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JAYASHREE

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Posted: 9 years ago

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On the lap of sorrow

Dharma laid his head

Can we ever be separated

He asked

His voice comforting

Don't leave he implored

One last time His fingers clung.

Three hermits on the threshold stood

Seeking blessings with palms folded

The court stood in silence

Their heads bent

Every eyes with tears did flood

A tale that will be told and retold

And even if it was for greater good

There will not be a single soul

Who will not shed a tear

Each time this story is narrated.

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Justlikethat1

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Aww.. the first 2 lines are brilliance ⭐️ haven't watched the episode yet but can see how it would have gone. Thanks Jaya

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JAYASHREE

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Justlikethat1
Aww.. the first 2 lines are brilliance ⭐️ haven't watched the episode yet but can see how it would have gone. Thanks Jaya

You will love that scene

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Thank u dear

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avalonhigh1234

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Posted: 9 years ago

#4

Beautiful lines once again Jayashri. Every word touches the heart with its truth and simplicity.

Savita

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attubaby

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Posted: 9 years ago

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beautifully written Jaya..

Loved Dashrath's scene and his simple questions dat he asked to all three of them. Dashrath-Ram relation is beautifully presented.

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