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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 2

As Sita entered the Pushpa Vatika along with Urmila, all of the flowers glowed with a mellow aura. Sita looked calm and peaceful, as always, but she was nervous. Her father, Rajrishi Janak, had announced her swayamvar in the whole Aryavart and had invited all of the kings and crown princes who were eligible. Even though her voice had carried her words of approval, her heart was saying the opposite. "But, I can not disappoint my father for a man I don't know," Sita thought, "And whatever has to happen will happen. Gauri maa will not disappoint me."

"Didi, we have arrived. Now, please sing Maa's aarti in your melodious voice. I am eager to hear it," Urmila pleaded.

"Of course, dear. I have to sing an aarti in the temple, right? Would I sing one in the cowshed!" Urmila laughed. "Okay, let me sing, Urmila, don't distract me," and Sita started sing the Goddess' praises in a beautiful voice.

Jai jai giribarraaj kishori |
Jai mahesh mukh chand chakori ||
Jai gajbadan shdaanan maataa |
Jagat janani daamini duti gaataa ||

Nahin tav aadi madhya avsaanaa |
Amit prabhaau bedu nahin jaanaa ||
Bhav bhav bibhav parabhav kaarini |
Bisva bimohani svabas bihaarini ||

Patidevataa sutiya mahun maatu pratham tav rekh |
Mahima amit na sakahi kahi sahas saaradaa sesh
Sevat tohi sulabh phal chari | Bardaayani puraari piyaari ||

Debi pooji pada kamal tumhaare |
Sur nar muni sab hohi sukhaare ||
More manorathu jaanahu nike ||
Basahu Sada Ur Pur Sabhee Ken |
Keenhe-u Pragat Na Kaaran Teheen |
Basahu kahi charan gahe baidehi ||

Jai jai giribarraaj kishori |
Jai mahesh mukh chand chakori ||
Jai gajbadan shdaanan maataa |
Jagat janani daamini duti gaataa ||

"Today, didi's aarti has a different magic to it. Instead of the usual happy tone, didi is singing in a sad and hopeful tone. Maa, please fulfil didi's wishes and always keep her beautiful smile on her face,' Urmila prayed.

...

Lakshman, walk faster, we have to go to the temple soon!" Ram said as he walked towards the temple.

"Bhaiya, what happened," Lakshman asked with a smile, "You look very eager to go to the temple today."

"There's nothing, Lakshman, we need to go to Gurudev after this, that's why. Now, hurry!"

"Fine, bhaiya, I'm coming!"

As Ram placed his feet on the first step, a very beautiful voice hit him, like the rolling waves of the ocean. "Bhaiya, this voice is heavenly! I want to know who is singing this soulful aarti."

"Then, Lakshman, let's go find out," and Ram and Lakshman went to find out the identity of the mysterious woman with bated breath.
Edited by shabari14 - 9 years ago
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Chapter 3

As Ram climbed up the last step, the crowd parted, revealing the backs of two women. "Bhaiya, who do you think sang the aarti," Lakshman said as he inspected the two ladies.

"Dear brother, the aarti must have been sang by the lady with the thali. Use your brain sometimes!"

Lakshman pouted upon hearing this, "Am I that dumb, Bhaiya? I meant what is the lady's name."

"Well, you can go find out. I will pay my respects to Maa Gauri.' And saying this Ram walked towards the idol, but he was suddenly stopped in his tracks. Because the two ladies had turned, revealing themselves to be princesses because of their royal garb. "Bhaiya, the lady who sang the aarti must be Princess Sita."

"How do you know that, Lakshman," Ram said in a daze.

"Because you have been staring at the princess for quite sometime now, Bhaiya!" Lakshman said with a smirk.

Ram suddenly become conscious about his state and gave Lakshman fake glare, making Lakshman chuckle.

"We have been here for so long, but we haven't taken Maa Gauri's blessings! Let's go, Lakshman!" And Ram and Lakshman both walked with deliberate steps towards their destiny.

...

"Let's go, Sita didi, the puja is over, and we need to go back to the palace."

"Urmila, what's the hurry, my child? Time spent with the Gods is time well spent, right?" Urmila nodded, " But yes, we do need to go back to the palace quickly." So, let's go."

As they turned around to leave the temple, they came face to face with two handsome, young men. One of the men was fair and was giving the other man a naughty look. The other man was dark like rain-filled clouds and divinely handsome. And he was staring at her! "Didi, I think I know who they are," Urmila whispered.

"Who is it, dear?" Sita said, while blushing furiously.

"The fair one is Sumitranandan Lakshman, di, and the dusky man is Raghunandan Ram, the man of your dreams." Sita's eyes became as wide as the ocean itself, and her smile became her largest one yet.

"Really?" Sita barely whispered, as she took in Ram's handsome form.

"Yes di, if he is here, that means he is here for the swayamvar. Di, your dreams are going to turn into reality!"




Edited by shabari14 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Amazing Gowri 👏👏
Your love for Siya-Ram is so obvious in this ❤️
Update jaldi, okay?
I can't wait.

And the Sita-Ram romance is so divine You have captured the entire aspect of it :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
nice parts. Really come out well. Keep writing more.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you so much, guys! I will post today or tomorrow, so you will have your update!
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Beautifully written gowri
It is lovely to recall back those moments ...
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Awesome updates, Gowri 😊
The sisters and brothers bonding was lovely 😃
Ram Sita's first encounter...hayeee, it was divine 🤗
Waiting for the next part 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 4

Ram, after sudden stops and chuckling from Lakshman, finally reached the idol. He uttered-

Ya devi sarvabhuteshu vishnu-mayeti samstita
Namas tasyai, namas tasyai, namas tasyai namo namah

When he finished, he turned around, only to meet the eyes of the kind princess. For a moment, unseen by human eyes, the Lord and the Mother revealed their cosmic form and united once again.

"So this is Rajkumari Sita, my Lakshmi. The lady who that came as a ray of hope to the people of Mithila and my horse," Ram thought with a smile," Ram has finally met his Ramaa."

"This is Raghunandan Shri Ram, my dear Lord. I was like a withering lotus flower without the warm Sun. You are finally here, Swami."

"Pranaam, Janaknandini."

"Pranaam, Rajkumar. I have heard a lot about you. I just want to say thanks for saving the horse from a death that it shouldn't have had to face."

"There is nothing special about this, Rajkumari. Animals are also created by God, so in that case, they are like our brothers and sisters. And Choti Rajkumari, wouldn't you protect your sister?"

"Of course I would," Urmila retorted," I love Sita didi more than my life."

"Urmila, of course you would. Now calm down and behave," Sita turned to Ram," Please forgive my sister, she is a little childish and is overprotective.'

"It is alright. I am used to such behavior." Ram glanced at Lakshman, making Lakshman turn completely red and the sisters laugh. "And, Janakputri, thank you for treating the horse. I was worried for him because he had to run for such a long distance. But you took care of him. Thank you."

"Rajkumar, you had just told me that you had done nothing special when you saved the horse, so how come my deed became praiseworthy?" Ram was left speechless. "That's why, don't thank me."

"Didi, I am sorry to interrupt, but have you forgotten that Maa had asked us to return to the palace as soon as possible.'

"Oh, I had forgotten. Thank you for the lovely conversation, Rajkumar, but we have to leave now. Pranaam, Rajkumaron"

"Pranaam, Rajkumariyon. It was a pleasure meeting the both of you."

And Sita left the temple with her sister, her heart colored with Ram's divine love.

"Bhaiya, I have a question."

Ram caught a last glimpse of Sita, before turning to his brother, "Tell me, Lakshman, why are you hesitating to ask your brother."

"Can I call Devi Sita... Bhabhi?"

"Lakshman!" And Lakshman ran, leaving Ram smiling to himself.

"Yes Lakshman, you can..."




Edited by shabari14 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Siya-Ram
Aww Urmi loves her Sita Didi ❤️ And Lakshman loves his Ram Bhaiya ❤️
And natkhat Lakshman 😆😆

My favourite lines:
"Bhaiya, I have a question."

Ram caught a last glimpse of Sita, before turning to his brother, "Tell me, Lakshman, why are you hesitating to ask your brother."

"Can I call Devi Sita... Bhabhi?"

"Lakshman!" And Lakshman ran, leaving Ram smiling to himself.
🤣
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Kanna!!🤗 I read all the 4 chapters together!😃 Your connect to Ram-Sita-Lakshman is so beautiful!😳 And so is your love for Shri Ram. I loved how Maharishi Vishwamitra spoke about the various names of Maa Sita. And Ram and his Ramaa!!❤️ In Chp 4,the two taking their cosmic forms!❤️ Sita-Ram's meeting was beautiful!😳 But the best part was Natkhat Lakshman!😆
Ram's line, "Its alright.I am used to such behaviour." And he glanced at Lakshman who turned completely red.😆 It was so cute!😆 Urmila and Lakshman are so alike.😃 And then lakshman running away after teasing his brother.😆 I am loving Lakshman the most here!!😛 Please keep this essence alive.😳

Update Soon Kanna!!😉

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