Two shots- Of shadows and reflections pt1 P.1 updated

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daydreamers

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: sugunmanas

On a serious note I c writing as a process... Jaha perfection hota nahi hai.. U can only improve day by day... Isliye budding describes it well... 😳

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gyaan ki devi app ko pranam😃
Tum humare serial ki Siya ki tarah sound kyu kar rahi ho😲😲😲

On a different note my name means Ganga and my birth name is janaki 😆

Iss intensity ko samajh balikey... 😆

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daydreamers

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha
Awesome :)

Thank u 😊

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daydreamers

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: shruthiravi
Beautiful DD continue.

It feels so great when something like this comes from you shruthi... 😳

Thank u so much...

Pata ni what I wrote 😆

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shruthiravi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Your writing was good dear and to be frank easy for me because there was no hindi written in English. I find it a little difficult to read that 😆

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daydreamers

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: shruthiravi
Your writing was good dear and to be frank easy for me because there was no hindi written in English. I find it a little difficult to read that 😆

Ohhh so u r a hindi reader phobic 😆

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gmgi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

DD I don't know what to say. It is marvelous . I read an OS by Shruthy yesterday. It made me really emotional. I read in your reply that u have the same scene in yr mind and will write differently. It is the same but really different.

I felt her pain in each of your lines that I am still teary eyed. Please never stop writing.

On a lighter note I am also a hindi reader phobic.

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daydreamers

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: gmgi
DD I don't know what to say. It is marvelous . I read an OS by Shruthy yesterday. It made me really emotional. I read in your reply that u have the same scene in yr mind and will write differently. It is the same but really different.
I felt her pain in each of your lines that I am still teary eyed. Please never stop writing.
On a lighter note I am also a hindi reader phobic.

Thank you geena... It means a lot... 😳

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Ankita.11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

OMG!!You made me emotional!😭

kudos for potraying urmila's feelings so beautifully 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Ankita.11
OMG!!You made me emotional!😭
kudos for potraying urmila's feelings so beautifully 😊

Thank you for dropping by Ankita...

Means a lot... ❤️ se 😊

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avalonhigh1234

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Hi Janhavi, thanks for the p.m .Loved the beginning. Pls keep on updating.

The last few lines of part1 formed the core .Both the sisters Sita and Urmila choose the greater good, didn't they? Sita by accompanying her husband and thus supporting him in his mission to destroy Ravan irrespective of personal gain, probably knowing that her actions would have such far reaching consequences .Urmila by staying back took care of a family broken and devastated by the storm.

Savita

P.s like Shruthi and gmgi I also find it a little unnerving to read hindi in English.

Edited by avalonhigh1234 - 9 years ago