A Night of Mistakes..Ary-ShyFF-update/p43 - Page 8

hey Ana

it is a very good story I really like it completely different from other FFs
I think I understand at the beginning who is who and what happened to who
but you are doing a great job 👏
really waiting for the next part

ok...firstly i will read it completly n then tell how was it...... 😊

hey its gr8
i woke up till 3 am in the night just to read it out..mind blasting work of imagination.... 😊

Originally posted by: maha_prakrti

Oie hoieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 😆

Shai phansi! Shai phansi! Shai phansi! Shai phansi! Shai phansi!

Imtehaaaaaaannnnnnn ho gayiiiii..... Intezaar kiiiiii 😳

Hmmmmmmm........ Lovely part yaar Ana.... Ab Shai ko khud manvane ke liye itniii koshish zaroori nahi hogi 😉

Oie...... Ajay ne notice kiya... Man he is so frank 😃 Hmm... Ana ek kaam karna future me naa let Karan talk to Ajay about Neha.... Baraabar ki ho jayegi 😉

Jaldi kar naa continue.... I want to see where Aru goes and what these girls have cooked up to make Shai even more jealous 😛

thanku kritu😳😳
yaar phans gai..............poori tarhan,..........u know our sweeto's plan is full prove😆
yaar abhi aa raha hai next part...............dekhna kaise larkiyan jealous karti hain shai ko😉

lolz
ana😳

Originally posted by: amail1601

Woww...awesome 👏 👏 👏

I think krithu has said everything...I'd just say ditto 😉

thanku ammu😳
kritu..........yaar copy right pe hamla ho gaya hai😆
ammu u should pay yaar😆😉

so sweet of u yaar

luv ya

lolz
ana😳

Originally posted by: emrald

Mission Misterious Girl 😉 😆
wah ky naam socha hai 😆 😆 😆
seriously i never thought ke neha and depis bechari shai ko aise fasaengi not bad 😛
well shai felling bit jelous reallllyyyy happy to hear that ab aayega maza
kya scene hai woh apne aap ko hi dhundhne ja rahi hai 😆
well humare ajay sahab bhi kuchh kam nahin hai jo koi nahin jan paya woh usne jan liya i am impressed and karu ke haal dekhne walle the when ajay told him that he knows every thing 😳 ye haal the bechare ke 😳 😳 😳 blush kar karke chehra lal par gaya 😉 😆
hey idea do aise mission shuru karo ek tmain shai ko nahin pata ke aryan kisse pyaar karta hai aur ek main dips ko nahin pata ke karu kisse pyar karta hai 😉 😛
well complications aur barenge aur maza dugna ho jayega aage aap writer hain aap mailk hain is ff ki its totally ur budhi and heart all the best 😛
well the update was DHAASU keep riting updates like this its rocking [:D/] [:D/] [:D/]
👏

hehe
thank u riya😳😳😳
yaar abhi apne app ko tau nahin dhoond paiye likin apne app main aryan ko dhoond liye.......😛.(kia line hai..............agay use karoon gii)😆😆😆
well agay dekhoo................kia kia store hai😉

lolz
ana😳

Originally posted by: maisoon

👏
great track going ana.......
shai ko jealous dekh ker maza aye gay 😆
karan worrires alot.......aryan and shai needs to sort out their feelings 😳 😳
so does the rest of the rockerz
dosroon ke liye cupids bana hai 😆 mugar apne pyaar ka hosh nahi......ghade 😆

thank u amna😳
hehehe..........amna righto yaar..............pukkay gadhe hain...............siwai apni jodi k😳

lolz
ana😳

Originally posted by: brid

hey Ana

it is a very good story I really like it completely different from other FFs
I think I understand at the beginning who is who and what happened to who
but you are doing a great job 👏
really waiting for the next part

hey mahi😳
thanx yaara😃
yaar u all are sharp and i know k u guys figure out k kaun kaun tha bur abhi tak suspence hai.............i will reveal that in some time too😆

luv to see u yaar

lolz
ana😳

Originally posted by: zeshan798

nice 😊

thank u Zeshan😃😃

lolz
ana😛

Originally posted by: smritisonkar

hey its gr8
i woke up till 3 am in the night just to read it out..mind blasting work of imagination.... 😊

hey smriti
thank u yaar😳😃
yaar itni raat ko.....................mere tau totay ur rahay hotay hain tab😆😆😆
imagination running wild but abh sree di ne kaha no such stuff tau control kia😆😆😉

lolz
ana😳