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For @Arshi_Asya, you didn't like the small one I posted so here you go, it's just a ridiculous attempt, if you are laughing, don't tell me that you are... Thanks
Kunal In Prison Cell
Kunal is sitting in a prison cell, everything is dark, he has been coughing nonstop for hours now, doctor A (Bear with me) is running unusually late, he is a reflection of what Kunal wanted to be, what he wanted to do before his demon won and he cheated on his lovely wife, he would turn everything back, if he gets one chance but no matter what he gives up, he won't get her back or get his life back.
Dr. A
He comes to the prison medical camp for check up of prisoners, he has been lending his time to treat them for free, it's his wedding anniversary but when he was all set to woo his wife he gets a call that one of the prisoner's health has taken turn for the worse, he leaves his wife a quick kiss and promises her that he'll be back in no time and they can leave for the trip they have planned
He sees a patient, a fellow doctor fallen in hard times, his blood report says that he's suffering from Tuberculosis and there is no way to save him, his lungs are almost gone, this is what he hates, he always wanted to be the savior but not being able to save this man kills him, then his phone rings and he sees the name, it's his wife, his life has shifted from clouds of gloom to rain of happiness, he picks up the phone, asks her to pick him up from the camp.
Kunal -
Kunal sees Dr. A talking to his wife and he thinks about Mauli, Mauli, the ray of sunshine, Mauli who's so far away, Mauli, who supported him in everything, Mauli, who was his lifeline, Mauli, a woman he broke. Mauli, whose voice is ringing in his ears, Mauli, who is standing in front of him.
Mauli -
This is not fair, it's her wedding anniversary and the person she wants with her is asking her to pick him up from the prison, what kind of a husband asks his wife to meet him in the prison? Her Husband, she answers herself, she smiles as she gets out of her car, she is taken to the camp, where her husband is standing, her husband, it has a nice ring to it, nothing falters her smile when she sees him, he looks up at her and smiles back, she runs and hugs him, it has been a few minutes and feels like years. She has been through a messy wedding and now when she looks back she thinks everything was worth it, only if she had known the happiness could be like this, she wouldn't have cried a single tear.
Kunal -
He sees Mauli hugging Dr A, his Mauli is in embrace of another man, his Mauli, who is not his anymore...
I didn't really intend to hurt anyone's sentiments although I don't understand how can this hurt some people
Kunal In Prison Cell
Kunal is sitting in a prison cell, everything is dark, he has been coughing nonstop for hours now, doctor A (Bear with me) is running unusually late, he is a reflection of what Kunal wanted to be, what he wanted to do before his demon won and he cheated on his lovely wife, he would turn everything back, if he gets one chance but no matter what he gives up, he won't get her back or get his life back.
Dr. A
He comes to the prison medical camp for check up of prisoners, he has been lending his time to treat them for free, it's his wedding anniversary but when he was all set to woo his wife he gets a call that one of the prisoner's health has taken turn for the worse, he leaves his wife a quick kiss and promises her that he'll be back in no time and they can leave for the trip they have planned
He sees a patient, a fellow doctor fallen in hard times, his blood report says that he's suffering from Tuberculosis and there is no way to save him, his lungs are almost gone, this is what he hates, he always wanted to be the savior but not being able to save this man kills him, then his phone rings and he sees the name, it's his wife, his life has shifted from clouds of gloom to rain of happiness, he picks up the phone, asks her to pick him up from the camp.
Kunal -
Kunal sees Dr. A talking to his wife and he thinks about Mauli, Mauli, the ray of sunshine, Mauli who's so far away, Mauli, who supported him in everything, Mauli, who was his lifeline, Mauli, a woman he broke. Mauli, whose voice is ringing in his ears, Mauli, who is standing in front of him.
Mauli -
This is not fair, it's her wedding anniversary and the person she wants with her is asking her to pick him up from the prison, what kind of a husband asks his wife to meet him in the prison? Her Husband, she answers herself, she smiles as she gets out of her car, she is taken to the camp, where her husband is standing, her husband, it has a nice ring to it, nothing falters her smile when she sees him, he looks up at her and smiles back, she runs and hugs him, it has been a few minutes and feels like years. She has been through a messy wedding and now when she looks back she thinks everything was worth it, only if she had known the happiness could be like this, she wouldn't have cried a single tear.
Kunal -
He sees Mauli hugging Dr A, his Mauli is in embrace of another man, his Mauli, who is not his anymore...
I didn't really intend to hurt anyone's sentiments although I don't understand how can this hurt some people
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