MAULI SS(previously os) Part three updated

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sitting in the balcony with a cup of hot coffee and sipping it Mauli is just going through a retrospect of her life.Not complete life -to be precise she is just thinking about the padav.kunal's words left her in deep thoughts.This is time for a decision.A big one and life changing oneothat too.She knew what she need to do.There is no looking back.As the last drop of coffee entered her throat ,she is ready for the battle she need to take over now.


After three hours,in the hall everyone --kunal,Nandini,Dida,Mauli's family and Radhika are present.Only with one thought in their minds-why Mauli asked to meet them all here!Kunal is being his nasty self thinking that Mauli might beg his forgiveness for hurting Nandini and making her leave hm and the entire kidnap drama! Nandini is teary and shivering and as usual thinking that Mauli might not understand her juzzbat .Dida is lost she is afraid ofthe outcome of Mauli's call for this meeting.Radhika is regretting her words which she spoke to mauli- to give a chance to Kunal.While everyone is in their own thoughts,there comes the girl whose heart is broken with a smile on her face towards them.

Mauli started speaking,thanks everyone for coming here.I know you might be wondering why I called you all here said she looking sharply at Kunal and Nandini who shivered under her gaze.I just wanted to make few things clear.First of all I want to speak to my parents uttered she looking at her parents.to be co tinued
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Posted: 6 years ago
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awww i can't wait to read more!
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Waiting for her answer
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 2
Mauli just looked with tears towards her parents,true that their relationship is not the best but they are the people who did something for her selflessly at some time in her life.she thanked them ,her parents just lookedconfused.she continued with her words.I am what I am because of you guys.And today am taking a decision which will impact you people too .Mauli's mother tried to interrupt her daughter but one look from Mauli and she could not.The pleading look on Mauli's face pained her parents.At the moment,they realised that this is their daughter's life and they need to just think about her only and it reflected on their faces.Mauli is also surprised with all the silent acknowledgement and approval from her parents.This gave her all the more confidence."Dida"with Mauli's call,Dida just looked at her with regret and tears.Mauli's heart pained to see her like that but this has to be done she thought .she spoke"I knew you love me as much as you love kunal but I was just wondering if you would have asked Kunal to give a chance to our marriage had I been the one who was cheating"
Edited by Laddoo143 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi , am new here.just posted two parts of my story and they are my first ever posts in this forum.I don't know much about the forum so kindly ignore any mistakes.Updating from my mobile so not proof reading much
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Superb...
Amazing...
Loved it...
Pls update soon...
Cant wait for next update...
N last line is killer... Superb...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Here comes the part 3
With Mauli's question everyone became silent and time just stopped for them.There is only question in everyone's mind" is this Mauli??"

Dida just lowered her eyes and said " sorry!".Mauli is feeling bad for her Dida but she has to show her infact everyone the reality of her Marriage.As the atmosphere is silent,Like always,to disturb and to create havoc Kunal started shouting."How dare you speak to my Dida like that?" Startling everyone,Mauli broke into laughter."This man😆" she thought!Before anyone could say anything,Dida looked at kunal and said"woh meri poti hein,HAQ HEIN USKA,TUM KAUN HO BEECH MEIN BOLNE VAALA?"Kunal just remained silent but with a scowl on his face.Dida signalled Mauli to come towards her and with tears in her eyes and trembling voice she just said " Meri Mauli kabhi galat nahi karegi kuch logn ki jesi toh woh naubhat hi nahi aatha Mauli".MAuli just hugged Dida,she is feeling very happy.Finally her decision will be accepted by her loved ones and they will understand that.Breaking her thoughts,dida just asked her to go ahead and she is with her.As if understanding and accepting everything Radhika moved towards Mauli and looking with disgust towards Kunal started speaking " Aaj meri Beti ki faisla sab ko maanna padega!".True Kunal is her son,But before becoming a mother she is a woman and she just needs to take right steps rather than being inclined towards her son and societal views.

With only two people - Kunal And Nandini ,remaining to speak,Mauli felt so uneasy.They are her Betrayers.Several thoughts are running in her mind,Will she able to deal face to face with those faces which left her in deep agony.A pat on her shoulder broke her trance and she just turned towards the source and there stood her family and her mother with her hand on mauli's shoulder and everyone just told her to go ahead.

Feeling confident,Mauli just looked at Nandini and started speaking " Nandini" .Nandini is trembling ,and tears are spilling from her eyes.Before Mauli could speak Nadini started crying and blabbering " Humme maaf kardo Mauli,Hum tumme chot nahi pahunchna chathe!"Mauli,surprising Nandini,Just gave her water and asked her to cool down and listen.With Nandini gaining her composure back,Mauli started,"Nandini,I need to talk to you,But how even I don't know!Should I speak to you as the wife of the man with whom you are having affair with or should I speak to you as your friend?!!"
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Superb..
Cant wait to read more

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