AsAn Luv will find a way(FF part 3-4 on pg 8 n 10) - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
#51
nice part Ramya....πŸ‘πŸ‘
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ohh!! datta kitna embarras krta rehta hai Ashu n anjie ko😳
n coincidences ki to jaise baarish hone lgi hai [cough cough].... writ of destiny!!!πŸ˜‰


Originally posted by: Panchi-fanRamya

Anjie ' Arre aap "sad" kyun ho gayye? Aap nai jaante honge lekin mere Dad aise hi hain. Unhe koi itni jaldi pasand nahi aata (sad ko hindi mein kya kehete hain?


"dukhi" kehte hai...πŸ˜†

best of luck !!! fr testsπŸ‘πŸΌ

uff!! itna busy schedule... still try to update soon... wil b waiting!!!😊



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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
nice part sweetu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! nd sad ko hindi mein dukhi kehte hain!!!!!!!!!lolzzπŸ˜†
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: saifeena143

Wow..πŸ‘great part kamya..⭐️

Datta toh datta, budhhe kaka bhi baaj nahi aaye..πŸ˜†
aur ashu toh hakla hi ban, nahi kuch nahi kuch nahi karta reh gaya..πŸ˜›
aue bechari Anjali toh confused hi hain..πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•
oh hoi...anjie ashu ke waha rukegi..aur ashu toh abhi se uaski eva hajir ho gaya..good. good😊
ab anjie ki kya request hain...πŸ˜‰
w8ing for more ramya....update soon...good job..πŸ‘πŸΌ

Tanx Di waise tryin to update. kaun type karega utna?πŸ₯±πŸ˜†

Tanx fr comentin

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Posted: 16 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: maha_prakrti

Ramya that was so so good! πŸ˜†Aryan ho ya Aashu... Uske aas pas jo bhi hote hain cupid hi khelte hain! 😳

So Anji staying with Aashu... hai hai... Bahar baarish ka bhi mousam hai.. Kaheen raat me kuch kuch! ☺️

Will be waiting eagerly Ramya... And all the best for your exams!

And I very well understand how Aryan never leaved your mind... Today I was working so intensely in the system and suddenly thought of the next part of for my FF and I started smiling all alone... My friend came and seeing my like this shook her head wierdly and went away! I am going mad with this SS team say! πŸ˜†

Tanx Di. hehe. to v r all in d final stage of d Bimari SS na?πŸ˜†

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: keep-smiling

nice part Ramya....πŸ‘πŸ‘
πŸ‘
ohh!! datta kitna embarras krta rehta hai Ashu n anjie ko😳
n coincidences ki to jaise baarish hone lgi hai [cough cough].... writ of destiny!!!πŸ˜‰



"dukhi" kehte hai...πŸ˜†

best of luck !!! fr testsπŸ‘πŸΌ

uff!! itna busy schedule... still try to update soon... wil b waiting!!!😊



πŸ˜†n ya Dukhi. wo mere dimaag mein aaya lekin I thot there is a new fashiond wor so asked😳

Tanx fr commentπŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sehar mehrotra

nice part sweetu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! nd sad ko hindi mein dukhi kehte hain!!!!!!!!!lolzzπŸ˜†

Tanx Dii. Hehe. Dukhi ke alava aur ek word hai. i m not rememberin it. khair choro. tanx fr commentin DI. Keep readin.😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
#57

Part - 3

(AN = Anjali, AS = Ashu)

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Anjie - ji par ek request hai aapse. Aap mujhse ek vachan se baat kijiyega.😊
As - Par aap b to mujhse aise hi baat karte hain.πŸ˜•
Datta irritated 😡- Arre simple solution hai. Ab se tum dono ek dusre se ek vachan se baat karo. Prob solved.
As - theek hai to sone chalein?
All together - chaloπŸ˜ƒ
(All sleep. AN in AS's room. AS in d hall n Datta in his own room. 'Tiz midnite now n dere iz roarin thunder n big bright lightening. N what else? 😳AN is scared!)
(She comes to d hall where AS is sleepin.)
AN - Ashutosh ?!? Ashutosh pls utho.
(He gets up)
AS πŸ₯±πŸ₯±πŸ₯±- Kya hai?😑😳OH Anjali aap, I mean Tum? Kya hua?
AN - woh actually woh, mujhe storms vagera se bohot darr lagta hai. Kya main tumhaare saath so sakti hun?
AS - Arre nai nai. Hum ek kaam karte hain, kamre mein chalet hai, warna tumhe neeche zameen pe sona parega. Chalo😊
(He pix up his bedsheet n pillow n sab n dey go in room. AN sleepin on d bed n phir AS,...Sleepin down of course πŸ˜†)

AS - gudnite.

AN - gudnite. 😊

(some 5 mins later the thunder gets louder n AN more scared πŸ˜›)
AN - Ashutosh tum so gayye ho?
AS - nai kyun kya hua?😲
AN - wo, mujhe bohot dar lag raha hai. Kya tum, kya tum pls yahaan bed pea a sakte ho? Bura mat maan na. Didi b aise hi karti thi...please?
AS - well tumhe itna dar lagta hai?😊
(Ashu comes on bed n now both r sleepin on bed. Don't worry, double bed hai, girr nai jaayenge πŸ˜†)

AS - now better?

AN - ya a li'l bit. (Another biiiig thunder.)

AN - aaaah.

(AS sees that n smiles.)

AS - r u that scared?

(AN nodds like a baby)

AS - wanna come into my arms?

AN - ?!! u don't mind?😳

AS - naah.

( he opens his arms n she comes in 😳)
(now its like AS 1 hand den AN n den AS another hand. Aay haay feelin each others heart beat 😳. After an hour-)
AN - Aaah aah aaaaah...
AS wakes up - kya hua An.j..li (smiles lukin @her n .... wakes her up πŸ˜›)πŸ˜†
AS - bura sapna? (asks softly smiling)
(AN like a baby, nodds in no.)
AS - phir ???!!!???
AN like a kid - Bohot bohot bura sapna.
(awww he jus again smiles broadly @ her childish bhaviour. Den however she sleeps in his arms n hez still awake)

(after some time wen hez still awake, she again shouts n jag jaati hai n hugs him tightly almost cryin. Her eyes closed like she jus saw a ghost. {lekin ghost???wahaan AS ke alava aur koi b nai tha πŸ˜›} hez surprised fr a moment n den holds her also but lightly n smiling)

AS - ab kya hua?

AN - phir se wo hi sapna aaya tha

(he jus caresses her hair n pats lightly like a mom puts her baby to sleep.{ye kya? Pyaar ke chakkar mein AS mom ban gayye?πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†} she sleeps finally never to wake up again { arre mera matlab, never to wake up again that night, poori baat suna kijiye} )
AS awake n starin @ her luvinly. Lukin @ her talking 2 himself - Tumhe pataa hai, khoobsurat dikhne ki b koi had hoti hai. Par tum us had ko paar kar chuki ho iss liye mujhe tumse,...PYAAR ho gayya hai. U made me go crazy fr some1 fr d 1st time. jus too butiful.😳😳😳

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hope it was gud. pls comment. wow i typed 3 pgs of my buk today. 3 pgs likhe hain aap log comment nai karoge to saari mehnat mitti mein mill jaayegiπŸ˜† will try to get my mood n will update regularly. pls read n commen

Luv u all,

Ramya


Edited by Panchi-fanRamya - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58

Awwwwwwwww......................

Ashutosh to =😳

2 gud yaar!!!!!!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ

Apna Ashutosh to pyaar ke chakkar main kuch bhi karega!!!!!!!!!! ❀️Now I am sure!!!!!!!!!πŸ€ͺ

I can almost imagine Anjali sleeping in his arms, yaar!!!!!!!!!!πŸ˜†

Keep it up girl!πŸ‘πŸΌ

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wowwwwwww !!!! feeling soooo happy dat u continued !!!!!
plz plz update deti rehna...
n dis one ws jst "ooooo...llllaaaa.....llllaaaa....."
u knw d character of him in ss in shaque r different...
n he as ashu is jus 2 nice !!

n cough cough... dey came 2 "ek vachan" 😳... d first step 2wards ❀️
n anjali is shoo shwet!!! scared of thunder n dream ghosts...!!
n ashu is sooooooo caring... like a mom....
anjali ki to mom bi ni hai.. 😭... may b ashu understood dat....
n nw u Ramya.... i wud call ur writing style sooo naughty n simply sweet n awesome....

AN sleepin on d bed n phir AS,...Sleepin down of course πŸ˜†)
Ashu comes on bed n now both r sleepin on bed. Don't worry, double bed hai, girr nai jaayenge
arre mera matlab, never to wake up again that night, poori baat suna kijiye} )

girl u knw how 2 mix ❀️ n fun...
enjoyed dis awesme part !!!!!! πŸ‘ πŸ‘
luvely.... πŸ‘ πŸ‘
keep writing....
saare 29 pages k liye we wil be waitin....!!!!
update soon... 😍

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Panchi-fanRamya

Tanx Di. hehe. to v r all in d final stage of d Bimari SS na?πŸ˜†

Exactly.... Final stage... Isliye iska koi ilaaj bhi nahi hai... Should be carefulll.... Contagious hai πŸ˜ƒ

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