SKR OS - The first cena

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Hello everyone,

Encouraged by comments on my first SKR OS I am here with another one. Yesterday we saw Sunayna planning to invite Ram for lunch/dinner in the palace. This scene is written in reference with the same. Comments and suggestions welcome. 😊

OS - The first cena (dinner)

Everyone was present in the dining hall; they just finished the dinner and were having sweet dish. Ram and Sita were stealing glances as often as they could. "Maharaj, Rishi Yagyaval padhare hai, vivaah ke vishay main kuch vartalaap kerne hetu," said a messenger.

Janak looked at Sunayna, his brother and Rishi Vishwamitra. "Hum sab abhi aate hai," He replied. Elders of the royal family along with Rishi Vishwamitra left the hall almost immediately. The three sisters caught Ram and Sita in an eye lock and decided to leave them alone.

"Rajkumar Laxman hum logo ko bhi chalna chahiye," Urmila said.

"Parantu hum waha bado ke beech main kya kerenge."

"Maine kaha na hume chalna chahiye," she said indicating to Ram and Sita.

"Haan avashya, humari koi aavashakta pad sakti hai," he replied taking the hint. The four left the hall leaving Ram and Sita alone.

The two were so lost in each other that they were absolutely oblivious to their surroundings. Ram was the first one to notice that they were all alone in the hall. "Ye sara bhojan aapne swayam banaya ?" he asked.

"Jee, maa aur chotti maa ki sahayata se."

"Per aapne itni takleef kyun ki." By now Ram got up from his place and was heading towards Sita.

"Iss mai takleef kaisi ye toh mera saubhagya hai. Waise bhi mujhay bhojan banana pasand hai."

"Aur mujhay aapke haath ka bana bhojan pasand hai." Sita smiled shyly. "Mere saath aaiye."

"Per kaha."

"Aaiye toh." Ram made her sit and picked a plate and started serving food.

"Yuvraj ye aap kya ker rahe hai."

"Aapko bhojan kera raha hun."

"Parantu aap ye... iski koi avashakta nahi hai," she felt embarrassed. Crowned prince of Ayodhya serving her dinner was something she never imagined in her wildest dream.

"Yadi aapko mujhy bhojan karaane ka sukh praapt kerne ka adhikaar hai toh mujyhy bhi ye sukh praapt kerne ka adhikaar hona chahiye," he said keeping the plate in front of her. Sita's eyes gleamed with tears of happiness. She was falling deeper and deeper in love with her would be husband, with his simplicity and elegance. "Bhojan grahan kariye Sita." Sita took the first bite, food never tasted any better.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumedha93


"Rajkumar Laxman hum logo ko bhi chalna chahiye," Urmila said.

"Parantu hum waha bado ke beech main kya kerenge."

"Maine kaha na hume chalna chahiye," she said indicating to Ram and Sita.

"Haan avashya, humari koi aavashakta pad sakti hai," he replied taking the hint. The four left the hall leaving Ram and Sita alone.



Thanks for writing this part.
I am dieing to read some #Lakshmila stories here bt no one is writing !
Bt atleast , I got to see some Bits here .
Ohh Dear , You wrote it so beautifully , In a very diplomatic way !
Congrats to that ! Do write more ! #MakesMeHappy

Love,
Sruthi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wonderful. Thank you for the OS👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely os
loved it
loll Lakshman get hints later
loved SiyaRam moments

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really nice...laxmila pe bhi os likh do plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😳 sooo beautifully written sumedha
keep it up 👏
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Originally posted by: DilMereSuntaNhi


Thanks for writing this part.
I am dieing to read some #Lakshmila stories here bt no one is writing !
Bt atleast , I got to see some Bits here .
Ohh Dear , You wrote it so beautifully , In a very diplomatic way !
Congrats to that ! Do write more ! #MakesMeHappy

Love,
Sruthi


I am glad that you liked it 😊
About Laxman Urmila scenes I can't promise anything but let their scenes begin. My inspiration comes from actors, Ashish Madi are so good together that I was forced to write their scenes.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumedha93


I am glad that you liked it 😊
About Laxman Urmila scenes I can't promise anything but let their scenes begin. My inspiration comes from actors, Ashish Madi are so good together that I was forced to write their scenes.


I am sure , they won't disappoint you.
Waiting to see you write about #lakshkila
Thanks for the pm aswell ! #LOvE
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's too beautiful.
Loved it.

Please do write more and try to write long post.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Krishna_Sourav

lovely os

loved it
loll Lakshman get hints later
loved SiyaRam moments


There is always one person who gets hints later 😉

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