*~*My SKR SCENE GALLERY*~* SIRA THE ETERNAL NOTE PG-3

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Hii guys...

I am Shweta and i am a big fan of siya ke ram serial...

And i love sita ram our original god...

I always worship them...

I love vishnuji and mahalaxmi ji...

And so does i love our ashish and madirakshi...

They are eternal...

So here i m presenting my os gallery on them and i will add little bit vishnu ji and mahalaxmi ji and laxmila also...

This gallery presented the one episode i mran single part for one os...


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1. Madirakshi Mundle as Devi Sita & Goddess Mahalaxmi...


2.Ashish Sharma as Shri Ram and Narayan Vishnu

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Hii everyone this is Shweta...

I am a silent reader in this forum..

I didn't thought that we guys should write a imaginary story on our gods but akyabiggestfan and sumedha93 they write the os and it gives us the new path.. they were the best writer till far I read a mythological stories... and also they give me the inspiration to write on sira... and also not to forget our romantic girl TOTAL-ROMANTIC. What shoul I say about her... I am just speechless. She is the superb... her imagination on sira small scenes were giving gitters in me.. you are total a rock star babes...

Ok important note

Guys yeh os ka part thoda serial wale part se liya hoga kuch dialogue and scenes siya ke ram serial ke honge so please gussa mat ho jaye ga..

If I hurt anyone please tell me then I will remove this...

And also guys please bear my mistake

So now I presented you a first scene in this gallery..

OS#1
SCENE # 1

PRATHAM BHET

Sita is singing the arti of gauri maa. She is sing the last line of arti

Jai jai girivar raj kishori...
Jai Mahesh much chandra chakori..
Jai..

(Guys I don't have full lyrics of this song so maine yeh line hi use ki hain)

But before she could continue the arti she feels an unknown feeling in her heart. She feels like today her life goanna change as something special going to happened today. She turned and sees the entrance but couldn't see anything so she turned toward towards gauri maa and just doing her arti.

Meanwhile Shri Ram comes gauri maa temple with his brother to worship gauri maa but both stopped in their tracks as they heard sita's melodies voice and ram just lost in her voice and says

Ram: laxman tumne yeh madhur swar sune?

Laxman: haan bhaiya aisa lag raha hain mano swayam brahma lok se ma saraswati padhari hain mandir main mata gauri ki arti ke liye.

Ram: haan chalo mandir main chalte hain or dekhte hain yeh kiske swar hain

Laxman: ji bhaiya..

Saying these both started climbing the stairs and on the other hand feeling someone steps sita again looked towards that direction but she didn't see anyone and she gets disappointed and just moving her gaze away from the stairs she sees someone shadow and looks ton that direction and sees ram.

On the other hand ram also feels the same thing that something new goanna happened in his life but suddenly he feels someone gaze and looked towards that direction and sees one lady is standing there with the arti thal and looked her specially her eyes and got lost in them and slowly he is coming towards her.

Sita also looked ram specially his eyes and lost in him.

Background music

Siya ram jai jai ram ram,
siya ram ram jai jai ram...

Both were looking each other and there heart recognized each other and silently there heart were talking with each other

Sita(heart): swami kaha the aap itne dino se? aapko gyat bhi hain aapki laxmi aapke bina kitni adhoori thi...

Ram(heart): tumhe kya lagta hain priye main tumse yu bichadkar kush raha hoo? Main bhi pal pal tumhare liye bahut tadpa hoon. Main yahi sochta tha ki kabh who din aayega jabh main tumse apni pran priya se milunga. Abh dekho woh din bhi aa gaya.

Both smile painfully and there heart is talking with each other. Suddenly laxman also comes there and sees ram and sita and smile and his heart thinks

Laxman(heart p.o.v.): akhirkar meri mata atah mere prabhu ka milan ho hi gaya.

He smiles and he bowed with devotion seeing them together and suddenly urmila turned and sees sita and then sees ram and laxman and gets confused so she goes towards them says

Urmila: didi

Sita and ram come out from there thought and sita looks urmila and other sisters also turned when they heard urmila voice and looked sita then ram and laxman and sita says

Sita: tum kuch keh rahi thi?

Before urmila could say anything laxman says


Laxman: devi pehechana aapne mujhe? Main laxman. Wahi jo aapse guru vishwamitra ke ashram main mila tha.

Sita looked at him and laxman continues

Laxman: yaad hain who ashmed yug wala ghoda jise mere bhai ne bachaya tha or aapne unse milne ki iccha prakat ki thi


Hearing this sita recalled her words

FLASHBACK-----

Sita: meri badi iccha thi aapke bhaiya se milne ki parantu niyati ne abhi hamara milna tai nahi kiya. Shayad bhavishya main aapke bade bhaiya se milne ka..

FLASHBACK ENDS-----

Laxman: devi yehi hain mere ram bhaiya jinhone ashvamed gode(horse) ki bali roki, jinhone tadka ka vadh kiya, marich ka hirdey(heart) parivartit kiya athva subahu ka bhi vadh kiya aur to aur inhone mata ahilya ka uddhar kiya tha..

Hearing this sita looked ram and just staring her with a little shy smile and ram just lost in her and his heart feeling happy.

Laxman: bhaiya yeh wohi mithila ki rajkumari hain jinhone ashwa ko rok ke usko paani pilaya or ashva ke ghav ka upchar kiya. Bhaiya yeh vahi hain jinki vajah se gurudev ke ashram vasio main vishwas jagah tha jo punah hasne lage the or humne inke haat ke bane hue swadisht bhojan ka sevan kiya tha.

Hearing this ram smiles and says

Ram: hame aapse milkar badi prasanta hui.

Sita: main ashram se lautne ke baad bahut chintit thi

She stopped and looked ram who is smiling at her and urmila hearing this give teasing smile to sita she continues

Sita: sabhi ke liye.

Urmila: jabh tak aapki tadka se yudh jitney ki khabar nahi mili didi bahut pareshan thi.

She says this and sita feeling shy and ram is admiring her and urmila introduce herself

Urmila: aapko sita didi ki choti behen urmila ka pranam.

Ram also greet her then he and laxman greet sita and ram says

Ram: yeh hamara kartavya(duty) hain dharm ki jeet surakshit(secure) karna

Then janak enters and they talk and then sita turned towards gauri ma and bowed her head in front of her then she gives the arti to everyone and then she comes towards ram and says

Sita: arti

Siya..ram...jai..jai..ram plays

And ram took the arti then sita placed in front of gauri ma then she goes with her pitaji but hs eturned to looked ram and ram also sees her and both smiles and then sita goes from there...


THE END

I know guys this is crap... this is the first time something I wrote on mythological and that to our beloved god siya and ram. I seriously loved them and specially there love story and also loved vishnuji and mahalaxmiji... hope you liked it... please ignore spelling errors and grammatical mistake and also pere my shudh hindi... and guys if you think ki yeh galat hain isme serial ke scenes add karna then tell me... I will remove it...but gus mujhe first os main thoda dikhana tha... mera second os poora fictional hoga...

And those who want pm please add me or tell me I will add you...





Edited by ll_megha_ll - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi shweta
nice os
tum ne toh mujhae SiRa ki pheli mulakat yaa diladi😃
come up with more os😃
this is manas😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sugunmanas

hi shweta
nice os
tum ne toh mujhae SiRa ki pheli mulakat yaa diladi😃
come up with more os😃
this is manas😊


Thank you so much for your reply...
You are the first one who like my os...
I don't think that others like my os because i got only one comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful dear
Awesome OS 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely. continue soon. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Shweta🤗
Welcome to the forum dear.

Such a beautiful thread!!!!

And the first OS...loved it.

What a beautiful piece of writing...fantastic.

Please do write more.

And do PM me.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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jai siya ram!!!
shweata loved it !
prabhu k kripa barasti rhe sabpe!😳
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