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Posted: 9 years ago
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He looked towards her,

His gaze softened,

From the shimmer of the lamp,

Her face illuminated,

A breeze gently flowed,

Wanting to touch the divine.

The flame flickered.

She drew in a breath,

Her palms she raised.

The glow to protect,

In a swift

Kneeling beside her

Gently his palms

Around hers melted.

With tenderness they watched

As the soft flame

Like their love

Kindled

Enlivened

Deepened

and became sublime.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is Beautiful ...😳
You should write more often .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jaya it is very beautiful. I could envision when i read each line. Do write more often.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
nicely written👏

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the poem Jaya. The words were quite evocative .They managed to create a beautiful picture with their sheer power.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you ms.nayak and Avalon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jayashree...this is indeed very divine! U have shaped it up so beautifully.⭐️ Kuddos! 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful poem di
Simple and lucid
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waaahhh Kya baat hai yaar..Too good @jayvenk😳

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