guys have really changed!

Sandhya: (Suspicious😈) Pata nahi yaar… Kuch to gadbad hai… Sharp four o'clock they left…

Meetha: Lekin ab fun kahan raha? Sangeet ka ek mazaa ye bhi hai, ki ladkiyaan ladkon ko bahar jaane ke liye force karein….. Unhe ghar se bhagayein…. Phir bhi vo chori chuppe aake humare dance dekhein… (Upset😒) Lekin ye sab to bahut hi shareef nikale! 😆

Just then Mrs.Desai called out to them….

Mrs.Desai: Sandhya! Tum log yahan kya kar rahe ho? Sangeet ki taiyaari karo… Tumne kaha kuch lagana hai… Are… Der ho jayegi!

Sandhya and her friends took one last suspicious look outside and closing the window came to Mrs.Desai….

Sandhya: Aunty! Arrangements to hum kar denge… Lekin ye ladke sab such me achche bachchon ki tarah bahar kaise chale gaye!?!?!

Before Mrs.Desai could decipher the surprise herself……

Mrs.Malhotra: (From above the stairs) Mera beta itna bura bhi nahi hai Sandhya! 😳

Sandhya looked up at her smiling and said….

Sandhya: Aapka beta aur shareef?!? Aathva ajuba hoga aunty! 😃

The girls laughed and started to get the hall ready for the sangeet ceremony still suspicious about the guys not checking out the home…

Sandhya still had her doubts… Definitely Vishal was not the type to leave things…. Such interesting things just as such… Hmm… Something in their minds… She could sense! 😈

Inside the house now only ladies were there… The only men present were the helpers who were just helping them set the various props around the hall… 😊

The couch was set on the right side of the hall for Neha to sit and carpets were spread down for the other ladies….. Near the couch the music player was set and Purvi was checking the songs they were to play!

Close to five O'clock…..

Sandhya was having a final check of props on the left side of the stair…. Deciding that everything was fine she turned to leave the place when she heard few whispering noises from outside….. She peeped in from the corner window and smiled seeing the scene out…. 😃

The guys Vishal, Ajay, Boxer, Zubin and Shotgun were peeping in through the window at the front hid partially by the curtains like burglars on the verge of a big haul….

Happy that Diwali indeed had come really soon immediately ran up to get the lighter who would light these crackers! 😉

Outside…

Vishal: Sss… Tum dono push karna band karoge! (Looking back at Boxer and Zubin😳)

Boxer: (Whispering back) Phir tum jaldi jao naa…. Hume ladkiyon ke aane se pehle is jagah ko dekh lena chahiye… Tabhi sangeet ke liye hum full prepared aa sakte hain!

Vishal who was leading the group stopped suddenly as with sudden fluid motion the curtain on the window was moved aside and his partial of the hall was fullly blocked by someone…. A pair of ladies hands on her hips…. 😉

From behind him he heard chorus of voices who hadn't looked in front of them, asking the reason for the sudden movement… Slowly they peeped out from behind Vishal and grinning sheepishly straightened….. 😵

Vishal slowly raised his head and saw his mother glaring down at him….. He straightened and found the whole ladies gang there glaring at them… Mrs.Malhotra, Mrs.Agarwal, Mrs.Desai, Mrs.Chatterje…😉

The others Dipika, Purvi, Cynthia, Haseena were all standing behind them, arms folded with a strange smile trying their level best not to laugh out….🤪

They were surrounded!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HELPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!! 😆

Sandhya was standing beside Mrs. Malhotra hands on her shoulders…..

Sandhya: Kya kaha aunty ji aapne? Ki aapka beta aisa nahi hai… Bahut shareef hai…. Gentleman… (Waving her hand up and down at him) Ye gentlemanliness hai?!!? Phir gentleman ko kya kahenge? Leader of the group to khud sahib zaade hain! 😆

Mrs.Malhotra: (Sternly😳) Meri naak katva di Vishal… Kya kya kaha tha maine aur tum?!? Kya ho raha hai yahan?

Vishal: (Glaring at Sandhya and trying to cover up😡) Nai to maa… Kuch bhi to nahi… Ise to choti baat ko badha chadane ki aadat hai naa? Hum to bas ye… Ye… (Seeing the decorations beside the window) Haan… Ye decorations hai naa… Ise dekhne aaye the… Ki sab theek hai ki nahi…. Laga tha ki kuch gir gaya…. Hai naa? ❓

He asked looking at the group behind him…. The others also nodding eagerly suddenly became interested in the lights and started fiddling with it as if to check it…

Just then there was a loud OUCH!

Vishal and the group turned around and found Ajay wringing his hand…. They looked around and saw that Cynthia had smacked his hand….😃

Cynthia: Dulhe raja ye sab decors theek hain… Aapke haath naa pade tab tak! Aap bas apna khayal rakhiye! Kaafi nahi hai parson apne naak ko kheenchvaake?! Aur kaheen bhi kheench va dein!?! 😉

Saying there was a chorus of laughter as Mrs.Agarwal said…

Mrs.Agarwal: Tum log apni jasoosi band karoge taake hum rasam nibha sakein?

Zubin: Lekin aunty…. Hum to sirf tehel rahe the…. 😕

Purvi: Ah ha ha ha ha ha… Bade aaye tehelne waale… Tehelna hai to bahar itnaaaaa (Indicating around the garden) bada garden hai… Wahan jayiye…. Ghar ke taraf bhi aana mana hai naa! 😳

Zubin: (Going over to her) Purvi… Such me hum… 😳

Purvi: (Stopping him😡 😉) Waheen rahiye…. Paas mat aayiye…. Aaj koi bhi patni apne pati ki baat nahi manegi! Naa help karegi!

Smiles formed on everyone'e face hearing this and the pairs looked at each other… ☺️

Except Dipika who looked at Vishal and Sandhya glare at each other and smiled… Sandhya very happy that she caught Vishal red handed! 😛

Boxer: Are ye kya baat hui? Hume abhi se kyun ban kiya jaa raha hai? Rasam me to abhi waqt hai naa?

Haseena: (From behind him) Haan… Lekin hume aap Special Squad waalon ke special skills ke baare me pata hai…. Aake kaheen chupne ki jagah, dekhne ki jagah sab dhoondh lenge… Isliye to aaye the ab bhi! Kyun? ❓

Mrs.Malhotra: (Mock stern😳) Abbas…. Kuch to sharam karo… Ek bachche ke pita banane jaa rahe ho… Aur in (Hitting Vishal on his head😵) badmashon ke saath ghoom rahe ho!

Sandhya: (Hastily) Ek nahi ek nahi… Do do!!!!! 😛

Everyone again chuckled hearing this watching Boxer's embarrassed state…. 😆

Boxer tried to justify his position but just glanced at Haseena who blushed a little at the comment…. Seeing her he smiled and winked and she shook her head indicating she hadn't mistaken him at all… All was in the game! And in marriage definitely 👍🏼

Mrs.Chatterje: Are seekho… Apne Chief se kuch to seekho… Kitni responsibility se kaam kar raha hai… Aur tum log?!?! ❓

At this everyone turned towards the tent in the garden following Mrs.Chatterje's eyes and saw Aryan help the people there to arrange the chairs in front of the marriage mandap…. 😊

Hearing the word 'Chief' Dipika came forward from behind Purvi and seeing Aryan work smiled…. He did take his words seriously…. He was truly working like a brother would for his sister's marriage….. 😳

Just then he glanced up casually… He looked at everyone surprised at the crowd gathered outside the hall and his eyes hovered on Dipika… She smiled a little giving a rare radiance around…. Needless to say the group had glanced at her when Aryan had looked up and they smiled seeing them look at each other…. 😳

There was a chorus of "Oie hoie" making Dipika come out of her reverie and she saw that everyone had watched what had happened… She blushed and trying to cover it up said…. ☺️

Dipika: (Glancing once at Aryan) Ab in sab ko koi bhagao…. (Glancing at the ladies inside) Sangeet ke liye der ho rahi hai!

Mrs.Desai: (Coming to the front and waving them off) Ab jao…. Jao sab…. Shaam ke garba se pehle andar aaye ya jhaanke… To dekh lena! (To the girls) Chalo ladkiyaan! Andar chalke sangeet ke liye taiyaar ho jao!

Saying this all the Mrs. left shutting the window strong and hard…..

Sandhya joined the girls group standing outside at the lawn looking pitifully at the boys….

Sandhya: Tch…. Tch… Tch…. Beeeeeeeechaaaaaaare! Kitni baar koshish karoge? Lekin haar hi paoge…. Baazi humari hi humari…. (With mock stern) Garba se pehle andar aana mana hai! Ale le le le!

Saying they laughed and went off back inside the house to get her prepared for the celebration…. 😆

The guys looked at each other dejected......
Shotgun: Chalo yaar.... Lagta hai aaj humari kismat phooti hi hai.... Ek raasta tha neeche dekhne ka aur vo bhi ab band!
Zubin: (Walking back to the front) Haan.... Aur hum upar bhi nahi chad sakte.... Kyunki upar hi sabhi preparations ho rahe hain aur koi na koi wahan hoga! 😔
The guys walked to the lawn glaring at the main door through which the girls had just gone in… 😡
Vishal glanced at the door and saw Sandhya closing the door.... Smiling with a naughtiness in her eyes she showed thumbs down to Vishal who acted like hitting her… And laughing Sandhya went back inside the house! 😉
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The guys trying to scheme some other plan to get in the house were lying down in the lawn…. 😆

After a while the main door of the house opened and Sandhya along with Purvi walked to the lawn where the guys were seated with sullen faces…. Seeing them come there the guys became surprised….🤔

Thinking of getting back Vishal immediately went over to her and stopped her even before she could step on to the lawn…. Smiling the other guys also followed…😃

Vishal: Ye ab humara area hai… Isme ladkiyaan allowed nahi hain!😳

Sandhya: Hmpf! Jaise hume koi shouk hai yahan aane ko…. Lekin kya karein? Zaroorat hume hai… (After a pause) Hume aap se kuch help chahiye!

Shotgun: (Surprised😲) Kya baat hai? Kuaan pyaase ke paas aaya hai!😉

Boxer: Hum aur help?!?! Ye koi logic theek nahi ho raha hai!😈

Purvi: 😒 Aapko kab kya kehena hai ye pata hi nahi…. Andar sangeet ke liye der ho rahi hai…. Please help kijiye naa!

The guys just stood there not saying anything smiling because it was now their chance to get back at them! Vishal glared at Sandhya who looked back at him with the same force in her eyes!😳

Shotgun: Ek souda..... Help karenge to milega kya?

Ajay: Haan mufat me help karne ki aadat nahi hai hume! 😉 Are main dulha hoon mujhe hi khud bhaga diya!

Sandhya: (With an upset face😒) Dekhiye hume bas ek bike chahiye!

The guys got stunned and looked at her as if she had gone mad!

Vishal: Bike?!!? Aur (Indicating the house) sangeet ke liye? Andar chalane waale ho! (Laughing😆)

Sandhya: (Sternly😡) Hmm… Circus me pinjade ke andar motor cycle chalate hain naa, us tarah ghar ke andar hum deewaron par chalane waale hain! Bas?!?!

Zubin: Lijiye! Yahan aake khud bhadak rahe hain.... Help aapko humse chahiye, humko aapse nahi… Isliye thodi…

Zubin's voice faltered when he saw Purvi glare at him… The others looked at him wondering why suddenly he had stopped speaking…. Seeing that this one was a joru ka gulaam they groaned shaking their heads! 😉

And needless to say for the remaining conversation Zubin didn't open his mouth 😃

Vishal: Hmm…. 🤔 Bike milegi…. Lekin pehle…. Pleease bolo…. Muh se ye shabd aasaani se nahi nikalti... Kyun? (Grinning😃)

Sandhya was about to retort back when Purvi caught her hand and shook her head insisting she say it, because they were getting late…..

Sandhya: Achcha… (With great difficulty) Pleasssssseeeee! Ek bike milega?

Vishal: (Surprised😛) Hmm… So jo hum kahenge vo aap karoge? Phir to… Ek aur shart bhi hai! Hum sab ko bhi sangeet me aana hai!

Just then somewhere a mobile beeped indicating a message had been received…. 😉

Sandhya: (Hands on her hips) Hunh! Ek aur shart!?!? Sangeet me aane ke liye?!?!? (Glaring at Purvi) Aap logon ko pehle hi iska intezaam kiya hota.... To in.... (Waving her hands at the guys) In sab se muh nahi lagna padta.... Ek poocho, to sou shart laga rahe hain..... 😡 Hmpf...... Sir pe chad jaate hain!

Vishal: (Interrupting) Hello hello... Zaraa sambhaalke.... Bike hume nahi aapko chahiye.... Aur sangeet ke liye der nahi ho rahi?

Sandhya glared at him and was about start back at him.... Before she could continue anything Aryan came to the group and said…

Aryan: Sandhya! Tum andar jao…. Main bike ka intezaam karta hoon!

Sandhya and Purvi looked at him surprised wondering how suddenly had had come in offering help? Of course Aryan was sweet they knew.... He was always ready to help!

The other guys looked at him protesting…. 😒

Vishal: Aru! Tu isme mat pad…. 😳

Aryan: Vishal! Ab tang karna bas bhi karo… Der ho rahi hai inko… Waise bhi jitna der ye karenge utna der hume bhi hoga andar jaane me… (To Sandhya) Bike kahan laana hai?

Sandhya: (Smiling at Vishal) Hall me…. I'll be waiting!

Saying she twisted her mouth at Vishal and went off with Purvi… The other guys looked dismayed at Aryan who went off to arrange for a bike….

What do you do when you have traitor amongst yourselves!!?!?? 😉
And of course the guys never argues with Aryan! Never in their life.... Not because they were scared of him.... But because they loved him so much ⭐️

Going back to their place Vishal noticed Aryan glance towards the house and then he saw her….

Dipika!!! She was standing at the entrance mobile in hand, a small smile visible on her face… So the beep was all about this!!! Great! Now he listening to her and together they were troubling him… Fine! At least he listens to her…. And she orders him…. So somewhere the magic was done! 😳😳

Smiling he decided forgive Aryan in this because his friend was the real culprit and not his frenemy! 😉

Back in their places on the mat......

Shotgun: Ab kya karenge? 😕

Ajay: (Pacing looking towards the house) Humari galti thi ki hum der se aaye… Pehle aate… To ghar dekhne ke bahane upar ki bhi chaan been kar dete!

Boxer: We could have hid up somewhere…. Ab to shaam ke garbe tak andar nahi jaa sakte…

Zubin: Lekin tab tak to unki sangeet khatam ho jayegi naa!

Vishal: Haan yaar… Not fair…. Vo bahar aa sakte hain, hum andar nahi….😒

He looked towards the house and saw that Aryan had arranged the bike and was now wheeling it inside the house!

Boxer: (Watching the scene and shaking his head) Aur use kya hua? Ladkiyon ki help kar raha hai.... Achcha ki vo kisi ko problem me nahi dekh sakta.... Lekin isme bina pade reh sakta hai naa!
Vishal thought "If only he knew....... Joru ke ghulami ka practice kar raha tha Aru!" 😆

Just then from behind them a voice said….

Mr.Malhotra: Kya ho raha hai yahan? 😊

The guys turned around with crest fallen faces….

Mr.Agarwal: (Smiling) Lagta hai andar jaane ki koshish ki unhone…. Lekin naa kamiyaab ho gaye!

Vishal: (Going over to them) Uncle…. Ye sab ladkiyaan aisi hoti hi kyun hain!? Hum silent spectators hi rahenge naa…. Hum se hi chuppa chuppi!

Mr.Iqbal: (Who had come in the afternoon said grinning) Are agar hum silent spectators rehete to hume bhagate hi kyun?!!?😃

Mr.Malhotra: Are mere sher… (Putting an arm around his shoulders) Ek darwaaza band hua hai… Doosri khidki khul jayegi!

He said indicating few servants who were coming towards them with drinks on a plate… Vishal turned to his father smiling knowingly and hugged him…. 🤗

Vishal: Oh dad! You are a genius… Thank you!

Saying Vishal went towards the mandap where few people were arranging pots by the fire place…. Hearing the father son conversation the others understood what suggestion Mr.Malhotra had given…. But now didn't understand why he was going to the mandap! 🤔

They followed him nevertheless…

Vishal stood at the mandap entrance hands on his hips glaring at Aryan who was talking something to one of the helper….

Vishal: Oie Aru!

Surprised Aryan turned around and saw the whole guy gang at the entrance….😕

Vishal stomped over to him and asked….

Vishal: What do you think you are doing?❓

Aryan: (Confused😔) What?!?! Maine kya kiya hai?

Vishal: Kaam! Kaam kyun kar rahe ho? Pehle hi kehena chahata tha..... Ye sab dekhne ke liye servants, helpers hain naa!

Hearing this the other guys smiled… Of course…. Because of him they had got bad name! That's not fair!

Boxer: Haan Aryan.... Tumhari wajah se humari naak kat gayi.... Kehte hain ki kaam hi nahi kar rahe... SIrf jasoosi kar rahe hain!

Aryan understood what he was indicating…. Seeing the boys and the girls near the window he had understood they had tried to sneak in and had got caught… But what was this to do with him?!!?

Aryan: Tum log agar pakad gaye ladkiyon se, to main kya karoon? Isme kyun beech me kaam ka bahana bana rahe ho? Kaam karne ke liye sabhi hain… Lekin un par nazar rakhna hai naa kisi ko? Waise bhi shopping ke liye vo thode jaa sakte hain….

Vishal: Uske liye vo event manager hai naa? 😳 Tu jo bhi kahe… Humara badnaam hua naa…. Ab tu chal humare saath!

Saying he grabbed his hand…. He indicated to Boxer and Shotgun who grabbed his other hand and pushed him from behind…

Aryan: Lekin mujhe kahan leke jaa rahe ho?!?

Amidst protests from him he was taken forcibly to few helpers working outside the mandap checking the strings of the tent…. Seeing all of them come in they stopped and looked up surprised….

Servant 1: Sir kuch kaam tha? ❓

Vishal: Haan…. Ye Aryan sab poochenge!

Saying he looked at Aryan who looked at him puzzled as to what he was wanting him to ask….

Ajay: (From behind) Aryan saab pooch rahe hain ki andar koun kaam karta hai?

Servant 1: Andar ka kaam maine hi kiya tha…. Koi problem hai sir?

Vishal: Koi problem nahi hai…. (Pulling him towards him) Humare… Matlab… (Looking at a bewildered Aryan😲) Aryan saab ko kuch information chahiye….

Aryan: (Hissed) Mera naam lena band karoge!

But the others just ignored him and made stand there forcibly….

Servant 1: (Glancing at Aryan and at Vishal) Ji sir… Poochiye….

Boxer: (Coming to the front) Aryan saab janana chahate hain ki andar kya preparations chal rahi hain? Sangeet me kya karne waale hain?

At this the servant looked at them surprised and then slowly smiled….

Zubin: Hans kyun rahe ho? Seedhe seedhe jawaab do…

Servant 1: Sir… (Grinning at his other friends around him😃) Andar un sab ko pata tha ki aap aisa kuch poochenge… Isliye hume pehle se hi mana kar diya hai! Hum nahi batayenge…. 😉

The guys looked at each stunned at the girl's sharp mind…. But Vishal too had decided not to leave any tables unturned….

Vishal: Theek hai naa… Unhone kaha to aapne maan liya…. Lekin hum… (Saying he dragged two hundred rupees out of a stunned Aryan's kurta pocket😵) thode hi pooch rahe hain…. (Waving the notes) Ye pooch rahe hain! Ab.…😉

The servant looked at the notes and at his friends who eagerly nodded and he said…

Servant 1: Unhone to aap se kehene se mana kiya tha… (Grabbing the notes) Inse (Indicating the money) batana mana nahi kiya tha!

Vishal and the others smiled as Aryan rolled his eyes shaking his head….

Vishal: Ab humare sab sawaal ka sahi sahi jawaab dena!

Zubin: Kya kya karne waale hain?

The servant smiled and spilled everything he had inferred from up….

They were arranging some props by the stairs and he had heard them speaking of some acting… Along with dancing and singing….

Vishal: Ab ye theek hai… (Thinking🤔) Humara ek aur kaam karna!

Saying Vishal whispered something in the servant's ears who nodded and went off to perform his duty with utmost sincerity! 😉

Vishal and the other guys grinning happily left the area leaving Aryan behind as their work had been done… Even if the girls investigated as to how they knew details only Aryan's name would pop up…. Well… They had used only his name there on purpose many a times…… 😈

Aryan didn't like the way he was used…. But in a way it was good… Watching sangeet programs secretly was fun! 😛

After all he was a guy too! 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey krithu
it was really sweetu tweetu............

a pure treat.......

Aryan n Dipika comming closer while sandhaya and vishal in action

till now girls are leading and hope they actually win

plz cont soon

really eager

luv ya

lolz
ana👏

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