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Posted: 16 years ago

Sandy drove in the academy and parked her car…. Today was Saturday…. So many people had come in for their classes…. Juniors mostly…. But the room she was to practice would be free as it was for the senior group now gone for the tour…. So the parking lot was full and she had to drive in till the last to park her car….

Humming the song she was to perform with Vishal she got down from the car taking her bag…. 😊

Locking it she rounded her car and started walking back to the academy wishing few of the people around she knew…. Half way down the parking lot she stopped suddenly and retraced her steps back…. Suspiciously she looked at a black car…. 🤔 Something about this car was familiar…. She then went back few steps to get a clear view of the car's number plate…. Seeing it her face spread into a wide grin…. Ah ha! Mr. Great is here already!!! 😃

Smiling she started walking to the academy building…

Entering the room Sandy knew she would be facing a boiling volcano…. And as she had expected he was in a state of explosion…. 😡 Pacing around the room already changed into his casuals for dancing…..

She took a deep breath seeing him…. Ooooo…. ☺️ He looked damn handsome in it… To be more exact…. Hot!!!!!! 😉 She chided herself and took a step inside the room….

That was it!!!!!!!!!

Vishal stopped pacing and looked at her angry…. Walking upto her he thrust his watch at her face and asked angrily….

Vishal: Do you even know the importance of time? Kitne baje aane ko kaha tha aur kitne baje aayi ho?

Sandy: (Smiling) Vo naa… 😳

Vishal: (Tirading😡) You only know excuses.... Do you even care someone is waiting here?

Sandy: (Surprised) You were? Waiting? For me? How sweet!! (Batting her eyelids irritating him more❤️)

Vishal: (Harshly) Not like we are out for a date…. 😉 For practice….

Sandy: (Her smile fading a little😳) Hmm… Ho jaata hai kabhi kabhi…. Ladki hoon…. Aur aaj Saturday bhi hai to late uthi…. Isme bhadakne ki kya baat hai?

Vishal: (Incredulously) You made me wait two hours and now don't even care to say sorry?!? Aur pooch bhi rahi ho ki main gussa kyun hoon? 😲

Sandy: (Sternly) Maine tumhe wait karne ko kaha tha? 😡

Vishal: (Retorting back) You are right... I shouldn't have…. Just because I committed I had to…

Sandy: (Ignoring his retort asked a little coy) Committed?!?! 😳

Going closer to him she lifted a finger to stroke his cheek but he snapped her hand off and said…. 😃

Vishal: (Frustrated that she took different meanings for whatever he said) To the dance… Committed to the dance…. (Stressing) To Dipika…. Main tumhare liye nahi Dipika ke liye wait kar raha tha… Just because she said so…. And I agreed to her I would be dancing with you! Lekin ab nahi… I am not going to dance with you anymore!

Sandy: (Angrily going over to the corner shelf and dumped her bag in it) FINE! Maine nahi kaha tumhe dance karne…. Maine nahi kaha tumhe wait karne…. No one forcing you into it… Do as you wish… Lekin khud Dipika ko phone karke keh dena ki dance cancel ho gaya… (Turning around with her dancing clothes in her hand) No need to tell her it was your decision to cancel it either…. Keh dena mujhse nahi hua… Now if you will kindly leave main apni doosri dances practice kar loongi! 😡

Saying she stomped off to the changing room to change….

Vishal saw her go angry and picked up his bag…. He retrieved his cell phone to call Dipika and even started to dial…. But then he dropped the bag and closed his cell phone… He couldn't say no to Dipika… Also what reason would he give her? That Sandy had come late irritating him and he quit because of that?!!? 😕

Dipika would chide him saying it was silly and get him back to dance with her…. 😒

Also he remembered Sandy's dejected face yesterday when they had to cancel the dance because of her partner's broken leg…. And he reminded himself that he had not decided to dance only for Dipika… But for Sandy as well… Because from his side this was the one thing he could do for her…. At the least…. The only one thing he could do! 😔

Where was he trapped?!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Inhaling deeply he dropped back the bag and went out…. 😕

Sandy came out of the changing room tying her hair in the band smiling…

She knew Vishal would not leave…. He had said it for sake…. He had the habit of picking fights with her always…. It had become a routine for them whenever they met…. At least citing this as a reason she got him to talk to her… And she would near him to tease him… Anything is fair in love and war!!!!!!!!!!!! 😉

But her smile faded when she saw the room empty…. He left?!?! Had she been too harsh in talking to him like that? She knew it was her mistake making him wait for two hours… But he didn't ask for any explanation and had started directly to vent his anger on her…. That was not fair!

She scolded herself…. She should have asked sorry and not irritated him so much… But she knew not why, but more than loving him she liked seeing his irritated face….. 😳

Dejected she turned around and received a pleasant surprise…. Vishal was standing at the entrance with a water bottle in his hand…. He didn't leave??!? She smiled slowly and said…

Sandy: (Their eye meeting a moment) I am sorry… I should have said this first…. (Pausing) And thanks for not leaving!

Saying she went over to the VCD player to switch it on….

Vishal came in slowly…. Seeing Sandy's dejected face he knew he had taken the right decision of not leaving…. But he still was angry at her for making him wait for so long time…. She could have at least called him to inform she would be late…. He could have also started late….. 🤔

Vishal: (As Sandy sat down said a little stern) Main tumhari wajah se nahi Dipika ke wajah se ruka…. Because she would also feel disappointed if I didn't perform with you!

Sandy just looked up at him and smiled a little… Looking back down she tried her level best not to smile more… Because he might have not realized what he had said… But she had heard…. "Also"… He had mentioned that Dipika would also feel disappointed if he didn't perform with her… And was there any reason to even debate as to who the other person the "also" indicated?!!?!? 😉

He kept the water on the table and sat down with Sandhya to watch the VCD again… They watched it two more times to confirm their steps… And then played the music to start the rehearsal…

He hadn't forgotten any of his steps, which was good…. With just five hours of intial practice yesterday…. So they just had to refine their steps and learn the remaining song without wasting time to learn again…. 😛

The steps were neither tough nor to easy…. Just the movements had to be done gracefully giving the rightly needed reaction where necessary!

But whenever it came to hold her Vishal held her too tightly which hurt Sandy… But she didn't wince even once worried he would again threaten to leave…. And she couldn't afford to lose a partner now!

After a while….

Sandy: (Exasperated) Vishal! That expression is not right… Ye ek romantic duet hai…. Koi disco dance nahi, ki jo chahe expression de do… Ye full song movements se zyada expressions par dependant hai… Please us par concentrate karo! 😳

Vishal: (Casually) Vo sab performance ke waqt main theek kar loonga… Bas ab practice karte hain…. And we are not into any competition where these expressions would count…. Bas ek marriage ke liye hi to hai! 😳

Sandy: (Stomping over to him😡) Zaroori hai! Ek chota kaam bhi ho, I need perfection… Future me Neha ki shaadi jo koi bhi yaad karega is dance ko bhi zaroor yaad karega… Aur main nahi chahati ki uski ek bhi bitter rememberence ho… Isliye apne expressions par dyaan do… Bas!

Saying she went to replay the song…. But again Vishal didn't even care for expressions… Sandy had to keep reminding him to do but he ignored it… After few times she decided he was doing it on purpose and left saying him anything… If she knew him enough he would definitely correct himself during the dance…. But she was also skeptical about it… How do you get anything suddenly during performance when you don't do it properly during the rehearsals? Even she, a trained dancer, found it difficult! 😕

During lunch.... Sandy had brought from him.... Light lunch so that they wouldn't feel difficult to practice after eating.... Only today they could practice fully since tomorrow they would not have time to practice as they were leaving to the beach house!

Vishal had made a fuss of going out to eat... But there were problems....

One... Main road was fifteen minutes from the academy....

Two.... He would have had to take out his car from the parking lot and drive out just for lunch... Too lazy to do it!

Three.... The parking slot might not be full when he came back... So where does he park? Outside was unsafe!

So he had no other go but to accept Sandy's lunch... But he was a little consoled of the fact that Sandy's mom had prepared the lunch.... 😃

But eating the sandwhich Vishal was reminded of Sandy's cooking.... No.... Sandhya's cooking.... He had eaten at his home.... It really was delicious.... There were very few women in his list who cooked so damn well..... And Sandhya was one among them.... He smiled thinking this and looked at her... She was watching something outside.... He looked in that direction and saw in the near by tree, a mother bird feeding its small ones.... A beautiful scene.... There was a cute smile on her face seeing this and she had forgotten to eat her sandwhich.... 😳

He really was surprised how any women could have two sides in her.... And that too such differences.... People who didn't know would think Sandy and Sandhya were twins.... Hardly both the avatars had any similarities expect physically!😊

Immediately he remembered something and chided himself.... What was he doing? Thinking about her? When he had decided not to get her close his heart was finding it difficult so....😔

Vishal: (Sternly) Dance practice nahi karni kya? Khaana kab khatam karne ka irada hai?

Sandy turned to look at him shrinking her eyes....

Sandy: Tum khao naa.... Main khaoon naa khaoon tumhe kya?

Vishal: (Taking a bite) Main to khaa raha hoon.... Lekin phir se tum late kar dogi aise bahar dekhti rahi to!

Sandy: Meri wajah se ab der nahi hoga.... Just eat!

Saying Sandy twisted her mouth and turned back to watch out and bit into her sandwhich.... Vishal smiled and continued his lunch! 😳

After lunch….

Sandy gave him a dress saying....
Sandy: We are doing dress rehearsal now.... (Picking her dress) Not the exact dress, but at least something like this....
Vishal: (Turning the dress around said stunned) This!?!? You want me to wear this dress for the dance?😲
Sandy: (Rolling her eyes) Not this! 😔
Vishal: Yeah... But something like this.... This is....🤢
Sandy: (Going over to him) What's your problem? For the type of dance and movements we are doing.... This is what suits best! Wanna wear kurta pyjama?
Vishal: Well... Yes... That would be actually be fine....
As Sandhya started to retort back he scurried of to the changing room.... Sandhya glared at him go and went out to change in the near by room....😡


When Sandhya changed and came Vishal looked on at her.... Kept looking on untill he heard the song... She was looking really beautiful in that practice wear.... Dance wear for girls gave them an elegance which was not otherwise to be seen!
Playing the song Sandy turned around and saw Vishal looking at her.... Smiling she went upto him and asked.....
Sandy: Aise kya dekh rahe ho?
Vishal just shook his head as Sandy smiling said....
Sandy: You are looking handsome!
Vishal looked at her stunned as she continued smiling simply...
Sandy: You know a person, don't know a person.... It doesn't matter.... Appreciations can be given to strangers too if they are worth it!
Vishal just nodded and took her hand for practicing....
The practice went well until....
At a particular point where they had to come close Vishal fumbled letting go off her… With a thump Sandy hit her head on the floor, lightly but still it throbbed a little…. Angry she looked up at him and said…

Sandy: Have idea of killing me? 😡

Vishal: (Genuinely😕) Sorry! It… It was really a mistake this time…. I…. I am not comfortable with this step… Is it necessary? I mean can't we do it differently….

Sandy: (Angry) You know what Vishal? I say we'll call it quits…. Tumhe dance ya dance ke movements se nahi… Mujhse problem hai… Jab se aaye ho mujhe neeche girate rahe, steps jaan boochkar mix karte rahe…. (As Vishal tried to interrupt again she held up her hand) And your holds have been so strong that they have hurt me… Do even realize that? 😒Lekin maine kuch nahi kaha… Kyunki maine kisi ko vaada kiya hai performance dene ka…. Ye ek romantic song hai aur isme aise hi steps hote hain…. Like it, do it… Else just… Just leave it! Excuse me!

Saying she left the room…

Just then a cell phone started to ring….

Vishal looked at her go and chided himself… He was been a little harsh he knew… His anger from the morning had not subsided…. But he didn't realize he was showing it in the dance….. He hadn't wanted to do it that way! But still... The distance he wanted between them was narrowing and his fear turning into anger made him do things unknowingly! 😕

The cell phone was ringing for the third time when Vishal looked around and heard it coming from Sandy's bag… He looked around and saw that she was no where to be seen…. The cell was ringing constantly and he decided to atleast silence it… Digging into her bag for the phone he was just about to silence it when he saw the name flashing on it… It said "Hospital"….🤔

He was in a dilemma…. Could it be some emergency?!?!? The way Sandy had left he knew she would not return so soon… He decided to attend the call…. He could inform her soon at least, if it was emergency!

Vishal: Hello…

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Vishal: Ji vo bahar gayi hain… Main koi message le sakta hoon?

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Vishal: (Stunned) Oh! 😲

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Vishal: Achcha… Main keh doonga!

Saying he had just cut the call when Sandy came back… Without a glance at him she went and picked her bag…. She was just about to leave the room when Vishal caught the hand in which she carried bag…😳

Sandy: (Without turning back) Mera haath chodo Vishal… I am not forcing you into anything anymore… Jo chahe tum kar lo!

Vishal: (Extending her phone) Your phone!

Surprised Sandy turned around and seeing the phone in his hand asked…

Sandy: Mera phone tumhare paas kaise?!!? 😈

Vishal: Bahut der se baj raha tha… Isliye uthaya… Hospital se tha!

Concerned Sandy took the phone to check it when Vishal said….

Vishal: Nothing to worry…. (In a sort of regretful tone) Subah ek emergency pregnancy case attend ki thi tumne?

Sandy looked up at him…. There was some difference in his voice… It had softened and his eyes showed respect for her…. As if he regreted his behavior..... She just simply nodded as Vishal continued….

Vishal: (Stunned a little) Vo case observation me tha naa? Nurse said the patient regained consciousness.... Aur twin boy me ek bachcha, jiski breathing theek nahi thi…. Tumne jaisa kaha unhone waise uski treatment continue ki thi and that baby boy is also fine now!

Hearing this Sandy smiled relief spreading on her face….

Sandy: (More to herself) Thank God! That case was difficult… Ek bachcha ke gale me cord twisted tha… Aur…. (Seeing Vishal watching her) Oh… Thanks for informing! Mai…

She was about to turn around when Vishal's grip on her hand tightened… Only then did both realize that he had been holding her hand for so long… Slowly he released his grip as he said…😳

Vishal: I am sorry… I shouldn't have behaved so.... Lekin tumhe batana tha naa ki hospital gayi thi?

Sandy: Batane ke mood me the? 😳

Vishal looked down at her accusing glance and knew he had been hasty in shouting at her…. He hadn't cared to listen to why she was late... He never thought she could be serious.... Seeing her in the attire of Sandy he tended to forget that she was also Dr.Sandhya Agarwal… So much as Sandy irritated him, Sandhya was nice! Really very nice! ☺️

Vishal: (His jovial self) Tumhari galti hai… You always come dressed like this that I forget you are even a doctor…. Let alone the Chief of a hospital! Who ever gave you the doctor degree!?😃

Sandy: (Suppressing her smile seeing him back to himself😉) Ah! Now how's that? Main jaise chahoon dress kar loon… Issse doctor ke degree ka kya samband?

Vishal: (Preparing to replay the music) Haan… Samband to nahi hai… Lekin is tarah bahar ghoomogi to kisi ko bhi tumhare doctor hone par shak to hoga naa…. Aur main bhool gaya isme koun si badi baat hai!

Sandy: (Going over to him) You are impossible… Galti tumhari and you say I provoked it! I… Agar Neha ki shaadi nahi hoti naa, to tumhare saath dance hi nahi karti aur ye sab kuch sunana nahi padta mujhe!

Vishal: Neha ki shaadi hai isliye tumhe jhel raha hoon.... But don't worry in sab ka barabar hisaab le loonga shaadi!
Sandy: Shaadi me?!!? (Understanding) Ohh!!!!!! (Sarcastically) No way! Tum log humse kisi me bhi nahi jeet sakte…. Haroge….
Vishal: Tch!!! Ladkiyaan! Ladkiyaan! Kya kab kaise hota hai, ye hum taiy karte hain.... Isliye jeet sirf humari!👍🏼
Sandy: (With a challenging expression😈) Vishal ji…(Stressing) Shaadi me ladkiyaan hi baazi maarengi… Isme koi shak nahi hai! Isliye behtar ye hoga ki aap iske baare me sochiye hi mat!

Vishal: (Hands on hip) Achcha?!?! Hum bhi dekhte hain ki ladkiyaan kis tarah baazi maarti hain…. Bholo mat ki Vishal Malhotra, the Great se pala pada hai!⭐️

Sandy: Hmm.. Aur tum bhi bhulo mat ki Sandy khadi hai tumhare saamne…. Sandhya nahi…. Ajay ko ab vo bhagwaan hi bachaye!😃

Vishal: Tab tak nahi jab tak uski angarakshak uske saath hain!

Sandy: (Chuckling) Angarakshak!?!? Yeah…. Dekhenge!

Vishal: Haan dekhenge!

Saying Sandy and Vishal looked at each challenging… 😉

Just then Sandy's cell phone rang again….

They broke their glances and Sandy picked the call…

Sandy: Hello… Dipika!

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Sandy: (Shocked) What?!?! Kya hua?

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As Dipika spoked on the other end Sandy glanced at Vishal also worried….

Sandy: Ab wahan halat kaisi hai?

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Sandy: (Deciding) Main bhi wahan aati hoon!

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Sandy: Nai… After hearing this I can't just stay here…. Neha ke ghar me naa? I'll be there!

Saying Sandy cut the call and picked up her bag…. Then remembering she looked at Vishal and said….

Sandy: Vo… Er… Aaj ke liye itni practice kaafi hai… Mujhe abhi Neha ke ghar jaana hai!

Saying Sandy started to leave when Vishal stopped her asking…

Vishal: What?! Why? Dipika ka phone tha naa? What did she say? Is she ok? 😒

Sandy: (Hastily) Dipika's fine… (Hesitating) But Neha…

Vishal: (Concerned) Neha ko kya hua?

Sandy: Kuch nahi… Lekin ab baat karne ka waqt nahi hai…. Coming with me?

Vishal looked at her for a long while and said…

Vishal: Fine…. Meri gaadi me chalte hain…. I'll get my bag!

Saying Vishal turned to get his bag and Sandy got a little conscious when she heard Vishal's car…. Oh oh!!!!!!!!!😕

Vishal: Chalo... (Seeing Sandy was in deep thought he shook her lightly) Hello… Chalo!

Sandy smiled a little and nodded and walked behind him thinking how he would react when he came to know….😔

Few minutes back…

Sandy came out of the building cursing Vishal under her breath….

Sandy: Who does he think he is?!?! Maine thode ussse kaha ki mere saath dance karo… Ek dance… Sirf ek dance ke liye itne tantrums create kar raha hai… I am not going to dance with him…. Let him be…. Dipika poochegi to bata doongi… He and…. I wish I could just…

Saying she kicked a stone which went and hit a car's tyre….. Irritated she was about to turn back to the building to leave when her eyes fell on the number plate….

Sandy: (Smiling a little) Use to kuch nahi kar sakti…. Lekin….

Her evil mind had just given her an idea…. Grinning she looked around for anybody's presence…. Seeing no one around, she hurried to the back of the parking lot where a small cabin type building stood which contained all sort of odd items from gardening tools to repairing items… Going in she searched for the tool box and got what she wanted…. Coming back out again she looked around to confirm if she was alone… She was…. She then stooped down and pierced…. The car went down on a side as the air from one of its back tyre hissed out through the hole the nail had made…

Sandy: (Piercing in the nail more) Chalo… Jaate waqt walk karo… Yahan se taxi lene main road jaana hai which is at least fifteen minutes of walk….

Smiling she was about to go back when she decided to be a little more bad and pierced the other back tyre too….

Sandy: What if he had a spare tyre and knew to change tyres?!!? He is strong enough too, to change tyres! My hottie! 😳 😉

After a while she straightened satisfied with herself…. She then went back and replaced the nail in the tool box…

Then with a cute serene face, an expression seeing which no would believe that she could have done what she had just done, walked to the academy building….⭐️

Now nearing the parking lot Sandy prayed Vishal shouldn't find out how it had happened…

Vishal went to the front of the car and opened the car door… After putting his bag in he closed the back door when his eyes fell on the tyre…

Vishal: (Surprised😲) What the?!!? (Coming back to check) Ye tyre kaise puncture hua?!?!? Subah to theek tha…

He squatted down on his heels to check the tyre and only then did notice the other tyre….

Vishal: (Stunned) Ye waala tyre bhi!?!?! Magar kaise…

For conformance he went around the car and checked the other two tyres…. They seemed in tact! He came to the back of the car and said more to himself…

Vishal: Back ke do tyres me hi hawa nahi hai? Puncture hai shayad… Lekin subah….

Sandy: (Interrupting) Shayad raaste me kuch chuba hoga aur tumne notice nahi ki…. Aur ab puncture ho gaya…. 😔

Vishal: Lekin sirf back ke do tyres…. If I had ran on something the front tyres are intact….

Sandy: (Rolling her eyes went over to him) Dekho… Der ho rahi hai… Tum apni investigation skills baad me use karke "Case of the punctured tyres" solve karna… Ab mujhe Neha ke ghar jaana hai… Jaldi… Aana hai to meri gaadi me chalte hain…

Saying Sandhya went off to get her car…. She was about to get in when Vishal stopped her grabbing the key….

Vishal: I'll drive!

Sandy: (Sternly😳) Kyun? Meri gaadi hai… Mujhe chalana aata hai!

Vishal: Haan… (Moving her away from the driver's side) Lekin mujhe tum pe bharosa nahi hai….

Saying he got into the car and shut the door close… He then leant to the other side and opened the other side door….

Sandy: (Stomping to the other side) Are ye to zabardasti hai! (Getting into the car) Agar bharosa nahi hai to taxi le lo… Main hi chalaoongi…

But Vishal had already put on the reverse gear….

Vishal: Mujhe behas karne ka waqt nahi hai…. Isliye apni is bak bak ko band karo aur batao ki hum Neha ke ghar kyun jaa rahe hain?

Sandy: 😒 Nai bataoongi…. Mujhe meri gaadi chalane do!

Vishal: (Looking at her casually ever so) Nahi batayegi? To gaadi ko kaheen jaake takkar de doonga… Is it k?

Sandy: (Shocked😲) What the?!?! Tum…

Vishal immediately made a swerve as if about to scrap a lamp post and Sandy cried out…

Sandy: NO! Gaadi ko kuch hua to tumhari jaan le loongi…. Chilgose!😡

Vishal: (With a smile) Tameez se baat karna…. (Trying to ram the car again to a wall) Warna…

Sandy: (Pleading) Nai nai… Achcha baba… (Folding her hands) Theek se baat karoongi… Car ko theek se chalana!

Vishal: Hmm… Where's the magic word?

As Sandy glared at him Vishal made another swerve and she said hastily....
Sandy: No! Alright.... Please.... Don't do it! Will speak properly!
Vishal: 😃 Ab aaya oonth pahad ke neeche… Bolo Neha ko kya hua?

Sandy looked at him angry and knew he had purposefully taken the car from her to subdue her…. Knew she would pester him during the drive there and hence was fast enough to take the situation in his hand!😉

She just prayed he doesn't come to know about her puncturing his car… Wonder what he would do if he does?!!?!?!😕

Sandy: Dipika keh rahi thi ki aaj dance rehearsal ke liye nahi aa sakti… (Remembering) Oh! (Glancing at Vishal) Ek minute… Mujhe kuch urgent calls karne hain…. Baad me bataoongi Dipika ne kya kaha tha!

Saying Sandy made few calls to her friends instructing them that she wouldn't be there for the rehearsals and to go ahead without her… She then cut the call and told Vishal the reason for Dipika's call!🤔

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Posted: 16 years ago

The same day morning…

Dipika parked outside the mall where she and Neha had an appointment in the beauty parlor… She scanned the area to see if Neha was anywhere and didn't find her… Thinking she might be in she went inside the parlor…

Dipika: Hi! Mary…. Neha kahan hai? Pedicure karva rahi hai?

The lady looked up smiling and said….

Mary: Hi Dipika madam…. Neha mam has not yet come!

Dipika: (Surprised) Oh! I'll wait then… Get all the things needed!

The lady nodded going back to attend the lady she was attending before….

Dipika decided to wait…. She waited… Waited… Waited… For nearly half an hour she waited before she called Neha…. No response… Waiting for another half hour she kept calling but her cell came switched off…. She tried her home but it kept ringing…. No response….

She was surprised…. Did she forget her appointment? Maybe she was at Ajay's home…. She called up Ajay….🤔

Dipika: Hello! Ajay…. Dipika here!

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Dipika: (Surprised) Aryan!!!!

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Dipika: (Puzzled) Kya Neha wahan hai? Aaj mujhe beauty parlor me milne waali thi… Ek ghanta hua abhi tak nahi aayi!

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Dipika: (Worried) Kya hua?

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Dipika: (Stunned) Jhagada?!? Is waqt?!?! ❓

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Dipika: Ajay kahan hai? (Unbelievable) To phir baat karke manane ko kaho use…. It's not like it is something new between them!

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Dipika: (Shocked😲) He what??? (After a pause stammering) How could he?

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Dipika: (Angrily😡) He will never change!

Saying Dipika cut the call with hatred and hurried to her car to drive to Neha's home!

Half an hour later Dipika braked halt outside Neha's apartment…. She hurried inside when someone called out to her…. It was Aryan….

Dipika turned around and saw that Ajay, Boxer and Aryan were in the garden…. Ajay upset was seated on the bench… Angry she stomped to him and asked angrily….

Dipika: Kabhi to sudharo Ajay! Do din me shaadi hai aur ab bhi tum is tarah….

Aryan: (Interjecting) Nahi Dipika… Is baar iski koi galti nahi thi…. It was….

Dipika: (Sternly😳) Aryan! Don't cover up for him… Tumhe pata Neha is sensitive about relationships…. (To Ajay) Ek baar tumhara rishta usi Geeta ki wajah se toot the toot the reh gaya tha…. Ab phir se ussse milne ka kya matlab hai!?!?

Ajay got up angrily and said….

Ajay: Main ussse nahi mila! (Calming down) It was a chance meeting… Main Neha ke liye gift khareedne kal jewellary mahal gaya tha…. Bahar aaya to Geeta se mila… We do know each other…. I can't just turn away my face from her! Neha ne ise dekha aur galat samajh liya… I didn't get time to even talk to her properly on this!

Dipika looked at him for a while and felt he spoke the truth…. 😳

Aryan: Dipika… Is baar such me iski koi galti nahi hai… Neha is just mistaken…. Lekin aaj subah se apne ghar me band hai… Na kisi se baat kar rahi hai naa bahar aayi hai!

Dipika looked at him for a while and without another word turned around and went inside the apartment…

She hesitated first but after a while taking a deep breath rang the door bell… She then called out….

Dipika: Neha! It's me Dipika… Please… Darwazaa kholo!

Dipika thought she heard the shuffling of chair but the door didn't open…. She waited for a while and then slowly the door opened but Neha had it in chains….

Immediately she closed the door and from the other side said….

Neha: I don't want to see him…. Dipika… You can come in!

Saying Neha opened the door and went in…. Dipika turned around and saw that Ajay, Aryan and Boxer were standing down the stairs looking at the apartment… She shook her head and going in locked the door!

Dipika looked around and saw Neha seated on the couch hugging her knees… More than sadness anger shown in them….. She went closer and saw her eyes were tired… Seems she hadn't slept the whole night… And must have cried too…… Something she knew Neha had never done in her life!

But no indication of such was shown on her face…. Except anger and anger only!

Dipika: (Softly) Neha!

She sat down beside her and kept her hand on shoulder…. Neha stopped rocking and looked at her….

Neha: You were right Dipika… All men are dominating personalities…. Generations badle hain… Auratein badalte hain…. Not men…. Never!

Dipika: (Seeing that her words were now strikers against her itself) Neha…. Lekin Ajay ne kaha ki uski….

Neha: (Angrily😡) Usne kya kaha mujhe nahi sunana… Usne jo nahi kaha uska ab problem hai…. I saw him with Geeta in the restaurant…. Today when he came to pick me to go to the parlor I asked him casually…. Poocha maine ki kal kahan gaya tha? He lied to me… Kaha ki kaheen bhi nahi gaya…. Kisi se bhi nahi mila…. (Shouted) HE LIED!!!!! I hate liars…. (A little calmer) About Geeta! He didn't tell me on his own nor (Stressing) when I asked him!

Dipika now understood the real problem…. It was Ajay's mistake… Him meeting Geeta was not the problem but hiding it, especially from Neha was a big mistake… Anyone would mistake it….

Dipika: (Trying to justify) Neha might be he wanted to tell… Not now…. Lekin…

Neha: Ab nahi to kab? Do din me shaadi hone jaa rahi hai meri uske saath… Now when I know he lies about his ex affair how do I trust him anymore… Is he even worth trusting? (Determined) Nai…. Meri uske saath shaadi mere zindagi ki badi galti hogi!

Dipika looked at her stunned that she had taken such a big decision so soon….

Dipika: Neha! Now you are taking a hasty decision… Soch….

Neha: (Interrupting angrily😡) Socha bhi hai… Samjha bhi hai… Lekin vo kabhi nahi badlega! I told you Dipika ki maine use sirf ek chance diya tha… Sirf ek… Doobara nahi!

Saying she looked away breathing heavy with her tirade….

The finality in Neha's tone made Dipika helpless because she wasn't going to listen to anyone…. She bit her lip trying various ways to console her…. But she couldn't think of anything right now…. Maybe someone else could talk to her…. But who?!?!?😕

Neha would not be prepared to meet any of the guys….. Not even Aryan!😒

Ajay's mom?!?? No…. Yes…. No…. Dipika was skeptical… Because seeing her outburst she wasn't sure of she would react to her would be mother-in-law…. It could have effects both ways….

Even if she accepted it might be just because Ajay's mom had said….. And that would not be a fulfilling understanding life!

And if she didn't accept…. She would be losing Ajay's mom trust and even later if Neha decided to forgive Ajay and agree for the marriage…. It might have an adverse effect on her relationship with her mother-in-law!

Slowly Dipika got up and made her way down to the gardens, confused….

Seeing Dipika come towards them Aryan asked…. Ajay and Boxer also looked hopefully….

Aryan: Kya hua? Maan gayi naa? (Smiling a little) I knew… Uska gussa kuch bhi nahi hai… Bas… (He turned around to say to Ajay)

Aryan stopped speaking as Dipika caught his hand… He looked at her and dejected she shook her head…..

Ajay hit his head with his palm upset….. It really wasn't his mistake!

Aryan: Oh! (Looking at an upset Ajay and trying some way to make the situation light) Let it just be Ajay… Give her a day… Kal tak theek ho jayegi!

Dipika: (Looking at Ajay with an expression she knew not how to show) Nahi Ajay… She wants to break this marriage!

There was stunned resounding silence around the garden as Ajay, Aryan and Boxer looked at her shocked…. Break the marriage!?!?!? Now?!?! After all these days they had been together!😲

After a while…

Boxer: Breaking marriage!?!? Has she gone mad? Itni choti baat ko….

Dipika: (Angrily😡) Kya choti baat hai Boxer? (Indicating Ajay) Shaadi ke kuch din pehle ek aadmi apni ex girl friend se milta hai… Jiski wajah se pehle hi in dono me anban hui thi… Lekin vo ussse chupata hai… Ye choti baat hai?

Aryan: Dipika… Ajay ne kaha naa, it was just a chance meeting… He didn't go on purpose to meet her….

Dipika: (Sternly) Kisi ne ye nahi kaha ki Geeta se iska milna galat tha… Naa maine…. Naa Neha ne…. All we are talking about trust…. Shaadi ki buniyaad pyaar se zyada bharosa hota hai… Agar tumhare hisaab se is 'choti baat' ke liye bhi Neha is par (Glancing at Ajay) bharosa nahi kar sakti hai… To poori zindagi kaise?!!?👎🏼

Aryan and Boxer looked helpless as Ajay sat down back dejected… They knew what Dipika was saying was true…. Many a time's small problems between Ajay and Neha which had come and gone…. Even the big problem which had come had not become an issue because Neha had trusted him…. As time went she understood his situation…. But a woman never compromises so much! Not again!

Ajay: (Hands over his head😕) I still say it is a mistake….. Maine ussse Geeta ke baare me chupana nahi chahata tha…. I… Usne jab mujhse poocha ki kal main kahan gaya tha I thought she had seen me come out of the jewellary mahal…. Main vo baat ussse chupana chahatha tha!

Dipika looked at him understanding that this was a clear case of misunderstanding…. But this cannot go on forever…. Both have to understand before their marriage that always mistaking and fighting like this was hazardous for their healthy marriage life!

And suddenly Dipika knew who she could make Neha talk to…. The only person she would listen…. Well… She might not…. But something said that Neha definitely would talk to that person!

Dipika: (Deciding) Aryan mere saath chalo…. (To Boxer) Ajay ka khayal rakhna… Just leave Neha…. Jab tak hum wapas nahi aa jaate!

Saying Dipika took a surprised Aryan with her…🤔

Two hours later….

Neha's door bell rang again…. This time it opened faster enough because Neha was expecting Dipika….

Opening the door she got stunned seeing the person outside her house…

Neha: Aap?!?!

Was it the situation or her mental state or seeing the person after many long years…. No one could assert it…. But Neha broke down and cried hugging the person!😭 🤗

Seated on the couch….

Mrs.Naik smoothed her daughter's hair as Neha lay down on her lap whimpering…. Her cries had subdued and finally died down to whimpers….

Seeing her mother what it was Neha didn't know… She had even forgotten that she hated her mom because of her father…. But she did know she wanted a shoulder to cry and what shoulder could there be than a mother's lap!

Mrs.Naik had taken Neha in and allowed her to cry out her grief….😭

Dipika and Aryan….. Staffs from her daughter's office had come to her house suddenly…. Mrs.Naik didn't know why? But she recognized Dipika's name…. She had sent her Neha's marriage invitation… 😊

Mrs.Naik had felt so happy for her… Even though she had not met or spoken to her for years now…. She hadn't forgotten her…. How could a mother?!?! She had secretly tried to know about her…. And then the biggest dream of any mother…. Her daughter's marriage… She heard through some friends of hers, parents of staffs working working in Special Squad…. How she had wished and hoped to be beside her daughter during this special event! But she couldn't…. Her very own daughter hated her!

After a while Neha straightened and looked at her mother fully in years…. She was just the same Neha had known her to be… Wearing a stiff ironed cotton saree, with a small smile on her face…. Her hair tied up in a bun…. Her mother she felt looked much younger in fact than before!

Mrs.Naik: (Smiling and wiping Neha's cheeks) Kaisi hai meri beti?

Neha didn't answer and lay down again on her mother's lap…. This time she wasn't spilling her grief but enjoying the solace of a mother's lap which only now she felt, she had been missing for all these long years…. Mrs.Naik again smoothed her hair and said…

Mrs.Naik: (Dreamily😳) Mere beti ki shaadi ho rahi hai… Mujhe yakeen hi nahi hota… Maine tumhare liye jo sapne dekhe the vo ab such hoga…

Neha: (Still lying down on her lap said slowly) Sorry maa…. Ye kabhi such nahi hoga!

Mrs.Naik's smile vanished and she made Neha get up…. Looking at her closely she said…

Mrs.Naik: Ussse abhi bhi pyaar karti ho!

Neha: (Sternly😳) Maa please…. Iske baare me baat mat karo…. I have seen you after years…. I don't want to spoil this mood!

Mrs.Naik: Lekin isi ki wajah se tum mujhe phir se mili…. Warna tumne to apni maa ko hi apne shaadi ke baare me nahi bataya tha….

Neha looked away a little guilty as her mother continued….

Mrs.Naik: (After a pause) Dipika aur Aryan ne sab kuch keh diya hai….

Now Neha knew who had brought her mother here… But she didn't get angry at them because in a way they had done good… Because this encounter with Ajay had made her meet her mother again else she herself knew she wouldn't have been ready even to hear about her!

Mrs.Naik: Bachpan se leke aaj tak tune meri har baat maani hai… Sivay ek ke… Ghar chodne kaa…. Lekin ab meri baat sunogi!

Neha looked at her questioningly as Mrs.Naik continued….

Mrs.Naik: Main neeche Ajay se milke hi aayi hoon… Bahut achcha ladka hai… Tumse pyaar bahut karta hai!

Neha: (Disappointed😒) Isi par dhoka khaa jaati hoon… Sirf pyaar karta hai… Jiski wajah se he takes me for granted…. Us par bharosa bhi ab poora se nahi kar sakti maa!

Mrs.Naik: Ajay ne itni badi galti ki bhi nahi hai Neha…

Neha: (Angrily) Aapko to sab kuch aadat ho gayi hai… Us aadmi ke saath reheke….

Immediately Neha regretted saying those words… She looked at her mother whose smile had faded and feeling sorry….😕

Neha: (Slowly) Sorry… Mera vo matlab nahi tha…

Mrs.Naik: (Smiling feebly again) Tumhara jo bhi matlab tha main achchi tarah samajhti hoon… Lekin Neha… Choti choti baaton ke liye jhagada karna, muh latkake baithna…. Ye theek nahi hai… Agar such me kisi ki galti hai to baithke baatein karke bhi use suljhaaya jaa sakta hai!

Neha: Galti hoti to baat kar sakte hain…. Lekin vo gunah hai.... (Hatred) Sin!!! Cheating is a sin according to me.... Waise bhi baat unke saath kiya jaata hai jo such keheta ho…. Lekin Ajay aisa nahi hai… Pehle bhi usne….

Mrs.Naik: (As Neha faltered) Mujhe pata hai… Dipika ne kaha tha… Lekin Neha beta…. Tumne ye nahi dekha ki Ajay ne tumse Geeta ke baare me bataya bhi tha… Hai naa? Ki vo uski college ki sabse achchi dost thi! Baad me agar usne tumse chupaya tha to usme bhi tumhare liye pyaar hi tha naa…. Tumhe khone ka dar! Tumhe agar dhoka dena chahatha ho to pehle hi Geeta ke baare batata hi nahi….

Neha: (As if she had seen something bad) Lekin ab? Humari to shaadi hone jaa rahi hai to ab bhi jhooth?

Mrs.Naik: (Smiling a little) Agar main tumhe jaanti hoon to tumne ussse baat karne ka mouka hi nahi diya hoga… Theek hai naa?

Neha looked at her mother surprised… Of course she was right…. When she had asked Ajay about last evening he had denied… Then when she had straight asked him about Geeta he was stunned… Before he could talk to her she had come back home…

He had tried calling her she had switched off her cell…. Disconnected her landline…😡

Mrs.Naik: (Lifting her face to make her look at her) Main ye nahi keh rahi ki mard jo bhi karte jaaye un sab ko sehena chahiye…. Lekin unki baat to hum sun sakte hain… Usme kitni sachchayi hai kitni jhooth hume tay karna hai…. (Smiling a little) Agar sab is tarah jhagada karke shaadi tod dete hain to is duniya me kisi ki bhi shaadi nahi hogi… Aur aaj kal zyada shaadi tootthi bhi isi misunderstanding ki wajah se hai… Not talking to each other openly!

Neha looked at he mother for long as her words sinking in…. Her mother's marriage was in tact… Even though her father was not so good a husband…. She knew everyone respected her mother very much for what she was… As Mrs. Hema Naik…. Because she didn't allow her personal grief to seep out of the four walls of the house…⭐️

Mrs.Naik: Tumhe pata hai Neha…. Aaj kal tumhare pappa mujhe bahar le jaane lage hain… Kyunki ab society me unki status bad gaya hai… Aur jahan bhi jao ek shaadi shuda aadmi ki izzat uske biwi se hoti hai…. Mera ghar me bhi thoda bahut khayal rakhte hain kyunki agar nahi rakha to main bahar unke saath parties me nahi jaa paaoongi naa… Isme bhi unki selfishness hai, lekin mere liye to faida hi hua naa?

Neha sensed a personal pride in her mother's voice… Of course a married man's respect, in Indian society especially was linked with his wife…. The way he treated her…. Now Neha knew the reason for the difference in her mother… Before her father never took her mother out stating it as pure waste of time and money…. But even though for his own gain he took her out…. And she was happy!

Mrs.Naik: Ek baar ussse baat karke dekho ki vo kya keh raha hai… Agar tum ussse sachcha pyaar karti ho to vo pyaar tumhe dikha dega ki vo such keh raha hai ki jhooth!

Just then…

Ajay: Neha!

Neha and Mrs.Naik looked towards the door and saw Dipika, Ajay, Aryan, Boxer and Mrs.Desai standing there…

Seeing that Neha hadn't turned her face away Ajay felt a little bold and he came in…

Mrs.Naik looked at Neha who was looking at Ajay a little anger on her face… She squeezed her hand and giving assurance left the room… Everyone left the room with her….

Dipika looked at her watch and saw it was time for the rehearsals… But she would not be able to go…. She planned to call Sandhya!

As Ajay came near her Neha looked away but didn't move away from there….

Ajay: Neha I am sorry… Galti meri thi… Mujhe tumse Geeta ke baare me batana chahiye tha…. Lekin yakeen mano mera koi irada nahi tha tumse uske baare me chupana ka… (Neha looked at him doubtful) I wanted to tell you about her later… Kyunki agar main uske (Stressing) baare me batata mujhe iske baare me bhi batana padta!

Saying Ajay extending a gift to her… Neha looked down at the gift and looked at Ajay puzzled…. He opened the gift and took out an elongated jewel box… Opening it he extended it towards her… Surprised Neha looked at the jewel box and at him in turns…

Ajay: (Taking out the gold anklets from the box) Main inhe khareedne kal jewellary mahal gaya tha… Jab tumne kal shaam ke baare me poocha to main samjha ki tumne mujhe shop se bahar aate hue dekha tha… Isliye jhooth bola… I didn't think you were referring to Geeta…!

Neha looked at him stunned…. Angry and guilty with herself… As her mother had said she did feel genuinity in his voice… Genuineity in his eyes…. He was saying the truth…. Even though this time it was mistake from her side…. He hadn't mistaken it… He was trying to save their marriage!

Ajay: (Seeing that she wasn't responding) Agar tumhe yakeen nahi hota… To iska receipt bhi hai mere pass… (Digging into his pocket) Isme purchase date aur time bhi hai…

Neha immediately caught his hand to stop him taking out the receipt and she said tears in her eyes….

Neha: Ajay! Please don't make me feel so guilty!😔

Ajay: (Catching her hand the anklets between them) No! I can't do this to you Neha… Tumhe guilty karna mera irada nahi tha… I really love you Neha… Main pehle jaise bhi tha tumse pyaar karne ke baad, tumhe chedta hoon lekin never betray you…. I wanted to prove that I would never lie to you… Kal Geeta se meri meeting by chance tha aur sirf ek friend ke naate maine use ek cup coffee pilaya bas… I thought I would tell you about her when I give you this… (Indicating the anklets and after a pause) Ye actually mera tumhare liye suhag raat ki gift thi!😳

Hearing this Neha smiling blushed a little…. She bent down and hugged him like never before…. Before they had hugged countless times…. But today their hug had full love and confidence in it…. She didn't want to part away from him… Afraid that it was a dream……

The whole night yesterday…. Was a nightmare….. She was confused….. One of her mind told her to trust him…. One of the other reminded her that he had repeated this before…. After a long debate she had come to the conclusion to speak to him first…

So when he had denied flatly not having gone anywhere yesterday evening…. She couldn't bear it! 😕

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After a while still hugging him…

Neha: Ajay! I am sorry… I should have listened to you… Phir se… (Whimpering) I promise phir se kabhi aisa nahi hoga!

Tears streamed down both their eyes wiping clean the doubts and lies in them…. They just wanted to remain thus….

After a long tight hug, they parted…. Seeing her smile Ajay felt relaxed…. He indicated the anklets and said….

Ajay: Ab jab ye surprise nahi raha… So can I?❓

Neha looked at him smiling and nodded her agreement…

He bent down and he himself wore the anklet around her ankle and kissed after hooking each one around her ankle…. 😳

Just as he had kissed her second anklet around her ankle they heard clappings…👏

Aryan, Dipika, Neha's mom, Ajay's mom, Boxer, Sandhya and Vishal had also joined them….

Seeing them Ajay and Neha got up, holding hands…

Vishal: (Looking at their tightly held hands) Ajay tum itneee romantic hoge maine kabhi socha nahi tha!

Sandhya: Tum apna muh band rakhoge… Abhi unki sulah hui hai… Romance nahi!

Vishal: Kisi ne tumse poocha!

Sandhya was about to retort back but seeing Dipika showing her signs she stopped saying anything further, but put out her tongue at him….

Seeing her mother Neha ran to her and hugged her…..

Neha: Thank you mom!

Always how much ever a person… A child is angry…. Mother's words have the strongest effect where relations were concerned… Because a mother truly feels what her child feels…. Bonding with blood is not so easily breakable… But very much easily understandable!

Mrs.Naik: (Shaking her head) Sorry nahi Neha… Zaroori nahi hai…. Ek baat dhyaan rakhna…. Shaadi ke pehle bhi theek…. Baad me bhi theek… Pyaar aur bharosa ho to…. Koi bhi aadmi ya koi bhi haalat unhe alag nahi kar sakti…. Har baar…. Sacrificing is not cowardliness…. It is your strength…. Strength to face any situation!😳

Neha looked at her mother and understood they held double meaning in them… One for her life… And other which explained why her mom was still with her father…. But she also knew that even if she could accept her mother…. Accepting her father was out of question!

Mrs.Desai: Neha… Ajay ke taraf se main bhi tumse maafi maangti hoon… Lekin mera beta itna bura bhi nahi hai ki vo tumhe dhoka de!

Neha looked at her a little upset and hugging her mother-in-law said….

Neha: Mummy ji… I am sorry… Mujhe Ajay se pehle poori baat sunani chahiye thi…. Aage se aisa kabhi nahi hoga!

Boxer: (Hitting Ajay on his shoulder in a lighter mood) Wah Maamu… Good job… Tumne kabhi kisi case ko itni jaldi solve nahi ki jitni jaldi is pareshaani ko solve kar di! Neha se itnaaa darrrrrrrr?!!??! Ya pyaar?😳

Ajay: (Looking at Neha) Pyaar… (Other smiled hearing this) (He then said lightly) Waise maine kahan solve ki… Neha ki mummy ko Dipika aur Aryan laaye the… Unhe thanks kehena chahiye!

Aryan: (Shaking his head) Na na… Idea madam ji ka tha… Mera nahi…. I just tailed her!

Vishal: You always do that!😲 😆

He had said it spontaneously and lightly but enough louder for others to hear it…. They all smiled a little seeing Aryan's and Dipika's faces go red….☺️

Aryan: (Embarassed) Kya kaha?

Vishal: (Shurgging his shoulders and grinning) Kuch nahi… Bas…

Neha: (Going over to Dipika) Thanks…. Main…

Dipika: No need… Friends hote kis liye hain…. (Trying to make the atmosphere jovial) Lekin apni shakal dekhi hai… Aaj beauty parlor jaana tha lekin…. Ab chalein? (Seeing Mrs.Naik) Nai… Hum kal subah jaldi nikal jaate hain!😊

Mrs.Naik: Nai… (Smiling smoothed her hand over Neha's hair) Main chalti hoon… Happy to see her get settled…. Bas yahi kaafi hai!

Hugging Neha she looked at Mrs.Desai and said….

Mrs.Naik: Agar Neha se kuch bhi galti ho jaaye please use maaf kar dijiyega…

Mrs.Desai: Aapko ye sab kehene ki zaroorat hi nahi hai…. Maine ussse pehle bhi kaha tha, ab bhi keh rahi hoon… Neha mere ghar meri beti banke rahegi!

Mrs.Naik nodded her thanks…. She really didn't have the heart to leave Neha… After a long time she was seeing her… She wanted to talk so much with her daughter… But…❓

Ajay and Neha bent down for her blessings… Coming out of her disappointment she blessed them and started to leave…..

Dipika squeezed Neha's hand out of sight… Neha looked at her puzzled and Dipika mouthed what she had to do… Neha looked at her mother go and at Dipika and finally just as Mrs.Naik reached the door called out…

Neha: Maa…. (Going over to her) Aapki beti ki shaadi ke liye nahi rukogi?

Hearing this immediately some unknown happiness spread on Mrs.Naik's face… Smiling she hugged Neha and said…

Mrs.Naik: Maine socha tum mera aana pasand nahi karogi….

Neha: (Guilty😔) Maa… Maine kaha I am sorry…

Mrs.Naik: No… Not because of that…. Lekin…

Neha: Maa…. Please… Meri shaadi… Aapki ek louti beti ki shaadi hai!

Mrs.Naik finally nodded and said…

Mrs.Naik: Zaroor aaongi…😊

Mrs.Desai: Lekin kal to mehndi hai… Aapko hona zaroori hai… Isliye shaadi khatam hone tak aap yaheen rahe to achcha hoga!

Neha looked at her mother pleading her and finally Mrs.Naik agreed…

Neha: (With bitterness) Lekin vo aadmi…

Mrs.Naik: (Sternly) Neha he still is my husband and (Stressing) your father… Anyways he's gone abroad for a month….

Neha: To mere saath meri shaadi tak to ruk sakti hain naa phir?❓

Mrs.Naik: Haan… (Tears in her eyes) Maine socha tha ki jo sapne maine tumhare liye dekhe the… Shaadi ke liye… Vo main kabhi poora nahi kar sakoongi… Lekin ab… (To Dipika) Thank you Dipika!

Dipika just smiled shaking her head…. She hugged her response to thanks and the atmosphere became light and happy again….

Aryan looked at her with some renewed feeling….. She took care of everyone…. Be it office…. Be it home… She never forgot to see that everyone around her was happy…. Even him!😳

Mrs.Desai: (Remembering) Apse sirf ek request hai…. Ek rasam hai… Maine to uske baare me socha nahi tha…. Lekin jab aap yahan hai aur Ajay bhi…. (As others looked on puzzled) Shaadi se pehle dulha dulhan ke ghar aata hai aur dulhan ki maa uski aarti utaarti hai… Agar aap ab uski aarti utarti to….

Mrs.Naik looked at Neha and Ajay and nodded smiling….

Mrs.Naik: Aarti!?!?!

Dipika: Aayiye aunty… Main aapko lekar jaati hoon….

Saying Dipika took Mrs.Naik to get prepare the aarti plate…. Everyone around was happy talking to each other…. Suddenly remembering something Sandhya turned around and went inside the pooja ghar….. 😉❓

Vishal saw her go but thought of it nothing…..

After a while carrying the aarti plate Mrs.Naik came out and Sandhya was whispering something in her ears indicating her nose…. Mrs.Naik looked at her weirdly and then after a smile nodded…

Seeing Sandhya whisper something to Mrs.Naik Vishal got suspicious…. Something about nose?!?!? Hmm…. He tried to think why this sudden concern on Neha's mother…was. She never did anything without purpose…. He then remembered attending one Gujarati marriage and tried to remind about this ceremony of the groom going to the bride's house… Then suddenly he remembered… 🤔

As Mrs.Naik was just nearing Ajay…… He immediately leant forward and whispered hastily in Ajay's ears… Ajay looked at him surprised smiling and immediately covered his nose… 😲

Vishal looked at Sandhya meaningfully and smiling victoriously… Sandhya glared at him frustrated as others were surprised seeing Ajay cover his nose…

Aryan: Ajay! Naak kyun band ki hai tumne?❓

Ajay said something but since his hand was over his nose it was unintelligible…

Boxer: Kya ajay? Theek se bolo naa… Haath hatao pehle!


Saying he treid to remove Ajay's hand but he snapped back his hand over his nose and indicated Vishal to tell….

As Vishal explained the custom of the bride's mother pulling the groom's nose Sandhya inched towards Neha…. She indicated Ajay to her and Neha smiling shook her head… Sandhya again forced her and suppressing her grin she nodded…

She then casually glanced at him and kept watching Ajay….. Ajay just kept his glance over the aarti and his mother-in-law's hands…. Just as Neha's mother was finishing the final rotation of the aarti his glance fell on Neha who smiled ever so sweetly at him and threw him a flying kiss...

Now was that not enough? Surprised Ajay's hand slipped down from his nose and grabbing the chance….

Sandhya: Aunty jaldi!

Saying Sandhya herself grabbed Mrs.Naik's hands and grabbed Ajay's nose…

Seeing this everyone burst out laughing as Ajay rubbed his nose where it had red… They had pulled it harder than was meant!😆

Vishal: (Stunned😲) Hey! That's not fair… Maine dekha Neha ne…

Sandhya: (Going over to him) Kya dekha Mr.Great? Boliye boliye….

He looked at Neha who was trying her best not to laugh…. Now how could he say what Neha had done so openly?!!? Meaning he could tell it…. No problem for him…. But still….

Vishal: Nothing! Ajay joru ka ghulam banane se ab koi rok nahi sakta bas!

As everyone laughed around Sandhya said…

Sandhya: Mr. Great… Score board pe dyaan dijiye…. Pehli baazi hum ladki waalon ki hai….

Hearing Sandhya say this Vishal understood…

So madam had begun the race!👍🏼

Vishal: Ek hi baazi maari hai naa?Abhi bahut kuch baaki hai… Dekh lenge ki ladke waale jeetate hain ki ladki waale!

Sandhya: Zaroor… Dekhna hi to hai! Chilgose!

Vishal: Bandariya!

Saying they stared at each other not batting an eye lid….

The others smiled understanding that it was the usual groom side vs bride side challenge between them…. And with an already opppsite Vishal and Sandhya…. This was going to be fun!🥳

Well the marriage fever had begun!😃

Everyone left home after a small snack at Neha's home…

Dipika drove Neha and her mother to the near by shopping complex to buy accessories for Neha's mother for the marriage…

At the textile shop Neha and her mother argued on a saree which Neha liked for her mother but Mrs.Naik said it was not for her age….

Seeing this Dipika was vividly reminded of the scene few days ago where similarly a mother and daughter had argued over the saree!😳

She looked at Neha who insistingly took a saree for her mother and smiled… At least she had made up her mind to forgive her mother and accept her stance…. She had matured…

And after this she knew that no problem between Neha and Ajay would come again… Even if they did they could definitely sort it out on their own! 😊

The belief, faith, love, affection between them was restored to hundred percent! ⭐️⭐️

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Posted: 16 years ago
it was awesome.
i loved it.
hottie, hot, and handsome for vishal.
the dresses was just beautiful.
vishal angry at sandy for being late, but when he finds out what she has done. he will bring down the house.
thanks for the update.
👏
Edited by sam78 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey krithika,
I know m replying after ages...but kinda busy.
Anyways gonna write a looooongggg reply here.......
Firstly, Thanks for all the long and exciting updates....they make my day!!!! All of them r just FABULOUS,FANTASTIC,MIND_BLOWING....and all the other good adjectives in the dictionary.
Secondly, I know i have said this b4 but cant help saying it again...U shud b given an award for your writin skills....seriously....i mean it was jus gr8. M really short of words.
thirdly, ur description is sooooo good tht i can actually c everythn happenin in front of my eyes....especially all the aryan-dipika n vishal-sandy scenes.
Foruthly, I think i have bored you enuf wid my long response...so All i can c is plzzzzzz continue this FF forever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey diiiiiiiiiiiiii "AMAZING"
especially VISHAL &&& SANDHYA
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sam78

it was awesome.

i loved it.
hottie, hot, and handsome for vishal.
the dresses was just beautiful.
vishal angry at sandy for being late, but when he finds out what she has done. he will bring down the house.
thanks for the update.
👏

Thank you sam.... Nice to see you are not angry still for breaking your leg 😃
Hmm.... When Vishal does find out?!? Even I am thinking of how he would react 😉

Originally posted by: rockswizard

hey krithika,

I know m replying after ages...but kinda busy.
Anyways gonna write a looooongggg reply here.......
Firstly, Thanks for all the long and exciting updates....they make my day!!!! All of them r just FABULOUS,FANTASTIC,MIND_BLOWING....and all the other good adjectives in the dictionary.
Secondly, I know i have said this b4 but cant help saying it again...U shud b given an award for your writin skills....seriously....i mean it was jus gr8. M really short of words.
thirdly, ur description is sooooo good tht i can actually c everythn happenin in front of my eyes....especially all the aryan-dipika n vishal-sandy scenes.
Foruthly, I think i have bored you enuf wid my long response...so All i can c is plzzzzzz continue this FF forever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you so much for replying long Shruti.... And no.... I am not bored.... Would have liked to read even if you wrote more 😛
Thanks for all those adjectives..... 😳 As for award.... Your appreciations are in itself an award, I crave for.... Thank you once again 👏
Forever!?!? Wouldn't that actually bore you guys.... I am thinking that this two years now itself is really too much and hoping that you all don't get bored 😊

Originally posted by: legends

hey diiiiiiiiiiiiii "AMAZING"
especially VISHAL &&& SANDHYA

Thank you legendary legends 😳 More on the cards 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
FANTASTIC as usual........u have the knack of mesmerising ppl with ur ff............
And i agree with Shruti, PLEASE CONTINUE THIS FANFIC FOREVER!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey Krithu
it was fantabolous, Macdonolds and KFC
u know i always love ur work and always will as that really give a clear image of what is happening

I can clearly imagine the stuff

Neha and Ajay were so cute and i trully love how Vishal and Sandy come close

that was seriously so romantic.........

Sri and Dipika are ready to accept aryan............how cute

Even Dipika's mother don't have any argument

Vishal case is still unsolved as why he is ignoring sandy............surly a strong point more than loving dipika

and Aryan, he is surly getting intoxic by Dipika......

Me missin my Mami Haseena............she is not taking part in Neha's wedding and too my chachu is comming less.........

Dipika buying sweets, especially Jamun................oye hoye.....

Mrs.Naik came and neha forgive her was the best part...............it truly shows a daughter mother relation

Hats off to u girl

cont soon as i m loving it

luv ya

lolz
ana

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Posted: 16 years ago

greaat work di.⭐️hats off to u.👏

infact I have kept ur new name Ms. Perfectionist.😃
great great work⭐️ .fantabulous,mindblowing,apne Neha aur uski Mom ko mila diya ,love u di.🤗 🤗
a fantastic update containing lots of masti,emotion,love,a great lesson for all.😃⭐️ 👏
Sandy just looked up at him and smiled a little? Looking back down she tried her level best not to smile more? Because he might have not realized what he had said? But she had heard?. "Also"?
clear indications Vishu bhai ,abb accept kar bhi lo ki aapko Sandy se pyaar ho gaya hai.😉 😉

Always how much ever a person? A child is angry?. Mother's words have the strongest effect where relations were concerned? Because a mother truly feels what her child feels?. Bonding with blood is not so easily breakable? But very much easily understandable!

true said di,dil ko chu jayi ye baat.🤗

wanna lots of updates like this🤗
Edited by ruha - 16 years ago

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