Mishaan SS.YOU COMPLETE ME( last ,part, page-9 udated 18/4

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Sheen97

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Posted: 6 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: rbb1
Another great update, I like how their relationship has changed, Mishti is so sweet, thank you for the update

Thank you

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Sheen97

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Posted: 6 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: sreevijayan
Very emotional update dear...i loved it soo much...

Thank you 😛

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pranurosid

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Posted: 6 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: sheen97

Thank you
Hope u like end and epilogue

Definitely..So when r u going to update? 😃

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Sheen97

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Posted: 6 years ago

#54

part- 5

2 am

Its never been so late.Ruhaan always used to come back at home by 10 but today he was way beyond the limit

Mishti was walking to and fro the hallway looking at the door , then at clock

Radhika woke up to fill her jug of water, saw mishti tensed

Radhika: Mishti baacha, tu ab soi nai, so ja baacha Ruhaan aa jayega kai phas gaya hoga

Mishti: nai dadi vo kabhi itna late nai hota hai atleast msg tu kar deta hai pata nai kaha hai, kuch khaya bhi ya nai . Phone bhi band aa rahe hai

Radhika walks away murmuring

Asa tu saara din ladte hai aur ab wait kar rahi hai shaadi kyu nai kar lete

Mishti didnt know when she fell asleep on sofa waiting for him, she only knows that she waited whole night he didnt come

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Next morning

Mishti was asleep on sofa and every one was talking muffled voice as they didnt want to disturb mishti

Radhika: pari baacha ek baar Ruhaan ko call tu kar kal raat se ghar hi nai aaya

Pari: try kar rahi hu dadi, mishti bhi wait kark so gai pata isne kuch khaya bhi nai

Ansh: Ruhaan bhai

Suddenly Ruhaan entered and his eyes fell on mishti sleeping. He knew she slept waiting for him whole night

His eyes were red as if he cried all night

Everyone gathered around him but he looked down ignored everyones question and went hurridly towards him room. Before closing the door ,he saw Mishti like he needed her

Thump!

Mishti( woke up hurridly) : Ruhaan

Dadi Ruhaan

Radhika: Abhi aaya hai, kamare mein gaya hai

She didnt listen and went straight towards his Room

She kept contiously knocking . Finally he opened the door but he didnt look Mishti in eyes

Ruhaan: baar baar knock kyu kar rahi ho

Mishti( stubborn voice) : kaha the raat bhar aur dekh kyu nai rahe meri taraf

Ruhaan:.kaam mein phas gaya tha

Mishti knew he was lying

She turned Ruhaan towards her

Mishti: jhoot bol rahe ho na tumhe pata hai tum mujhese jhoot nai bol sakte

Ruhaan( holds mishti angrily) : kyu fark padhta hai tumhe, biwi ho meri jisse sab batana hai jao yaha se

Mishti looked into his eyes intensely as if she was trying to read what was going inside him

There was silence for 15 minutes

Finally Mishti tightly hugged Ruhaan

She had tears in her eyes

Mishti: plz dont Ruhaan , apne andar itna dard mat rakho, meine rakha tha itne saal bikhar jata hai insaan, behne do aanson

Ruhaan started crying holding mishti

He fell down on floor on his knees

Ruhaan: ( crying) she forgot me, mishti meri mom mujhe bhul gai, i lost my mom mishti, my mom mishti

It hurts, it hurts that she doesnt even know i exist

Mishti hugged Ruhaan and herself starts crying

Mishti:( crying) i know Ruhaan, i know how it feels mujhe pata hai kaisa lagta hai jab apke parents ko aap chahiya hi nai. My father didnt wanted me, he didnt even know i exist , he was more happy to know that my mom lied about pregnancy. When i came to know , i questioned my existence,i felt like killing myself

I can understand how you

She cupped his cheek and looks into his eyes

But you have to fight with it for me for your mom for yourself. We are in this together

Mishti didnt know what it was was it their proximity, was it the moment

. Her emotions took over

She leaned Nd started planting kisses

First she kissed his one eye, then another eye as if she wanted to take tears away, then she kissed his forehead, then his right cheek , then his left . Ruhaan didnt know how to react all he knew was he always wished to be touched by this women

Finally mishti kissed him on his lips

Ruhaan kissed her back with equal intensity

Finally the emotions which were wanting to be named found its name

That moment both felt peace , a peace where no matter what happens, they will always be together

Their true love was registered and sealed with kiss

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pranurosid

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Posted: 6 years ago

#55

Awesome update dear..It was so gd..The final scene was so emotional and intense❤️

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

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Posted: 6 years ago

#56

Aweee...this two are love..nd u r tooo good my dear..keeep writing...

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Jasmine

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Posted: 6 years ago

#57

Mishti fighting with ruhaan bcz of jealousy n ruhaan telling her that she wants him to flirt only with her n mishti snatching icecream from him as a punishment was cute.mishti's surprise to him was unbelievable.u showed his painful past which was never revealed in the show.how mishti united the mother n son making them celebrate mom's b'day n the effort she took to make his mom not 4get him was lovely.hug out of gratitude was lovely

Ruhaan was so frustrated as his mom 4got him.how mishti consoled him n gave him courage to fight 4 his mom was emotional.mishti telling him not to keep pain inside n shed tears as she also did so 4 a long time n ruhaan breaking down into tears was emotional.kisses were emotional n passionate.