Compassion- One step toward endless happiness. A Bharat- Mandavi OS

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Riya

@Riya_16

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Posted: 9 years ago

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mandy001

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Posted: 9 years ago

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I nvr thought abt mandy's sacrifice. I used to think that she ws with her hubby atleast unlike urmi. But u made me realize what sacrifice she did. She was so mature nd humble with her deeds. Simply loved her character.

How can i forget bharat. He was a loving hubby bt was very reserved. I feel these persons actually show their love nd care when time actually demands. These ppl cant show how much they love but they just do the things when they actually have to.

U r amazing in expressing each and every emotions. No one can beat u in ur writing style m sure. U nvr rush with character but explain very minor things which connect ur readers with the story.

Amazing piece of work. Love u nd thank u for writing ds on my special demand. Am feeling very special.

Love

Swati

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NONIE

@Nonie12345

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Posted: 9 years ago

Amazing OS Riya👏

You have described mandavi's thoughts,emotions and struggle very well⭐️

the scene between bharat and mahdavi was very beautiful❤️

laksmila parts were nice😊

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Danceegirl92

@Danceegirl92

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Posted: 9 years ago

Such a lovely post, brought a smile to my face before I watch tonight's episode

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Shivam...

@Shivam...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Absolutely Lovely to read

Its an overdose of Emotions of me , it had everything , Love , compassion , happiness , pain , admiration , literally everything

Although u didnt include Ram- Sita , i never felt their void in this story , Bharma and Lakshmila Rocked

The kind of different relationship both couples had , to see that in one story , hats off to you

The best thing was that each one knew what the other wanted

You have given me loads of inspiration to continue my SS in a better way

Thanks and will always want to read more and more

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Anokhisharma

@Anokhisharma

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Posted: 9 years ago

This is the best bharma fic I have read soo far
Rii di 🤗

Lakshmila were ❤️

Bharma confession was sooo gud

Rii di write more plzzz

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natali1999

@natali1999

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome os. Loved lakshmila parts as well as Bhama. One of the best I have read. PLEASE do write more.

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LakshMe

@Milaksh

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Milaksh
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Sorry dear..was little busy yesterday...couldn't review..

This is such a wonderful work👏👏

Bharma scenes were very good😃

Mandavi's initial struggle was nicely captured here..😳

And no doubt Lakshmila ❤️ always...very cute they were...😃😉

Write more dear😳

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 9 years ago

Ri... 🤗
It's awesome dear..
Beautifully written..
❤️

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Jairamji

@Jairamji

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Your writing has the flowing visual quality which makes the reader imagine the scene in front of thier eyes . I was glued to the story and wished they showed us scenes like this.. Please write more and pm me please!

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